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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Finally ho giya read ... Thanks Dplee... It is awesome update... Bihaan is dreaming about Thapki... And he is getting better now ... Plz update next part soon my busy queen...

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Preeti126

@Preeti126

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Thank u so much for updating...i was waiting for this...loved daadi...it was really very nice...i dnt knw why i cried...
This bihaan is making me emotionally weak...

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riffat

@shanzanoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

dplee aapi its amazing👏i was eagerly waiting for the next part and u updated it now i m so happy u written it with such beautiful words and painted every emotion very well😳loved it

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fan.matsh

@fan.matsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Dplee: As usual it was wonderful. U r too good at these emotions. Beautiful! I had tears in my eyes reading abt the condition of Bihaan! i wish they show something of this sort on the show. But I doubt the cvs can handle it well.
Thnx for the update. Pls update the next part fast. eagerly waiting.

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: prachikwr
Thank u so much for updating...i was waiting for this...loved daadi...it was really very nice...i dnt knw why i cried...
This bihaan is making me emotionally weak...

Thank you Prachi..

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: shanzanoor
dplee aapi its amazing👏i was eagerly waiting for the next part and u updated it now i m so happy u written it with such beautiful words and painted every emotion very well😳loved it

Thank you Shan..

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P.D.Dutta

@P.D.Dutta

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: fan.matsh
Dplee: As usual it was wonderful. U r too good at these emotions. Beautiful! I had tears in my eyes reading abt the condition of Bihaan! i wish they show something of this sort on the show. But I doubt the cvs can handle it well.
Thnx for the update. Pls update the next part fast. eagerly waiting.

I myself is very emotional person Maty..that's why my writing is full of emotions 😆

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Kowsi

@Kowsi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

This is truly a beautiful piece Di!! I feel so excited at those last lines, like a small child whose parents promised to buy a toy! I was grinning lika a mad at the prospective of ThaHaan accidental meet

And he found her!! I so wanted to read that part Di!!

And Dadima, I just love her so much! It makes me realise how good it can be to have a grandma in our life and I am feeling sad that I didn't have that

I will be waiting for your update Di, it's turning into a beautiful story that I wish to be a part of!!

Thanks Di 🤗

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anuja

@princess2791

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

bhihaan is so cute and loveable. i hope he will be good soon and thapki will help him to become his old self. and in these journy they will fall for eachother once again. wauting for next update.