FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 29

YAYYYYYYY!!! One more update!!! You is being updating regularly!!! I loved the chapter. I can already imagine sahiba dressed in jean and a white shirt!! And that bill sh*t🤣🤣!! Bro seerat ne mana kyu nhi kiya ke mujhe kuch bana nhi ata 😂😂 eve bezati karva Li ehne 😂😂. Acha so Jasleen buaji college drop out hai aur bolti hai papa ji aap partially karte ata jata aapko kuch hai nhi aur chale business me kaam karne 😂😂

Originally posted by: mirai07

Hey guys! I am sure you did not expect such a fast update! I had the time, energy and ideas to actually pen down the next chapter so it resulted in an update.

How was it? Don't forget to leave your views.

Did I forget to tag someone? If so, can you just send me friend request? It helps me in tagging people who are buddies. Or you can teach me how to make a PM List. I've no idea how to make one.

I am sort off editing my previous chapters. I edited the first two chapters and the Index. Tell me if I missed something on those two if you re-read it. It would be helpful for me to correct them.

I actually have an idea for a new story...well, a continuation of a drabble I wrote (if you have read it). Do you want to hear it or read it?

Happy Sunday!

❤️

Italic and underlined- What drabble? Give me the link!! I wanna read!!!

Wow Mirai a new chapter. That's great. I loved the chapter. Sahiba in jeans and white t shirt. Mast dikhegi I am sure

I loved manveer, sahiba and Indar's conversation. How they are teaming up against angad is hilarious.

Seerat ki beijjati was awesome. I loved this sahiba Jo seerat ko muh pe hoest answer back karati hai. Usake kaand ko maasumiyat and all such stuff nahi bolati

Loved it

Angad ka kya reaction tha to see sahiba in such cloths. May be u can show flashback of their lunch date. Veer, keet and sahiba angad ka

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Italic and underlined- What drabble? Give me the link!! I wanna read!!!

Introspection

I'll be back later on to reply to your review!

How I wish the actual show would go the way you portray it! Granted we have the snakes to create uproar in Sahan and InderMaan’s utopia, but why can’t we have some normalcy? Loved this update as always!!!! Loving how Sahiba’s relationships with Inder and Maan have changed. The show should also show the same.

First of a very quick new update was a fantastic surprise 👍🏻🙃

Now about this chapter, it was a treat! I love how they all grew in this story! I love love Sahiba and Manbeer’s relationship! The way you portray them I wish they have shown something like this in the show!! You are showing complete contrast from the show in fact! Your entire story is actually very progressive with characters growing and being very mature and understanding! You took this marriage and crafted into a positive relationship without any forced convictions!!

I am enjoying this story and would love to read more from your other stories as well! Also I enjoyed Seerat’s insult 😉and Sahiba’s honesty with her 👌👌

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Please tag me whenever you update

Hey!

The fast update caught me by surprise. I would come back after I re-read it several times.

Originally posted by: mirai07

Introspection

I'll be back later on to reply to your review!

Oh introspection!! I have read it before! 🤗