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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter19




Recape:kabeer ki entry vaneeta urf thapki bihaan se kehti hai k kabeer uska mangetar hai aur vahaan ki emotional fight


Ok lets start

Night
Vahaan apne apne room me hai

Vaneeta in mind
Kal main yaha se humesha k liye chali jaungi pr aisa lag raha hai apna sbkuch yahi chorke jaa rahi hu, q bihaan q aaye tum meri zindagi me aur aaye bhi toh q main tumhare saath nhi reh sakti aisa q hua mere saath,jaanti hu tum baar baar kehte ho k tum mujhse pyaar karte ho pr har baar mujhe yahi lagta k tum mujhse nhi is chehare se pyaar karte ho joh tumhari thapki se milta hai aur mujhe kisi aur k naam ka pyaar nhi chahiye kisi aur ki parchai me rehkar main tumhe nhi pana chahti aur isliye accha hoga k main yaha se chali jau tumse door chali jau(aur itna khete huey vaneeta roney lagti hai)

Bihaan in mind:q thapki aakhir kya ho gaya hai tumhe,maana k tumhe kuch yaad nhi pr tumhara dil humse judha hua hai tabhi toh tumhe kuch yaad na hone k bawjood tumhe humse phir se pyaar hua pr ab q maan nhi rahi aakhir kya hai joh tumhe rok raha hai please wapas chali aao ab ek pal bhi tumse door nhi reh sakte hum (bihaan bhi rota hai)



Next day morning

Sb ready hai apna saman bus me rakhte hai bihaan wahi hai vaneeta ka wait kr raha hai,vaneeta aati hai aur vahaan ka eyelock dono ek dusre se door nhi jana chahte pr phir bhi kuch nhi kr paa rahe hai
(background song)

Mana k hum yaar nhi

Vaneeta bus me jaati hai uske pehle bihaan uska haath pakrta hai

B:vaneeta humari baat suno

V:mujhe koi baat nhi karni hai pr ye khahungi thank u humari tumne itni madad ki aur tumhari wajh se hum jeetey bhi

B:tumhe thanks kehne ki zarurat nhi ye humne apne liye kiya pr abhi hum us baare baat nhi karna chahte, hame tumse zaruri baat karni hai please ek baar sunlo

V:dekho bihaan humhare beech baat karne k liye kuch nhi hai please mujhe jane do

(vaneeta apna haat churati hai aur bs me bethne jaati hai tabhi kabeer aata hai)

K:ruko hum bus me nhi humari car me jayenge

V:car me q

K:q k hum dono ko kahi aur jana hai tumhare liye Surprice hai

Ye sb bihaan dekh raha hai aur usey gussa bhi aa raha hai aur vaneeta sochti hai k agar woh kabeer k saath gai toh shayad bihaan ko yakeen ho jayega k woh uska mangetar hai aur woh bihaan se pyaar nhi karti

V:thik hai chalo

Dono nikaltey hai bihaan ko gussa bhi aa raha hai aur woh kuch kr bhi nhi paa raha bihaan waha se chala jata hai aur vaneeta hurt hoker kabeer k saath car me jaati hai


On a road

V:kabeer ye hum kaha jaa rahe hai tumne galat rout liya hai

K:hum sahi jagah jaa rahe hai maine kaha n k tumhare liye surprice hai toh bs wahi jaa rahe hai

V:kya batao n please

K:tumhe pata chal jayega

Kabeer car drive kr raha hai tabhi usey kisi ka call aata hai

K:ok thik hai main wahi pahuchta hu tum mujhe address batao
(kabeer vaneeta ko add note karne k liye kehta hai aur woh note karti hai)


Tabhi vaneeta ko rasta kuch jana pehchana lagta hai aur bina kuch soche woh kabeer ko guide karne lagti hai

V:kabeer yaha se right lo

K:ok

aur woh aise hi saara rastey usey guide karti hai

V:bs yaha roko (woh car utarti hai aur ek ghar k gate k samne hai jis pr Pandey Niwaas likha hai,vaneeta soch me padh jaati hai k woh kaise is ghar ka pata jaanti aur q isey ye jana pehchana lag raha hai tabhi kabeer aata hai

