FF:'Teri Meri Love Story'(Last Part updated Pg19)23May2018

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Maine ff likha hai pr hindi me kya main yaha post karu


Thahaan FF "Teri Meri Love story"

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Part2 Page 1
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thapki pandey niwas me hi rehti hai bachpan se vasu ne usey palpskr bada kiya hai q thapki vasu ki frnd Poonam ki beti hai,poonam aur krishnkant ki accidant me mout ho chuki hai,vasu thapki se bahut pyaar karti hai apne khud k baccho se bhi jyada,aur bihaan thapki bachpan k frnd hai ladte jhgadte rehte hai phir bhi ek dusare k bina nhi reh sakte pr thapki bihaan se pyaar karti hai pr bihaan ko iss baare me pata nhi hai aur woh thapki ko sirf dost manta hai aur vasu un dono ki dosti ko pyaar samjhti hai.

Sare character same hai bs bihaan vasu ka real beta hai aur baki sare character story k hisaab se judte jayenge main focus thahaan hai ye mere pehla ff hai toh mistek ho jaye toh maaf karna




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Morning me ek ladki jo 22 years Ki hai room me jaa rahi hai aur dekhti hai ek 24 years ka ladka soya Hua hai,
Girl:utho 8am ho gaya hai
Boy:bs 2min aur
Girl:koi 2min nhi utho warna
(woh jug ka sara paani bihaan pr dal deti hai) (Ha bihaan aur woh ladki thapki hai)
Bihaan :thapki ye tumne kya kiya ruk abhi tujhe dekhta hu
Thapki :bihaan tum hi toh nhi uth rahe the maine warning bhi di thi (aur thapki bhaag jati hai aur usake peeche bihaan bhagta hai
Dadi:Arey kya hua aise q bhag rahe ho
Bihaan : Dadi isne hum per paani dal diya
Thapki :Ha toh Dadi 8am tk soya rahega toh pani nhi dalu toh kya iski aarti utaru
Bihaan :ek baar tujhe pakad le phir batyenge hum kya karte hai
(Thapki bihaan abhi bhi Dadi k charo tarf bhaag rahe hai)
(tabhi vasu waha aa jati hai aur thapki bihaan ruk jate hai)
Vasu:thapki bihaan ye kya hai tum subah se shuru ho gaye
Bihaan :ma isne
Thapki :maa woh
Vasu: chup ho jao dono aur bihaan jaldi se tayaar ho jao aur Mere room me aao mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai aur thapki tum bhi aao thik ab jao yaha se dono(bihaan thapki ko annkhe dikhakr chala jata hai jis per thapki hass hass deti hai aur woh bhi chali jati hai)
Vasu:chaliye maji Mere room me chalte hai (vasu ka room jaha roke ka saaman rakha hai chunri nariyal kangan gehne bahut kuch)
Vasu:dekhiye maji maine sari taiyaari karli hai bs ab ye dono haa karde toh main aaj hi roka kardungi
Dadi:pr vasu bahu tumhe nhi lagta tum jaldbazi kar rahi ho ek baar dono se pooch toh leti uske baad ye sab
Vasu:maji appne Dekha nhi dono ek dusare se kitna Pyaar karte hai
Dadi:din bhar tom aur jerry k jaise ladte rehte hai aur tum kehti ho Pyaar karte hai
Vasu:haa ladte hai pr ek dusare Ki care bhi toh karte hai ek din bhi ek dusare k bina nhi reh sakte, appne Dekha nhi jb thapki appne office k kaam se 1day k liye city se bahar gayee thi toh bihaan reh nhi paya aur uske peeche woh bhi chala gaya, kabhi thapki ko rotey huye nhi dekh sakta aur thapki bhi bihaan Ki har choti badi cheez ka dhyaan rakhti hai chahe hum sb bihaan se naaraz ho jaye pr woh hamesha uska saath deti hai ye Pyaar nhi toh kya hai.
Dadi:dosti hai shayad hum usey Pyaar samajh rahe hai
Vasu:ho sakta hai dosti hai pr ek shadi nibhane k liye yahi zaruri hai aur main thapki ko apni bahu banana chahti hu
Dadi:pr vasu
Thapki bihaan saath me:maa
Vasu:aa jao mujhe tum dono se kuch baat karni hai
Thapki:haa kahiye maa
Vasu:thapki beta tumhari maa tumhe mujhe ek jimedari Ki tarh soap kr gayee thi jise maine hamesha acche se nibhane Ki koshish Ki, hamesha tumhe apni beti mankr Pyaar kiya
Thapki :maa kya hua aap aise q bol rahi hai kya mujhse kuch galti
Vasu:nhi beta tumse koi galti nhi hui hai, main toh bs ye chahti hu k
Thapki :kya maa kahiye na
Vasu:thapki main tumhe apni bahu banana chahti hu mtlb bihaan tum thapki se shaadi karlo aur waise bhi tum dono ek dusare se Pyaar karte ho
(ye sunkar thapki mann hi mann khush ho jati hai pr bihaan shock ho jata hai)
Bihaan:maa aap ye kya keh rahi hai hum aur thapki ache dost hai bs aur usase jyada kuch nhi, main thapki se Pyaar nhi karta aur naa hi thapki humse Pyaar karti hai (ye sunkar thapki ka Dil toot jatta hai)
Vasu:pr beta tum aur thapki
Bihaan:dost hai aur hum shaadi nhi kar sakte (Thapki ki tarf dekhte huey) hai n thapki
Thapki:haa maa bihaan Sahi keh raha hai hum sirf acche dost hai usase jyada kuch nhi(tootey huye Dil se)
(aur thapki bihaan chale jate hai)
(vasu shock me hai)
Dadi:maine tumse kaha tha vasu pr tum nhi mani ab Jane do woh kehte hai n mann ka hua toh accha na hua toh aur bhi accha
Vasu :aap Sahi keh rahi hai maji maine kuch jyada hi sapne dekh liye the

