FF:'Teri Meri Love Story'(Last Part updated Pg19)23May2018 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Kar_Nan

Just read last 2 parts. And yes Thapki has for sure lost her memory. Kab aur kaisay ab yeh dekhna baki hai. Story achi hai. Plz yahan pe b update dete rehna

thank u soo much for your commnt

Part17



Fb Continue

Bihaan: kya hua usey q mujhe pehchaan nhi rahi

Guruma:joh hadsa yaha 3 months pehle hua tha usme humare group ki bhi kuch ladkiya ghayal hui thi aur vaneeta jise tum thapki keh rahe ho usey doctor aur police ki galatfehmi k wajh se humare saath behoshi k halat me ambulance me bhej diya aur jaldbazi me humne bhi chehra nhi dekha usey koi aur samjhkr saath le gaye mathura jane k baad hume pata chala k ye humare group ki nhi hai aur jb isey hosh aaya toh ye khud k baare me kuch nhi janti thi yaha tk k apna naam bhi nhi aur doctor ne bataya k iski yaadasht jaa chuki hai pr ye bhi batya k issey sb yaad aa sakta hai agar koi usey sb yaad dilaye toh,humne iske pariwaar ko dhoodhne ki bahut koshish ki hum kai baar agra aaye aur police me complant bhi ki pr kuch pata nhi chala aur na hi iske pass kuch saman tha jisase kuch pata chal sake isiliye main jaanbujhkr inn sbko yaha phir se laayi taki koi toh isey dhoodhte huey yaha aayega aur dekho tum aa gaye

B:iska matlb hum sahi they ye humari thapki hai humari thapki ko kuch nhi hua(bihaan bahut khush hota hai)

G:haa aur tumse milker tumhare saath rehkr shayad usey sb yaad aa jayega

B:haa woh toh hai pr kaise woh toh humse naaraj hai baat bhi nhi karegi kuch kehne jayege bhi toh sunegi nhi nhi

G:mere pass ek idea hai (aur guruma bihaan ko kuch batati hai jisey sun bihaan khush hota hai)

Fb end

Present time Rehersal room

B:(in mind)thapki joh script tum pad rahi ho woh humari kahani hum dono ki kahani hai aur iss play k wajh se dekhna tumhe sb yaad aajayega


Rehersal acche se chal rahi hai vaneeta ko baar baar ye ehsaas hota hai k jaise woh ye sb khud aankho se dekh chuki hai aur woh ek koune me beth jaati hai ye dekh gouri uske paas aati hai


G:kya hua tujhe

V:pata nhi q pr mujhe ye sb real hote huey dikh raha jaise ye sb main dekh chuki hu

G:arey tune story padi hai n toh jb hum koi story padte hai toh usey imagin karne lagte hai bs aur kuch nhi jyada mt soch

V:shayad tu sach keh rahi hai main kuch jyada soch rahi hu

G:waise humne play ka naam toh socha nhi aur naa hi lesd character k naam iss story me hai

V:usise pooch jisne script di hai wahi batayega k leads k naam q nhi diye hai

G:ok abhi poochti hu

Gauri bihaan k paas jati hai woh bhi wahi unke saath hai room me

G:hello tumne lead chrcter k naam nhi bataye bhale hi ye musical play hai pr kuch jagah toh Dilogue hoge toh naam toh batao

B:thapki nd bihaan

V:kya iska kya matlb hai
(vaneeta bhi waha aa jaati hai)

B:tumne naam pooche maine bata diye aur kya

V:pr ye toh tumhara naam hai aur thapki yaad aaya ye toh tumhari patni ka naam hai n iska matlb

B:iska matlb ye k ye meri aur thapki ki story hai

V:toh hum tumhary lovestory pr play karenge humari majboori ka fayda utha rahe ho tum jante ho hum yaha jeetne aaye hai aise hi koi bhi story nhi play karenge

B:jb tk tumhe nhi pata tha k ye humari lovestory tb tk toh tumhe acchi lagi aur ab tumhe ye aisi waisi story lag rahi hai ,dekho tumhe humari help chahiye thi humne ki ab tumhari marzi hai script chahiye toh lo warna

G:nhi sorry iski baato pr dhyaan mt do ye toh aise hi

V:gouri (gussey se)

G:vaneeta bs kr script bahut acchi hai ye tu bhi jaanti hai aur hum naam bhi yahi rakhege thapki bihaan thik hai