K:arrey vaneeta tumhe rasta kaise pata kya tum pehle noida aa chuki ho

V:(shock) nhi toh tumne hi toh address bataya tabhi toh hum yaha aaye

K:haa pr sirf add bataya rasta nhi hume ek baar bhi kisi se poochne ki zarurat nhi padhi maano jaise tum noida acche se jaanti ho ab chalo ander chalte hai

Vaneeta kabeer ki baato se soch me padh jaati hai woh pandey niwwas me jaati hai toh jaise uske aankho k samne jaise koi film chal rahi hai usey dhoodhle se do shaks dikh rahe hai ek ladka ek ladki U hi idhar udhar bhagte ek dusare ko chedte huey ek dusre se jhagdte huey aur ek dusare se pyaar karte huey jaise hi andar k darwaaje pr woh aati hai usey jaise uske saath koi dikhta hai chehra clear nhi pr jaise woh us shaks k saath apna grahpravesh kr rahi hai tabhi saamne se dhruv aata hai

Dhruv k aankho me aansoo hai pr woh chupa leta hai

D:hello kabeer tum aa gaye ander aao

K:dhruv ye vaneeta hai iske liye hi main woh

D:accha main samjh gaya ander aao

Vaneeta apne hi dhoon me khoi hai achanak uska sir chakrane lagta hai aur woh gir padhti hai

D:thapki, kabeer kya hua

K:ho sakta hai isey kuch yaad aa raha ho jia wajh se usey chakar aa gaye aisa hona aam baata hai

D:thik hai chalo hum isey room me jaate hai

Dhruv aur kabeer usey thahaan k room me le jaate hai aur usey bed pr letate hai
(note:kabeer doctor hai)

Kabeer thahaan ka room dekhta hai

K:dhruv ye sb

D:bihaan ne kiya hai jbse thapki chali gai thi tb se usasey judi har yaad ko usne yaha sahej kr rakha hai

K:bihaan bahut pyaar karta hai thapki se tabhi jb gurumaa ne mujhe saari sacchai batai toh maine tumse baat ki q k main agar bihaan se baat karta toh shayad usey tb samjh na pata aur ab hum dono ko milke thahaan ko ek karna hai

D:haa akhir mere bhai ki zindagi hai thapki chalo thapki ko aaram karne dete hai


Dhruv aur kabeer ne poori pandey family ko sb samjha diya hai aur sb maan bhi jaate hai vasu khush hai k aakhir thapki wapas aa gai woh milna chahti hai usey gale lagana chahti hai pr dhruv usey mana karta hai


Evening
Bihaan poori tarah tpot chuka hai woh bahut hi jyada dukhi hai k thapki uske itne pass thi phir bhi woh usey wapas naa laa saka,tabhi woh dekhta uske room se thapki ka saman hata jaa raha hai

B:(gussey me)tumse kisne kaha ye saman humare kamre se lane k liye

Nouker:saab dhruv saab ne

B:choro isey do hume wapas (thapki ki badi si photoframe hai

Bihaan apne room me jata hai dim light hai aur vaneeta ko bhi hosh aata hai aankhe kholti hai

Bihaan aata hai aur tasveer rakhta hai aur bed pr koi betha hai door se chehra clear nhi dikhta hai q k roshni km hai jaise moonlight, vaneeta bhi dekh nhi paati aur kuch react bhi nhi karti q k chehra n dekhe huey bhi usey woh sahksh apna lagta hai


Dono ek dusare k samne bed pr bethe hai aur bihaan thik se dekhta hai uski aankho ko yakeen nhi hota k thapki uske samne hai aur vaneeta ko lagta hai k woh sapna dekh rahi joh bihaan uske saamne hai,bina waqt barbaad kiye dono hug karte hai vahaan hug karte huey ro rahe hai aur bihaan ek tight hug deta hai maano thapki usey chorke na jaye woh ye bhi sochna nhi chahta k ye sapna hai yaa haqiqat bs apni thapki ko apne pass rakhna chahta hai jaise hi bihaan k aankho se gira aanso vaneeta k neck pr girta hai woh alert ho jaati hai usey ehsaas hota hai ye sapna nahi haqiqat hai aur woh bihaan ko hug kar rahi hai itne me hi bihaan se alag ho bed se uthti hai aur bihaan ko bhi hosh aata hai k ye sb sach hai thpaki yahi hai uake samne