To be continued...

So kaisi lagi story sorry pr main english me nhi likh sakti toh aage k part bhi hindi me honge

Thank u

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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 2


AT Night

Thapki ka room

Thapki khud se baat kar rahi hai

Jb se Pyaar ko jana hai tb se sirf tumse hi Pyaar kiya hai bihaan, meri har baat bin kahe samjh Jate ho toh ye q nhi samjh paye k main tumse kitna Pyaar karti hoon,
aaj Pehali baar Maine maa se jhooth bola woh bhi sirf tumhare liye q k kya kehti main maa se k haa main Pyaar karti hoon tumse Jb k tum mujhse Pyaar karte hi nhi.
(mann hi mann rote huey)
Mujhe hamesha lagta tha k tum bhi mujhe se Pyaar karte ho, tumhari ankho me dikhta tha mujhe pr tumne toh usey dosti ka naam de diya, ek pal k liye khush ho gai thi k maa ne humari shaadi Ki baat Ki aur hum hamesha k liye ek ho jayenge pr socha nhi tha k ye khushi bs do pal Ki thi, kitni pagal hoon n main jo ye soch bethi Ki tum mujhe chahte ho, sach me pagal hoon main.

(bihaan peeche se thapki ko thapki dete huye)
Bihaan:woh toh tum ho, pagal

(thapki shockingly)
Thapki:bihaan tum yaha aur tumne kya suna mtlb woh main
Bihaan:Arey Arey bs itna pareshaan q ho rahi ho, humne toh bs ye suna k tum khud ko pagal keh rahi thi, pr q keh rahi thi

(thapki rahat Ki saans leti hai)
Thapki :wohhh kkuch nhi bs aise hi

Bihaan:kuch nhi? Thik hai mat batao waise bhi baad me tum khud hi hume bata dongi, q k tum humse koi baat chuppa nhi sakti

Thapki:bihaan waise tum yaha kuch kam tha?