B:mujhe koi problm nhi hai

G:pr play ka naam kya hoga

B:(bihaan vaneeta ko dekhte huey)teri meri lovestory

V:(gussey se)chal ab yaha se gauri

G:ok chal

Time aise hi gujarta hai vaneeta bihaan ki nokjok aise hi chalti hai bt inn kuch dino me bihaan ka helpful nature dekh vaneeta ko bihaan pasand aane lagta hai aur bihaan bhi baar baar vaneeta k aaspaas rehne ki aur har woh harkat karta hai jisase usey sb yaad aa jaye aur ek din

V:hi

B:tum mujhse

V:haa

B:hi

V:pata hai tumne mujhse poocha tha dosti k liye aur maine mana kr diya tha aaj main poochti hu kya tum mere dost banoge

B:tum thik ho yaa kuch galat khakr aayee ho

V:please main majak nhi kr rahi

B:hum toh pehle se hi tumse dosti krna chahte the toh humari tarf s haa hai

V:(apna haath aage badate huey)friends

B:friends(aur dono handshek karte hai)

Dono bahut acche dost banjate hai bt vaneeta k mann me kuch aur hi hai woh bihaan se pyaar karne lagi hai jiska woh bhi yakeen nhi kr paa rahi k in kuch dino me hi kaise usey bihaan se pyaar ho gaya aur idhar bihaan vaneeta k behavior se khush hai q k ab woh uske saath baat krti uske pass rehti hai

night me apne room me vaneeta gauri

(vaneeta notebook me kuch likh rahi hai aur khud se baat kr rahi hai)

V:vaneeta+bihaan=vahaan humara naam saath me kitna accha lagta hai

G:kya kr rahi hai

V:(notebook chupakr)kuch nhi bs aise hi bs play k baare me soch rahi thi

G:haa waise vaneeta bihaan kitna accha hai n

V:haa

G:aur kitna Handsom bhi

V:(blush krte huey)haa

G:phir bhi uski wife usey chorke q chali gai bechara kitna pyaar krta hai har waqt uske baare me baate karta hai kai baar toh maine usey rote huey bhi dekha hai thapki ki pic dekhte huey woh bahut pyaar karta hai thapki se

Ye sunte hi maano vaneeta k pero se zameen khisak gayee aur reality uske samne thi k bihaan thapki se pyaar karta hai aur thapki se usaki shaadi ho chuki hai

V:(hurt)main aati hu mera kuch saman rehersal room me hai

Gauri:ok

Rehersal room me

Vaneeta bahut roti hai aur music on kr dance karne lagti hai dance k Thrue apna dard bhoolna chahti hai dance karte huey bihaan k baare me soch rahi hai aur turn lete huey usey chakker aane lagte hai woh girne wali hoti hai k woh kisise takra jati hai aur us shaks ko vaneeta gauri samjh hug karti hai aankhe khol dekhti hai toh bihaan hai joh usey hug kar raha hai

V:(alag hoker)tum yaha kya

B:(chup karte huey)shhh bs karo ab jante hai hum k pyaar karti ho tum humse

V:bihaan tum ye kya keh rahe ho

B:nhi karti khao humari kasam k pyaar nhi karti humse

V:(chilate aur rotey huey)haa karti hu pyaar bahut pyaar karti hu aur ye bhi jaanti hu k tum mujhse pyaar nhi karte

B:(confession sunte hi vaneeta ko hug karta hai)hum bhi bahut pyaar karte hai tumse nhi jee sakte tumhare bina

V:pr bihaan tum toh

B:nhi ab aur kuch nhi (aur bihaan kiss karne aage badta hai dono bahut nazdik hai)

V:(ye galat hai pr pata nhi mera dil nhi manta k ye galat hai )aur dono kiss karte hai

(dono kiss karne k baad smile karte hai bt vaneeta ko ehsaas hota hai k bihaan nashe me hai aur vaneeta kuch samjh paye bihaan usey hug karta hai)

B:i love u

(vaneeta khush ho jaati hai)

B:hum tumse bahut pyaar karte hai thapki nhi jee sakte tumhare bina ab hume kabhi chorke mt jana

Thapki ka naam sunte hi vaneeta alag hoti hai usey ehsaas hota k usne galati ki bihaan usey thapki maan raha hai aur bihaan se bina aanke milaye chali jati hai bihaan kuch samjh nhi pata k kya hua


Precape:final play


To be continued...