V:main yaha kaise aai kya tumne mujhe kidnap kr liya hai

B:tum ye kya keh rahi ho hum aisa q karenge aur tumne hume samjh kya rakha hai

V:jaanti hu tum apni thapki se pyaar karte ho aur usaki shakl mujhse milti hai isliye tumne mujhe kidnap kr liya taki apni khawaishe poori kr sako

Ye sunte bihaan ko gussa aata hai

B:aakhi samjhti kya ho hume hum thapki se pyaar karte hai uski shakl yaa uski shareer se nhi joh itna ganda ilzaam laga rahi ho humpr aur tumhe kaise samjhaye hum q nhi samjhti tum k hum tumse pyaar karte hai

V:ek tarf kehte ho thapki se pyaar karte aur mujhse bhi tum jaisa insaan main aajtk nhi dekha aur chalo maan bhi jaati k logo ko dubara pyaar hota hai pr tum toh apni biwi k zinda hone pr bhi kisi aur se pyaar karne ka dawa kr rahe ho, kaho thapki toh zinda hai tumhe chorke kahi gai hai yaa phir tumhare liye woh mar gai

Ye sunte hi bihaan ko bahut gussa aata hai q k jb sbne thapki ko mara hua maan liya tha tb bhi usey yakeen tha thapki zinda aur aaj khud thapki apne mooh se khud k marne ki baat kr rahi hai

Bihaan gussey me vaneeta ko slap karne k liye haat uthata hai aur vaneeta dar jaati hai woh slap nhi karta

B:hum nhi maar sakte tumhe thik hai tumhe humare baare me joh sochna hai socho pr please humari thapki k liye kabhi aisa kuch mat bolo

Vaneeta bahut hurt hoti bihaan ki itni care dekh woh bhi thapki k liye aur usaki aankho me aansoo aate hai tabhi kabeer aur dhruv room me aate hai aur light on karte hai

K:vaneeta tumhe hosh aa gaya

D:bihaan tu kb aaya

B:bhai hum abhi aaye pr ye

D:hum baad me baat karte bihaan

V:kabeer tumne mujhe q nhi bataya k hum bihaan k ghar aa rahe hai

K:vaneeta mujhe nhi pata tha aur main toh dhruv pandey se milne aaya tha

V:toh chalo ab chalte hai

K:abhi nhi hume kuch din yaha rukna hoga ek zaruri kaam hai phir chalenge

V:kya zaruri kaam mujhe nhi rehna mujhe yaha jana hai

Bihaan ko thapki ki baate sunkr dukh hota hai

K:please vaneeta

V: thik hai

Bihaan khush hai k ab woh yaha ruk gai toh usey aur waqt mil gay sb yaad dilane k liye, wahi dhruv aur kabeer bhi khush hai pr vaneeta ko darr hai k kahi in kuch dino me bihaan k samne apna pyaar zahir n karde q k bihaan k itne pass hoker us se door rehna uske liye bahut mushqil hai



Precape:vahaan Romantic night
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Toulup

Why didn't Vaneeta remember her past? But she can connect with the story which is a good thing.

Now, waiting to know what Bihaan will do to bring Thapki's memory back. I think that Gauri will tell Bihaan that Kabir is not Vaneeta's fiance.


Ok itni jaldi usey kuch yaad nhi aayega waise abhi vahaan ki lovstory toh please enjoy karo nd trust me poori koshish karungi k bore na karu nd aaj naya part update kr diya hai nd thank u for commnt
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: aditii

Cant wait long like bihaan when thapki will regain memory.

bahut jaldi tb tk vahaan ki lovestory enjoy karo thank u for read n commnt
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: arzzo

Wao its a great story and concept i just loved it read all parts pls pm me once you update please

thank u soo much
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
This was totally unexpected. I'm happy that Thapki got a friend like Kabir who is helping her by searching for the address and bringing Thapki here.

I wonder why Vaneeta is not thinking that she might be Thapki. She does not remember anything from before.