Bihaan:hum dono k beech ye kaam kbse aane laga chuk chuk gaadhi, kya humey tumse milney k liye koi wajah chahiye

Thapki:nhi Mere kehne ka mtlb woh nhi tha

Bihaan:woh sb Jane do pehle ye batao tum hume good night kehne q nhi aai pata hai raat k 11 ho rahe hai hum kbse intezar kr rahe the tumhara pr tum nhi aai ankhir hum hi aa gaye, humne tumse pehle bhi kaha hai n k chahe jo ho humey har subah tumse good morning aur har raat tumse good night sunana hai q k tumhari pari Wali smile dekh kr humara din accha guzarta hai raat me neend acchi aati hai, phir bhi tum nhi aai

Thapki:sorry bihaan woh main bhool gai
Bihaan:kya hua thapki tum pareshaan lag rahi ho kya baat hai hume batao, kahi tum maa Ki humari shaadi Wali baat ko lekr toh pareshaan nhi ho? us baat pr itna dhyaan mat do humne maa se keh diya hai aur dekhna maa iss baare me hum dono ko kabhi force nhi karengi, tum toh janti ho maa ko aaj tk unhone hum pr kabhi kisi baat k liye dabav nhi dala toh Yeh toh shaadi Ki baat hai woh iske liye kabhi hum dono pr dabav nhi banayegi,
Aur hume toh ye soch kr Heyrani ho rahi hai k unhe aisa q laga k tum aur hum ek dusare se Pyaar karte hai,
Thapki:. Main bhi wahi soch rahi thi bihaan k maa ko aisa q laga k tum mujhe Pyaar karte ho(with teary eyes)
Bihaan:woh sb Jane do iss baare me hum subah baat karenge abhi humey bahut neend aa rahi hai,
(Thapki bihaan ko bs dekhe jaa rahi hai)

Bihaan :ab aise ghoor q rahi ho ab nhi karongi

Thapki:(khoyi hui) kya

(bihaan thapki k paas jaker usey hug karta Hai aur uske forhead pr kiss karta Hai)

Bihaan:good night chuk chuk gaadhi
(Thapki k ankho me aansoo aa Jate hai)

Bihaan:ab ye kya humne tumse smile karne k liye kaha aur tum ye aansoo nikal rahi ho

Thapki:nhi bihaan woh bs aankh me kuch chala gaya tha isliye

Bihaan:thik hai maan lete hai tumhari baat, ab toh de do pari Wali smile warna hume neend nhi aayegi
(Thapki smile karti hai pr dukhi mann se)

Bihaan:ye woh smile nhi hai phir bhi aaj isase kaam chal jayega humara
(bihaan chala jata hai) (thapki khud se baat karti hai aise apne forhead pr haath rakh jaha bihaan ne kiss kiya)

Thapki:tumhari inhi nazdikiyo se mujhe hamesha lagta tha bihaan k tum bhi Pyaar karte ho pr nhi ye tumhare liye dosti hai, isliye ab mujhe In nazdikiyo ko doori me badlna hoga warna kabhi bhi ye sach maan nhi paongi Ki tum mujhse Pyaar nhi karte

Next day Morning
Bihaan ka room

(kisi k chalne Ki awaz hai, Is baar bihaan pehle se alert hai bs chader odhke sone ka natak kr raha hai, jaise hi woh shaks bihaan pr paani dalne Ki koshish karta Hai bihaan uthkar haath pakar kr chilata hai)

Bihaan:thapkiii

Dadi:thapki nhi dadi

Bihaan:Dadi aap yaha thapki kaha hai

Dadi:woh chali gayee

Bihaan:chuk chuk gaadhi chali gayee pr kaha?

To be continued...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi saaksh... Bahut acha story start kiya hai tumne.. Ab yeh thahaan ki dosti kaise pyar me badalti hai, yeh interesting hoga padhne me.. Aur tum tension mat lo, freely hindi me likho.. Waise v yaha ab zyada members aate nhi hai.. Aur jo log aate hai maximum log hindi jante hai...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow maine part 2 bhi padh liya.. Story awesome ja rahi hai aur mujhe lagta hai bihaan v kahi na kahi thapki se pyar karta hai but khud confused hai ya samajh nhi pa raha hai.. Jaldi update karna...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good one.
Mujhe lagta hai ki Bihaan bhi Thapki se pyaar karta hai. He just does not know about it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi saaksh😊
Nice one
Do continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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.. .keep doing it... 👏
Edited by Bihaan_love - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u everyone pooja,rinka,kar_nan,bihaan love aur toulup ff ko pasand karne k liye kuch din main daily update karungi toh jyada wait nhi karna padega nd thank u once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start, loved it to the core. Plz do continue and update asap.

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