Ok guys please commnt nd like if u like it
Aur jinhone bhi like aur commnt kiye thank u aur mistek ho toh sorry

She is really Thapki. Even she is surprised how she felt in love so quick. Thapki will feel that what she has done was wrong.

Ok now bihaan know she is thapki and want to return her memory back. It is that thapki unknownighly fall in love with bihaan and i hope she will regain her memory &reunite with bihaan.

chapter 18
Ok maine poori koshish ki hai play likhne ki pr shayad thik se nhi likh payee dance seq me maine dance move nhi likhe please apne hisaab se imagine kr lena pr unki feelings likhi hai toh please koi bhi part song skip mt karna aur bina padhe update kr rahi hu toh koi mistek ho toh sorry

Recape:vahaan love confession nd vaneeta ki galatfehmi

Present time(room me)

Vaneeta ko khud pr bahut gussa aata hai k akhir q woh bihaan k samne kamjor padh gai aur usne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya aur usey kiss kiya jbke bihaan toh usey thapki maan raha hai woh mujhse nhi balki iss chehre se pyaar karta hai joh thapki ka hai woh aaj bhi sirf thapki ko chahta hai aur iss liye woh khud se wada karti hai k woh bihaan ko bhul jayegi aur ab usase doori banayegi jb tk play nhi ho jata

Next day

Sb play k liye taiyaar hai kuch hi time baad play hone wala hai aur bihaan ye sochkr khush hai k memoryloss hone k baad bhi thapki usase pyaar karti hai aur iss play ko karte huey shayad usey sb yaad aa jaye pr woh ye sochkr bhi pareshaan hai k ab tk usey kuch bhi yaad q nhi aaya hai jbke usne humari yaadon ko iss play ki practice karte huey jiya hai pr phir bhi woh confident hai k final play me usey sb yaad aajaye

Tabhi waha ek ladka aata hai vaneeta usey dekh bahut khush hoti hai aur usey hug karti hai ye dekh bihaan ko accha nhi lagta aur woh gauri se poochata hai

B:ye ladka koun hai

G:ye arrrey ye toh kabir hai vaneeta ka

Gouri k bolne se pehle vaneeta aati hai aur sentance complete karti hai

V:mera mangetar

Ye sun sb shock me bihaan gouri aur kabeer

Aur bihaan waha se angry look dekar chala jata hai

Kabeer:ye kya hai vaneeta tumne aisa q kaha

V:tumhe mujhpr bharosa hai n

K:haa pr

V:toh phir please mujhse koi sawal mt poocho (aur itna khekr vaneeta chali jati hai)

Yaha bihaan akele khud se baat karte huey

B:q thapki q kr rahi ho aisa mujhe toh laga tumhe sb yaad aa raha hai aur tum toh mujhse pyaar karti ho kl hi tumne kaha bhale tumhe kuch yaad nhi aaya hai phir bhi tum toh mujhse pyaar karti ho phir achanak kya hua,mujhe abhi usasey baat karni hogi
(woh waha chala jata hai)

B:thapki mujhe tumse baat karni hai

V:koun thapki ohh accha apne character me ho waise abhi hum reharsal nhi kr rahe hai aur main thapki nhi hu vaneeta hu

B:(angry)haa vaneeta ye kabeer koun hai

V:bataya toh mera mangetar hai

Bihaan usey shoulder se pakadkrta hai

B:mangetar ye sb kya hai tum toh mujhse pyaar karti ho

V:maine kb kaha k main tumse pyaar karti hu

B:lagta hai tumhari yaaddasht poori jaa chuki hai kl raat tumne mujhse kaha nashe me hotey huey bhi mujhe sb yaad hai aur tum bhool gai

V:accha woh kya tumhe yaad nhi hum reharsal room me the aur me play ki reharsal kr rahi thi aur tum aa gaye toh humare play ka scene hi kiya maine woh toh tumhari script me hai dekho

bihaan shock me aur usey vaneeta ki baat pr yakeen nhi ho raha

B:accha woh reharsal thi toh woh joh humdono k beech hua woh kya tha woh tph script ka hissa nhi tha

V:dekho woh main nhi chahti thi tumne force kiya

B:humne tumse koi zabardasti nhi ki thi

V:dekho bihaan joh ho gaya so ho gaya mujhe us baare koi baat nhi karni hai aur kuch der me play hai aur iske baad hum kabhi milenge bhi nhi