This time everyone will try to make her remember everything.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Toulup

This was totally unexpected. I'm happy that Thapki got a friend like Kabir who is helping her by searching for the address and bringing Thapki here.

I wonder why Vaneeta is not thinking that she might be Thapki. She does not remember anything from before.

This time everyone will try to make her remember everything.

the problm is abhi tk woh thapki se khud ko relate nhi kr payee hai joh bhi usey ehsaas ho rahe hai woh koi bhi aasani se imagination maan sakta hai aur yahi woh soch rahi hai, haa kabeer thapki ka bahut accha dost hai aur ek baat ye bhi k mere FF me koi bhi negative nhi bs halat kuch aise hote hai jis wajh se sb problm me hai nd thank u for commnt 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So kabeer is doctor and helping thapki so that she remember everything. Or when she came to pandey house she recall something. Hope her memory comeback.
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Originally posted by: SnOwfay

So kabeer is doctor and helping thapki so that she remember everything. Or when she came to pandey house she recall something. Hope her memory comeback.

thank u so much aditi fpr commnt aur haa next chapter me saare doubts clear ho jayenge 😊
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Chapter20

Recape:vaneeta urf thapki nd kabeer in pandey niwaas

Let Start
Dinner time

Sabhi pandeys aate hai vaneeta bhi kabeer k saath aati hai dhruv sabhiko kabeer ka intro deta hai aur vaneeta ka bhi sb milte hai aur vaneeta dadi k per chune jaati pr dadi rok ker usase gale milti hai aur unki aankho me aansoo bhi aa jate hai same vasu bhi karti hai vaneeta ye dekh thoda ajeeb feel karti hai

Dhruv:(vaneeta se)woh kya hai humari family thodi emotional family hai har baat pr roti hai ab tum yaha ho toh jaan jaogi

Sb hastey hai,vaneeta chair pr bethti hai aur bihaan jaanbhujker uske pass bethta hai ye vaneeta ko accha nhi lagta pr ab woh uth bhi nhi sakti toh woh wahi bethti hai

Suman: bihaan deverji ye lijiye aapke parathe

B:nhi bhabhi aaj hum bhi yahi khaenge joh sabke liye hai

Sb khana start karte hai bihaan bhi start karta hai aur ek bite lete hi usey khasi aane lagti hai aankho se aansoo aane lagte hai vaneeta pareshaan hoker pani dsti hai aur uski peeth pr haat se sehlati hai

V:bihaan tum jaante ho k tum tikha nhi kha sakte phir q khate ho dekha kya halat karli apni ab panni peo jaldi

B:hume pata hai k hum teekha nhi kha sakte pr tumhe kaise pata

Vaneeta shock me q woh sach me nhi jaanti k ye baat usey kaise pata hai

Aur baad me sb dinner kr ke apne room me jaate hai

Vaneeta khud se :mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa raha hai ye kya ho raha hai mere saath q mujhe aisa lag raha k ye ghar jana pehchana hai aur ye log inhe pehle se jaanti hu aur bihaan se main pyaar karti hu pr lagta hai aaj se nhi bahut pehle se q mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa raha hai kya ho raha hai mere saath (tabhi waha kabeer aata hai)

K:kya hua vaneeta kya soch rahi ho

V:kabeer main koun hu

K:ye kaisa sawaal hai

V:matlb jab main hosh me aai thi toh jis insaan ko maine sbse pehle dekha woh tum the aur tumhi ne mujhe bataya tha k mera naam vaneeta hai,pr q ye pehchaan mujhe apni nhi lagti q aisa lagta hai k meri pehchaan kuch aur hai aakhir koun hu main

K:dekho tum itna mat socho bs joh tumhara dil kehta hai usey mano k tumhe kya lagta koun hai joh tumhe apna lagta hai koun hai jisko dekh tumhe lagta hai k uske saath hi tumhari zindagi hai,jaha tumhara mann jana chahta usey jane do roko mat shayad is wajh se tumhe tumhare sare sawaalo ka jawaab mil jaye

V:ye mann hi toh hai joh har bar galat rasta chunta hai mujhe galat deesha me le jaa raha hai (bihaan ka soch rahi hai)

