FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 35

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

You commented....ooops! Ignore my last reply 🥴🥴

Ohhh what a wonderful chapter Merai. You never disappoint. I loved how sahiba is so confident about her abilities and her place in both Angad's office and life. A credit for that goes to angad to make her feel equal and respected. I loved the zhumka scene and the seerat scene. Loved it that she didn't hesitate to call out angad and brar's past behaviour too.

Oh yes, Sahiba has not forgiven or forgotten yet. She is making do with what she has at the moment. We will get to see that soon enough in the story.

Angad and baking. Hahahaha how did the pastry turn out? And I would love to see Angad's response/ reaction to akhilesh ka comment 😃

We may see that too 😁

Overall a good progression of story and the relationships. Keep writing. Abhi aap sub talented writers ka hi Sahara hai.

Thanks Ashviniv!

Originally posted by: Dreamergirl123

I read the entire story in one go and Oh My God. It's amazing, the character growth.. the chemistry between Angad and Sahiba... It's everything we want and the show doesn't give.

Beautifully written. kudos❤️

Thank you! 💕💕💕

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful concept👏

Read all the parts in a go

Waiting for next

Thanks! 💕💕

Originally posted by: Reader17

I am hoping you update this story soon.

At the moment it will take a bit of time as I am currently pressed with other works. But I will see what I can do. 💕

Originally posted by: Dreamergirl123

I read the entire story in one go and Oh My God. It's amazing, the character growth.. the chemistry between Angad and Sahiba... It's everything we want and the show doesn't give.

Beautifully written. kudos❤️

Thanks Dreamergirl! 💕💕

I will try my best.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Finally, I am here. I really did take my time to read and respond. I had decided to read all chapters in a single sitting before I comment. And it took for me days to finish reading it in single sitting. [I would leave it in between because of something, and then I would start from beginning. Annoying na?]

So, here we are after I have finished reading the ff in a single sitting.

The emotions I felt reading all 14 chapters together induced a nice chemical rush. I enjoyed it. This is going to be one of those ffs that I would prefer to re-read frequently. 👏

I noticed how many emotions you included in the fast-paced drama. There is not a moment that bores, you run such a tight ship!

Now, coming to the chapter 13, I liked the how seamless changes felt when I read all chapters together. The interactions in the hall and on the dining table were very interesting to read. Sadly, ITV gives only bahu bashing. If they show this, then the show's TRP would have skyrocketed.

The confrontation did sooth my heart - mere kaleje ko thankdak pad gayi!!🥳

The unconditional backing by Angad suggests that romance would be one cards soon!! The chapter 14 is so far my favorite chapter other than the reception chapters. Although they still does not top the subtle romance scene you had posted in earlier chapters. Keep writing!!!!

Aur kya kahun, I am hungry for updates. 😳

All the best for your exams!!

Big review! Yay 🥳🥳🥳

Oh yes, I know what you mean. I do the same. I tend re readd the same story again and again because something or the other comes up during my reading time. 🤷🙃😅😂

Chemical rush....wow! I tried to keep to the plotline of Gaatchora honestly 😅😅

Oh yes...ITV .....now I only like Mythological shows because there is only so much you can go wrong with it. 😂

Subtle romances are on the way. I have a few scenes planned 💕

Thanks Lizzy! I am looking forward to reading your updates so.....I would also say Keep writing! 💖💖💖

Hey, when are you giving the update? I love this story so much. Have re read it several times. Please give the next update soon.