B:(teary eyes)tum sach me humse pyaar nhi karti

Ye dekh vaneeta k aankon me bhi aansu aate hai pr woh chupati hai

V:nhi main tumse pyaar nhi karti

Aur bihaan usey chorke waha se rotey huey chala jata hai aur yaha vaneeta usey aisa dekh rone lagti hai

V:(note:vaneeta ko yaad nhi k woh thapki hai aur woh khud ko thapki se alag manti hai q k uske liye uski pehchan vaneeta hai)sorry bihaan pr main tumhari zindagi me thapki bankr nhi vaneeta bankr aana chahti hu main nhi chahti k tum mujhse nhi balke mere chehre se pyaar karo main aur k saye me rehkr tumhara pyaar nhi chahti hai

Bihaan bahut rota hai aur phir sb ready hote hai play k liye bihaan ko ab bhi yakeen hai k thapki ko sb yaad aajayega aur sb thik ho jayega

Play start hota hai
First scene

Thahaan friendship

Joh unki dosti jb thapki bihaan ek dusre se ladte jhagdte the pr phir bhi ek dusare k binaa nhi reh sakte

Dance seq

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein
Ulti pulti baatein
Seedhi lagti hai

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein
Dushman ke iraade
Sacche lagtein hain
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Jo Dil mein taare vaare de jaga
Woh tu hi hai,Tu hi hai

Jo roote roote de hasa
Tu hi hai wohi

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Saari duniya Ek taraf hai
Ek taraf hai hum

Har Khushi to door bhage
Mil rahein hai gum

But when u smile for me
World seems all right

Yeh meri zindagi
Pal mein khil jaaye
Jaane kyun

Jaane kyun Dil jaanta hai
Tu hai to
I'll be all right

Note:Bihaan vaneeta sad hai aaj joh kuch hua pr play me acche se acting karte hai aur bihaan k liye ye zaroori hai k thapki ko sb yaad aaye toh woh poori tarah se wahi poorana hasta khelta bihaan ban jata hai joh har baat me thapki ko chedta rehta tha

Second seq

Ye jb thapki apni feelings khud se share karti hai(chp2)

Dance seq

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Ho ho...
(vaneeta poori apni feelings k saath dance karti hai woh pyaar joh bihaan se karti hai uske pov se woh thapki nhi vaneeta hai aur yaha woh apni feelings share kr rahi hai)

Third dance seq

Bihaan love Realisation scene

(bihaan thapki dance karte hai)
Jane Tu Meri Kay Hai, Jane Tu Meri Kay Tha
Sath Tere Har Pal, Sath Har Lahmaha Tha
Jane Kaisi Kasak Hai, Jane Kaisi Tadap Hai, Kinyu Ye Anke Namm Hai, Jane Kaisa Gam Hai

Hai Dosti Humko Yankeen To Dosti Aur Kuch Bhi Nahi Tha
Par Kaise Tujko Bole Kinyu Chubathe Hai Pairome Kate

Jana Dil Jana Kaise Manine Na Jana Ki Pyar Yahi Hai Ye Jane Tu Na Janena
Jana Dil Jana Kaise Tune Na Jana Ki Pyar To Hai Ye Jana Tu Na Janena

(bihaan ki aankhon me dard hai joh vaneeta dekh paa rahi hai dance karte huey usey aisa ehsaas hota hai mano ye sb bihaan usi k liye keh raha hai ye saari feelings bihaan ki uske liye hai )

Jane Tu Mer Kya Hai , Jane main tera Kya Tha
Sath Tere Har Pal, Sath Har Lamaha Tha

Kinyu Aise Chubati Hai Tujse Doori Kinyu Lagti Hai Jindagi Yu Adhuri
Chuha Kisi Ne Tujko To Laga Ki Dil Me Kisi Ne Aag Lagake Dunyi Jala Di Hai Meri

(vahaan ko unke saath bitaye saare pal yaad aate hai jb woh usey cofession k baad rotey huey bhaag jaati hai,jb woh kabeer se bihaan ko milati hai,jb bihaan ko vaneeta bihaan ko kehti hai k woh usase pyaar nhi karti)

Jane Tu Meri Kay Hai, Jane Tu Meri Kay Tha
Sath Tere Har Pal, Sath Har Lahmaha Tha
Jane Kaisi Kasak Hai, Jane Kaisi Tadap Hai, Kinyu Ye Ankhe Namm Hai, Jane Kaisa Gam Hai
Jana Dil Jana Kaise Manine Na Jana Ki Ye Pyar Yahi Hi Hai Ye Jana Tu Ye Janena