K:tum aisa maan rahi ho pr kya pata wahi sahi rasta hai ek baar koshish toh karo,chalo raat bahut ho gayee main chalta hoo good night

V:good night

Vaneeta apne bed pr soyee hai aur koi achanak window se uske room me aata hai aur uske pass jaker beta hai k tabhi side table pr rakha glass gir jata hai aur awaaz hoti hai jisase vaneeta uthti aur woh shaks bhi jaane k liye uthkr window k tarf hota hai

V:ruko koun ho tum aur yaha kya kr rahe ho

B:hum hai bihaan(palatker)

V:bihaan tum yaha kya kr rahe ho

B:woh hum hum woh

V:ye kya hai sahi se jawaab do

B:hum tumhe dekhne aaye the

V:kya

B:haan tumhe dekhe binaa hume neend nhi aayegi jab tk tumhari pari wali smile nhi dekh lete hume neend kaise aayegi

Last ki line vaneeta k mind me click karti hai aur usey phir blur scene dikhta hai jisme ek ladka same line ek ladki ko bol raha hai (epi2)

B:kya hua

V:kuch nhi bs aise hi tum jao yaha se

Bihaan vaneeta k pass aker

B:hum jaante hai k tumhe humare pyaar pr bharosa nhi hai pr sach mano hum tumse bahut pyaar karte hai

Itna kehkr bihaan chala jaata hai

V:tumhari aankho me aacchai najar aati hai aur mera mann bhi tum pr yakeen karna chahta hai pr kaise joh sach aankho k samne hai usey kaise jhotla doo k thapki tumhari patni hai

Next morning

Pari(shradha ki beti)bhagte huey vaneeta k room me

V:arrey aap koun ho kitne Cute ho aap

Shradha:ye meri beti hai main shradha dhruv ki patni

V:namstey main vaneeta

S:naam badlne se insaan nhi badlte

V:kya main samjhi nhi

S:kuch nhi main bs aise hi waise tumse milker khushi hui

V:mujhe bhi

Sharadha pari ko lekar jaati aur vaneeta ready hoker balcony se neeche jaati hai jaha bihaan tabele me gulabo aur rampyari se baat kr raha hai

B:tumhe pata hai gulabo woh aa gai hai aur ab uske aane se humari khushiya bhi wapas aa gai bs ek baar usey sb yaad aa jaye phir ek pal k liye bhi hum usey apne se dur nhi jane denge

Vaneeta last line sunti hai

V:kise nhi jane donge

B:tumhe

V:kya kaha

B:yahi k ab hum tumhe kahi jane nhi denge

V:tumhari baate meri samjh se parey hai tum kya ho bihaan tum ek tarf thapki se itna pyaar karte ho k uske baare me kuch galat nhi sun sakte aur dusari tarf tum mujhe pyaar ki baat karte ho aankhir chahte kya ho

B:tumhe

V:bihaan sahi se jawaab do

B:toh suno kya tumhare liye ye kafi nhi k hum tumse pyaar karte hai q tum in sabme thapki ko beech me laa rahi ho

V:tum kaisi baate karte ho kl ko jab tumhari thapki wapas aayegi tab kya karoge kya tab mujhse pyaar nhi karonge yaa thapki ko chor donge

B:arrey tum aur thap

Dhruv:bihaan idhar mujhe kuch baat karni hai abhi is waqt

Bihaan baat complete kiye bina chala jata hai aur vaneeta confuse ho jaati hai

B:bhai kya hua hume q nhi batane diya k woh hi thapki hai

K:q k maine aisa kaha

B:kabeer pr q

K:dekho bihaan hume nhi pata k thapki is sachai ko kis tarh se legi mujhe andaja nhi hai ho sakta hai usey sadma pahuche aur uski halat aur kharab ho isliye usey direct batane ki bajai hume woh baate uske samne create karni hai joh usase judi ho jisase usey sb yaad aa jaye

B:humne me apni lovestory karke dekhli pr koi asar nhi hua

K:hua hai tabhi toh woh sawaal joh usne mujhe kabhi nhi kiye ab karne lagi hai woh apne baare me janna chahti hai joh isase pehle kabhi usne nhi poocha joh humne bataya usne woh maan liya tha

