Gangster's love:Vivian-Sanaya OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gangster's love

My request :If there is any VM maker plz make a Vivian-Sanaya VM on the song 'Bheegi...'(Gangster).


I dedicate this OS to my friend Kajol Khanna as she wanted me o write an OS for VIvian and Sanaya.

Ranveer has called Kajal to somewhere.She was excited.

K:I know Ranveer'today you are going to propose to me.

She wore a beautiful dress as it was a special occasion.

Ranveer is someone who was a regular visiter to Kajal's flower shop.He bought flowers as he loved her fragrance,not because of the flowers' fragrance.Both of them adorned each other's flower like heart with love.

Kajal reached the destination.Her face glowed seeing Ranveer.
She imagined dancing with him on this song:
tu hi meri shab hai subha hai tu hi din hai mera

tu hi mera rab hai jahaan hai tu hi meri duniya

tu waqt mere liye main hoon tera lamha

kaise rahega bhala hoke tu mujhse judaa

o o o o ho ho

o o o o o o

tu hi meri shab hai subha hai tu hi din hai mera

tu hi mera rab hai jahaan hai tu hi meri duniya

tu waqt mere liye main hoon tera lamha

kaise rahega bhala hoke tu mujhse judaa

o o o o ho ho

o o o o o o...(Gangster).


R:Kajal'I want to tell you a very important matter.
She smiled.
She said in her mind:I know what you are going to say.You are going to propose.
R:Kajal...like you think i am not a Business man.I am a gangster...an underworld King.
Kajal was shocked.Her heart was broken.She slapped him.
K:I was expecting you to propose to me.But you broke my heart by revealing your identity.You are a gangster.How terrible!
R:I am sorry Kajal.I called you here to propose.But before that i wanted you to know who I am.Will you marry me?
K:Stop it.Which girl will marry a Gangster?I hate you and i don't want to see you again.
She ran away crying.unknowingly Ranveer who was a tough gangster became weak losing his beloved.He was struggling hard to cope up with the situation.
Vivian Dsena as Abhay Raichand in Pyaar kii Ye ek Kahaani
Kajal was not able to sleep.Though her eyes were full of tears she could view Ranveer's face clearly,also their romantic moments.She rushed to Ranveer's place surprising Ranveer who had lost all hopes of getting his beloved Kajal back.
K:I tried hard to hate you.But I can't hate you.I love you that much.
They both became very emotional.
She ran into his arms.
Their mad love's music flowed through their hearts:
lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

(They were becoming more and more closer to each other.)


ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai (They shared a hot eye lock)

khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2

jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

la la la ...(Gangster).
His arms went through her face and hair.His face went closer to her.She closed her eyes.Immediately he moved backward.She opened her eyes.
K:What happened Ranveer?
R:I can get killed at any time by my enemies.You should not lose your purity by me who can die at any time.
Kajal's eyes got filled up with tears:I will become more pure when you touch me.
They both became emotional.Their eye lock was pure and sentimental.
Suddenly one of his enemies shot him.He fell down.Kajal was shocked.She could not believe what happened now.A few seconds back they were in a beautiful dream world,but now they are facing the bitter reality.
He held her hand:I am going Kajal.
Kajal cried loudly:Nooo!
K:Ranveer...you can't leave me making our love story incomplete.
Their hearts cried.
bheegi bheegi si hai raaten

bheegi bheegi yaaden

bheegi bheegi baaten

bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha

sapnon ka saya palkon pe aya

pal mein hasaya pal mein rulaya

phir bhi yeh kaisi kami hai

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani...(Gangster).

Kajal took him to the hospital.
By God's grace Ranveer got saved.
Kajal sat near him holding his hands and crying.
Ranveer was upset seeing her tears.
R:Because of me you are crying.
K:No...
R:Now i got saved.But i don't know for how long i will be able to escape.At any time i can die.
Kajal held his hands stronger with a smile :But till then we will be together.
They became very emotional.They were happy with the present as they were with each other .
The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why not barun?
Btw its good
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
nice one dear...btw Viv-Sanzz...hmmm...I love them both😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
nice OS
i was expecting a sad end like Gangster movie 😆
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like button gayab 😡
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(@ tm's request)
the ending was beautiful. love must be something like that.
well, jodi was quite good i feel.
PS- if they are casted together, people will go ga-ga.
that's the nature of fans.

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Thank u so much di 4 writing this os and dedicated this 2 me. I m so touched:).
Awesome writing!!! Vivian was thye best choice 4 a gangstar and sanaya is as usual so sweet.
Awesome choice 4 the song!just perfect.
I was scared when ranveer is shot but kajal saved him.
Again another thank u 4 using my name in sanaya.

But i didn't got the 1st place:'(.actually i got time just now 2 see the pm.tight class schedule.:(.
I hope this kind of stories will show in TLMS.
Expecting more another stories 4m u di.
Love u so much. Mmuuuah:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS. You Should Write More On Them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was nice os
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow jasmine this is so diff and nice ...
I loved it yaar

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