Jana Dil Jana Kaise Tune Na Jana Ye Pyar Hi Hai Han Ye Jana Tu Ye Janana
(dance khtm hota hai next song ki taiyaari)

Thahaan love confession scene

B:bolo thapki pyaar karti ho n humse

V:haa bihaan bahut pyaar karti hu bihaan bahut pyaar karti hu

(bihaan in mind:thapki hume lagta hai k tumhe sb yaad aa jayega aur agar nhi bhi toh bhi hume tumhari aankho me apne liye pyaar nazar aata hai pr q tum manane se inkaar kr rahi ho hum nhi jante pr hume apne pyaar pr poora yakeen hai tum humaari zindagi me wapas aaogi)

Dance seq

Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho,
ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho,
ya kehna sunana mana hain

Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho,
ya dono hoke bhi na hain

Tumhein dekhke yaad aayi,
wohi bisari kahaani
Deewane ka kissa,
ya phir ek deewaani
Dono sang sang rehte har dum,
aisa yeh mene suna hai

(dono ek dusare ki ankoh me dekh dance kr rahe hai bihaan apne pyaar ko paane k liye aur vaneeta aakhri baar bihaan k saath kuch pyaar bhare lamhe bitane k liye)

Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho,
ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho,
ya kehna sunana mana hain

Ishq hua

TuTum bata do yaad koi,
kya puraani leke aau
Ya nishaani deti jau,
ya kahaani leke jau

(bihaan thahaan ki yaado ko yaad karta hai aur sochta hai sb phir wisa hi ho jaye,vaneeta bihaan se judi apni saari yaado ko yaad karti hai aur kahi kahi usey ye ehsaas bhi hota hai k bihaan se uski pehchaan aaj ki nahi balki humesha se hai)

Ya ki maan chhod doon jaaye,
yeh jaata, jaata jahaan hai

Is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho,
ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho,
ya kehna sunana mana hain
Is pal main hoon

Inn sbme vaneeta ko kuch yaad aata hai kuch flashes dikhte hai jaise ye sb usne jiya hai aur usey chakker aane lagte hai pr bihaan usey sambhalta hai

Aur play end hota hai

B:vaneeta tum thik ho

V:haa bihaan maine abhi joh kiya woh aisa laga jaise (boltey ruk jaati hai aur gauri ki baat usey yaad aati hai k woh ye sb imagin kr rahi hai aur kuch nhi)

B:haa bolo jaise

V:yahi k maine sb thik kiya ya nhi

B:kya yahi kehna tha tumhe aur kuch mehsoos nhi hua

V:kya humara play ho gaya aur maine shayad thik hi kiya bs aur kuch nhi

Bihaan bahut jyada dukhi hota k thapki ab bhi kuch yaad nhi aaya aur ab toh yaha se chali bhi jayegi woh usey kis tarha apne pass roke k woh usey sb yaad dila sake

V:thik hai main chalti hu hume packing bhi karni q k kl hi hum sb jaa rahe hai

Bihaan sad ho jata hai

Precape:thapki kabeer k saath chali jaati hai aur bihaan wahi kuch nhi kr pata


Ok kaisa laga please like nd commnt aur jinhone ab tk like aur commnt kiye hai unhe dil se thank u

Originally posted by: Toulup

She is really Thapki. Even she is surprised how she felt in love so quick. Thapki will feel that what she has done was wrong.

She will remember everything in the final play I think.

Waiting for next chapter.

thank u for commnt aur story me thoda change hai abhi itne jaldi usey kuch yaad nhi aayega thoda sa intezar karlo may be next 1 or 2 updates me yaad aa ajaaye

Originally posted by: aditii

Ok now bihaan know she is thapki and want to return her memory back. It is that thapki unknownighly fall in love with bihaan and i hope she will regain her memory &reunite with bihaan.

Nice update

thank u soo much for commnt haa bihaan poori koshish kr raha hai sb yaad dilane ki bt dekhte hai kb kamyab hota hai please support me like this thank u

Why didn't Vaneeta remember her past? But she can connect with the story which is a good thing.

Cant wait long like bihaan when thapki will regain memory.

Wao its a great story and concept i just loved it read all parts pls pm me once you update please