B:jaise usne tb tumhari baat maanli toh ab bhi maan jayengi k woh thapki hai

K:vaneeta e k jhoot hai is naam se uski koi yaad nhi hai isliye isey manane me usey koi pareshaani nhi hui pr thapki uska sach hai isasey uaki kai yaadein judi hai aur agar usey me ye batau k woh thapki hai toh woh saari yaadien usey gherengi joh uske liye thik nhi hoga usey hume sbkuch dheere dheere yaad dilana hoga aisa kuch karna hoga k woh khud apni pechaan ko pehchaan sake

B:thik hai hum samjh gaye

Poora din aise hi gujarta hai dhruv kabeer aur biahaan thapki k liye soch rahe k kaise sb usey yaad dilaya jaa sake aur baaki pariwaar bhi poori koshish kr raha hai k choti choti cheezo aur harkato se thapki ko kuch yaad aa jaye

Night
Vaneeta apne room me

V:(in mind)jb se yaha aai hu ajeeb sa lag raha hai aur pehle confuse thi bihaan ki baato ne aur kar diya hai woh kya kehna chahta tha mere aur thapki k baare me (achanak vaneeta ko pyaas lagti pr room me pani nhi hai aur woh kitchan me jaati hai)

kitchan me

Priti:aaj maine kitne dino baad aashu baby se ye wine mangai hai is tarh se ghar me kisiko dikh gai thi toh,sb gadbad ho jayegi ,haa ek kaam karti hu cola ki botal me bhar deti hu kisi ko bhi doubt nhi hoga

Priti wine ko cola ki botal me bharti hai aur wine ki botal fekne k liye bahar jaati hai tabhi vaneeta aati hai aur us botal se wine ko soft drink samjh pee leti hai,priti wapas aati hai aur vaneeta ko peete huey dekhti hai

Priti:areey ye kya kiya tumne

V:kya kiya soft drink pee rahi hu kya kuch galat hai isme

Priti in mind:agar maine issey bataya toh sabko pata chal jayega aur waise bhi jb isey nasha chadega toh waise bhi sb samjh jayenge, mujhe issey iske room me chorna chahiye

V:kya soch rahi ho aap ,ye mujhe chakker q aa rahe hai

Priti:kuch nhi chalo tumhe tumhare room me le jaati hu ,tum abhi soo jao thik hai

Priti thapki ko room me chorti hai joh thahaan k room k pass hai

Vaneeta ko neend nhi aa rahi woh bihaan k baare me sochti hai

V:mujhe abhi bihaan se baat karni hai(vaneeta ful nashe me hai)

Thahaan room

Bihaan bathroom me hai aur vaneeta room me aati hai kuch hi der me bihaan bhi bathroom se nikalta hai ,bihaan ko dekh vaneeta apne hosh kho bethti hai aur bs usey hug karna chahti hai uske kareeb jana chahti hai usey kiss karna chahti hai baki sb bhul jaati hai,bihaan usey aisa dekh uske samne aata hai aur chutki bajakr

B:kaha kho gai kuch kaam tha humse joh itni raat ko humare pass aai ho

V:woh main ye matlb aisa hai k

B:ye kya woh main aisa laga rakha hai koi kaam hai toh kaho warna jao hume sona hai

V:nhi main nhi jaoungi main bhi yahi rahungi tumhare paas

B:kya tumhe pata hai tum kya keh rahi ho aur tumhari awaaz ko kya hua aur itna hil q rahi ho,kya tumne sharab pee hai

V:nhi nhi toh maine toh bs soft drink peeya aur kuch nhi

Bihaan uske pass jata hai aur smell se pata chalta hai usne galti se sharab pee hai woh uska haat pakarta hai

B:chalo hum tume room me chor dete hai
Pr vaneeta bihaan ko chorke nhi jaana chahti woh ruk jaati hai aur jaker room ka door lock kr deti hai

B:ye kya kr rahi ho door q lock kiya,thik hai tumhe iss roome sona hai so jao hum dusare room me jaate hai

