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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

😲 😲 Really? 😲 you're the sweetest! I'm going to go check. Meanwhile, you are going to go to sleep madam. it's already around 1 and you have classes tomorrow. Order maan lo 😛

Are shock ma ho I get crazy at may times..

Acha baba order man liye wil go to sleep..

And haan have vacs from 15th-21st tab i'll be free😆

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: asmaju
res
wil unres in morning..now gonna sleep...

Sorry dear..

unres

Sorry could not wait...

Actually urs works make me go crazy.. aww thank you !!!
Is achan ki mai so nahi pati felt better pad le..And he read it.. Haha voh bhi hai.. if I love reading something. like a novel, I'm the same.. can't go to sleep till I satisfy myself with reading it 😛

Superb intro.. Thanks!!

Khushi dear u changing style kya.. Haha, not really.. Just kept some dialogues in Hindi here and like you said below.. kept it minimal cuz of it being prologue.. But I agree, this was probably not as hatke as Sajda or IJD...

Sorrry but Sadja,IJD ka effect nahi aaya is mai..

Shayad u kept cliff hangers to minimal in prologue...

KD love his attitude..Toug guys..Perfect one to reply back to Kia's mom.. LOL yup, only he can reply back to her 😆

And moti's way of eaking up nono.She knows all his weekness nah😳 Oh yeah ! Moti knows her nonu very well .

Wonderful update.. Thanks.

Thanks for pm..
P.S:Bhulo mat we reply together and I love doing it..Agar Casper nahi tho mujhe bhul mat jao.I'm available here dear.. Hehe I know. Will never forget that. But sirf 5-6 comments the so I didn't pm you... From this time on, we'll do it together here as well 😃 This will be the last comment I reply to 😳 And Casper kaisi hai? I haven't talked to anyone...

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Araina

@-Araina-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha
Unfortunately Yes ! Eary Morning !

Uffo ? These Classes :(

Chal accha..Good Night =)

Yup, around 1. I have India's time memorized 😆

Classes... mines will start in a week's time ;(

Good night 🤗

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: asmaju

Are shock ma ho I get crazy at may times..

Acha baba order man liye wil go to sleep..

And haan have vacs from 15th-21st tab i'll be free😆

Haha will keep in mind.

Yup, good night ji 🤗

Oh really? Great! Last days of my vacations... Matlab kal you'll be free right? Come on Sajda 😉 Casper's been waiting for an update since ages. Thinking ki aab de hi du 😃

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Yayy!! Shazie, you liked 😃 😛

Okies, me leaving. Will check the further comments later on 😳

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Sure kal Sadja deal...Even i want to read it...

gud nit..tc...

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Okies see you there. GN sd 🤗

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

aha! Seems interesting! Mrs. Gujral already met KD. But what was KD doing there anyway? Oh well, mujhe kya? Can't say much since it was only the intro. Will give a detailed comment after you update a real chapter! :D

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Duh huh!

Khushi ( I have sudden tendency to call you Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada , 😆) you are asking an absolutely reading crazed soul whether I will continue reading...

Lady, you can count on me.

Now coming to your work!

The CS was interesting, only slight changes here and there, else the very same nine people.

Prologue!

Mrs. Gujral met KD already and he left her confused...

Just like KD to help and just like him to have the least regard for the rich.

Poor Kiya, when will her mother realize her true worth...

RaHi...my cutie pies...

Good one dear!👏

Waiting for the next installment Khushi😊

❤️

Nidha

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nashat

@sweetnas

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

first thnxx for the pm..😊
then meine aaj tak tumhara koi ff padha toh nahi hai but must say u writee veryy well!!!👏 👍🏼
the CS n the Prologue were awesome...
just love it it ws amazing!!!!
specially kd's attitude n rahi!! <3
update soon n plzzz pm me!..😛

Edited by sweetnas - 13 years ago

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