FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 27

Okies!!! So me is back with my comment!

This chapter such a light hearted and peaceful chapter. I love angad and keerat scene. Seerat ki beizzati ke toh kya hi kehne 😆. Keerat aur Vese toh keep on fighting lol. These two will never stop having these fights! And that phone call scene was so funny😆.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hi @mirai07,

Why did you not tag me? 😭 I accidentally found the update while I revising my own ff.

I knew I was forgetting someone! 😫🤦🤦So sorry Lizzy.....and when are you updating? Because you have no idea how many times I re-read your's, Averma's and Radhika Di's fic to get some inspiration! ❤️💞

It definitely took me some time to go back to the previous chapter before reading this.

I had to do the same to figure out where I stopped and where to start from. 😂

The chapter carries such a nice vibe! Light and playful. The deft way of handling things by Angad is a welcome relief after seeing the show (which I have stopped watching, it makes no sense to me). And the dynamic between Angad, Sahiba, Veer and Keerat feels so organic.

You aren't the only one 🤬! I have done the same. Even the current track of the OG makes no sense. Honestly I had a post planned for taking out my frustrations but never got the time to actually write it down! Only the previous episodes of the OG is providing some much needed inspiration for the story (other than all of yours).

I had a hard time picking my favorite scene. I loved Angad and Keerat's interactions, Keerat - Seerat and Seerat - Angad interactions way too much! The phone call was the cherry on the top.

❤️❤️ Aha! I am so glad you had a hard time 😂😂😂

There are few errors here and there, though nothing major. You can revise it at your own pace.

😫😫😫😫 No! If it's left to me it will never happen! Tell me! 😫😫

As always, can't wait for another update of this story.

❤️

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Okies!!! So me is back with my comment!

This chapter such a light hearted and peaceful chapter. I love angad and keerat scene. Seerat ki beizzati ke toh kya hi kehne 😆. Keerat aur Vese toh keep on fighting lol. These two will never stop having these fights! And that phone call scene was so funny😆.

Seerat ke beizzati just started.....😂😜 Abhi toh khel baki hai.

Thanks! I tried to keep it as light-hearted as possible 💕💕💕

Ohhh Mirai welcome back. I so missed you and your FF. The show has turned into mind numbing crapfest. I feel bad just reading updates. They had so much potential and they threw it down the drain

Coming to the chapter, wahhh it's so good and organic. I loved angad and Keerat ka conversation and the last phone call. Atleast in fiction world angad is intelligent and sahiba has self respect. Can't wait to read more

And last but the best part of FF was Seerat ki baijjati, what a subtle but powerful way both angad and Keerat showed her, her place. Loved it

Please keep writing, we are now going to survive on fan fictions only

Loved the post. Am so happy that a new chapter is finally added. You don't know how many times I have re read the story. Please give the next update soon. Also, can you please tag me on your next chapter as I do not want to lose out on any update?

I just read this chapter and oh it was fantastic! I told before also that I really like the whole practical and civil approach to this wedding and I love this Angad! He is intelligent and smart but he carries the dignity of rich elite which has been missing in the show not that I can watch that show 😕! Come to your writing, it is such a refreshing and lighthearted! I love Keerat and Angad’s relationship! The piece of cake was the video call between sisters and when Veer and Angad joined it! It showed the comfort and warmth and above all respect for each other 💕 Seerat’s insults were perfect, keep them coming 😉

Can’t wait to read more 💕

A day of sunshine in an otherwise gloomy TMD forum! Loved your update! Wonderful and nourishing to the heart as always!!!

Amazing update

Love it

Cont soon

Hehehe. It is okay, as long as it is not missed! I did update, I was planning to update it on Wednesday, but editing and translating took more time than I had anticipated. So, yeah that was it.

I agree, instead of the show, it is the forum writers' work that keeps us inspiring. I think, I have read every work on this forum (but I am bound to get one or two wrong if quizzed), just to start writing the latest update. Breaks from writing are definitely cursed. I am no longer going to stay away from updates if I can help - a lesson I learnt hard way. I read and re-read before writing.

I am definitely waiting for the rant, because beech mein toh kya hi ho raha tha show aur forum dono par. Unbelievable! I used to think, who would agree with the skewed things being shown on the TV, but then I discovered the believers, who justify the nonsense with more conviction than me checking my students' work!! At this point, I can easily claim OG was way, way better than TMD, kyunki consistent pacing thi show ki, sizzling chemistry thi aur consistent characters bhi the. Tried and tested formula worked its magic as it should. But Vanku bhaiyya bhi like, 'Nahi, maine iss concept ki barbadi ka potential dikhana hai tum sabko, aur ye bohot sahi chalega.'

Okay, but I am not certain you would want me to tell you, I am very nitpicky whenever I edit (you can be assured by the amount of editing I have done to my own chapters). And if you are okay with it, we can coordinate something!

Take care and have fun!!