Vaneeta bihaan ka haat pakrti hai aur gana gaati hai

Baho Me Chale Aao
Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda

(Bihaan shock ye kya aaj vaneeta ko kya ho gaya hai woh kya chahti hai)

(vaneeta bihaan k samne aati hai usey hug karti hai aur uske face ko apne haat me lekar gaa rahi hai aur phir hug karti hai)

Yeh Aaj Kaa Nahee Milan
Yeh Sang Hai Umar Bhar Kaa
Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda

(pr bihaan ab bhi thoda shock me hai pr phir usey yaad aata hai k ye nashe me aur woh hug break kr usasey door jata hai)

Humn.. Humn..
Chale Hee Jana Hai Najar Churake Yun
Phir Thami Thi Sajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyun Humm

Chale Hee Jana Hai Najar Churake Yun
Phir Thami Thi Sajan Tumne Meri Kalayi Kyun

(vaneeta phir bihaan ka haat pakar gaa rahi hai aur usey back hug deti hai)

Kisi Ko Apna Banake Chhod De, Aisa Koyi Nahee Karta

(bihaan uske haat pakarta hai aur phir vaneeta k haat apne chest pr se hataker phir door chala jata hai)

Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda

(bihaan ek koune khada soch raha hai k kya kare q k uske liye khud pr control karna mushkil hai q k uski thapki uske pass hai aur uska saath maang rahi hai pr woh apne hosh me nhi hai,)

Kabhi Kabhi Kuch Toh Kaho Piya Hamse
Ke Kam Se Kam Aaj Toh Khulke Milo Jara Hamse Hum
(bihaan dekhta hai vaneeta hut me bethi hai aur bihaan ko apni arms felaye apni tarf bula rahi hai)

(ye sb dekh bihaan ko kuch nhi samjh aa raha k woh kya kare)

Kabhi Kabhi Kuch Toh Kaho Piya Hamse
Ke Kam Se Kam Aaj Toh Khulke Milo Jara Hamse

(vaneeta bihaan k samne jaa uske haat apne waist pr rakhti hai aur bihaan sb bhul chuka hai ab woh sirf apni thapki k kareeb jana chahta hai usey sahi galat ki koi fikar nhi)

Hai Rat Apni Jo Tum Ho Apne
Kisi Kaa Phir Hame Darr Kya

(bihaan vaneeta ki neck pr kiss karta hai vaneeta usey apni aur khichti hai bihaan usey apne arms me lekar bed pr letata hai)

Baho Me Chale Aao
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda

(bihaan vaneeta k Forehead pr kiss karta hai uske nack pr kiss karta hai vaneeta uske pyaar ko mehsoos kar rahi hai)
Yeh Aaj Kaa Nahee Milan
Yeh Sang Hai Umar Bhar Kaa
Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda.

(aur Finally usey lips pr kiss karta hai nd vaneeta usey hug karti hai woh poori tarh se taiyaar hai bihaan k saath aage badne k liye pr bihaan achank se alag hoker room ka lock khol kr chala jata hai aur vaneeta nashe me behosh ho jaati hai)

Balcony

B:ye hum kya kar rahe the,maana k woh humari thapki hai pr usey kuch yaad nhi hai,woh khud ko vaneeta samjhti hai aur aise me humara ek galat kadam hume usasey humesha k liye alag kr denga

Pr aisa q ho raha hai humare saath q ye nazdikiya humari nhi ho sakti thapki ko jaldi kuch yaad q nhi aa raha hai ab ek pal k liye bhi usasey door nhi raha jaata humse

Precape:bihaan agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh ye thapki tumhare binaa kaise reh paati


Ok guys kaisa laga please batao mujhe aur aap sabhi ko ek baat batadu ye FF only 25 ch ka hai toh bahut jald hi khtm kardungi thanks

Edited by saaksh - 7 years ago
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I'm waiting to know what will Vaneeta's reaction be when she finds herself in Thahaan's room. Perhaps Bihaan will already take her to her room.


I'm very happy that Bihaan stopped himself. Vaneeta got drunk after drinking wine. Didn't she realise that it was something else?

Gradually Vaneeta is remembering things like she finds the house familiar and knows that Bihaan does not eat spicy food.

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