Twinj ss : tere bina there is no life. Pt 2 updated on pg 2

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Its been 6 months since twinkles death. Twinkle died in a road accident.

Kunj was lost in twinkles thought when he heard a baby cry. Kunj went near tia his daughter their daughter. It was twinkles birthday. Kunj was missing her badly but could see traces of twinkle in tia.

Seeing tia made kunj always smile. Why shud he not smile after all she was not just his but his siyappa queens daughter too.

Kunj thought over name siyappa queen. How did it come into being? He now remembered twinkle his wifes siyappas the first one her saying yes to marriage especially when she had a boyfriend like yuvraj. Then her charging of rape on him. The biggest siyappa their marriage. Thinking of marriage kunj said to tia 'tumhe pata hai tia tumhari mummy aur main to shaadi kabhi nahin karna but destiny ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha' and kunj had a smile on his lips. Seeing her father smile tia s if he understood everything she smiled too.

Kunj patted his daughter nd tia was ready to sleep. Kunj said tumhsri maa ke siyappe kam nahin hue the shaadi ke baad in fact woh badhh gaye nd we fell in love. I know ki tumhari maa ki galati nahin thi she was innocent usse anjaane mein galati ho jaati thi. Kunj then remembered those horrible incidents when he slapped her, when he disbelieved her, when he disbelieved her nd tears automatically formed in his eyes. A minute later he realised tia was crying too. Such was the bond between the father nd daughter. Kunj wiped tia's tears nd started cooing her. Tia smiled a little toothless smile.

5 minutes later

Tia slept in her father's cosy comfortable arms.

Kunj looked at twinkles photo with a garland on it now.

Kunj took out garland from it. Kunj said ki sab kehte hai ki tum chali gayi ho but my heart says u r alive. Meri twinkle zinda hai mere liye, tia ke liye aur hamari family ke liye. Kunj was about to to cry when he remembered twinkles words.

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Twinkle said ' agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to promise karo u will be happy, u will smile, u will marry someone'. Kunj said 'dekh jab tu aisi baatein karti to mujhe achcha nahin lagta ha'. Aur shaadi to bilkul nahin' . Twinkle 'kunj tum khud hi kehte ho ki u cannot see tesrs in my eyes to how can i see tears in urs'. Kunj did not say anything.

Flasback ends.

Kunj now wipes his tears. He say siyappa queen yaani meri queen kahaan chali gayi hai tu jaldi aa na waapas apne kunj ke paas. Waise bhi tere bina there is no life.

Just then bebe comes there nd says kunj puttar ladki waale aa gaye hai. Kunj -par main bebe. Bebe- muje teri koi baat nahin sunni chal ladki waale neeche sabka intezaar kar rahe hain.

Tbc.

Edited by tikit - 9 years ago

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sakshi

@..queen..

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Posted: 9 years ago

res

unres
that was intense
man, im dead already
dude, that was freaking awesome !!!
I loved loved loved it !!
sorry for being an idiot but rn, im just praying ki kunj does not marry again.
the story is so painful yaar, I can so feel it, I can feel kunj crying in front of my eyes.
oh tia !!
I love the name and I love her.
I loved the bond they shared.
I hope all goes okay and twinkle turns out to be alive
well, lets see
but now you can see im like an idiot gonna wait and wait and wait for an undate so don't be late okay ??

jjaldi se karo update

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Res.😃

Unres

Eshu dear u know how to start and how to finish.👏

I completely shaken by the first para itself.

Siyappa Queen and Saroo Sarna are made for each other.

One's non existing kills another.😕

I just trying to feel the pain of Kunj.

Tia and Kunj's bonding is beyond the word.

And Last Para,it's really interesting.

Eagerly waiting for what would be the next.😊

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Shaveerkti

@Shaveerkti

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Res. ..

I just read the 1st line & twinkles death...

I don't know whether I'll be able to read the whole story or not...

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lavanya

@amlavs

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Res..

Twinkle died..

Am gonna cry a bucket it seems..

--unres--

Eshu.. wonderful title..

Oh can't see broken kunj..

I believe twinkle will be back..(as a another person)

Second mrge??

Lovely...

Plz update soon..

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Anjum

@Abhia2Twinj4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Haaye it's so intense so feels😭

I'm already w8ng for the next updates😳n don't forget to p.m. me 😳😳

plzz I can't see twinkle death n Kunj state like this😳

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Sristi Malhotra

@20160990159

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Res...

Unres.
the concept is really a good one
how sad is Kunj 😭 i cried reading it a lot
Tia a good name
Kunj thinks Twinkle is alive ...I also want her to be with their angel and Kunj
father-daughter part was so sweet ...Tia cried with him aweee 😭
update the next part soon
Thnx for the PM

Edited by twinjlover9 - 9 years ago

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

that was soo intense ...

eshu...it's going to b very interesting...

i love the concept...

ladki waale?...

some connection with twinkle?..

twinkle will b back...that's for sure...

wating for next update eshu..

P.S...i love the name tia...

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tricksters

@tricksters

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Owww..poor kunj and tia 😭😭

Twinkle is dead..hope she comes back😉

Its interesting..something different...looking forward for ur next update.

Please update soon

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

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Pt 2.

Kunj decided to go down s baby told him too but the moment kunj decided to go down tia started crying. Kunj did not want to leave tia alone so he stayed back to look after her nd to stop his baby from crying.

Tia was really restless nd was not sleeping. After five minutes kunj sang a lullaby which his mothef used to sing for her nd tia slept taking his father's fingers in her tiny mouth. Tia slept soundly.

Half nd hour later

Kunj went down and met bebe. Bebe said ladki walon ne haan kar di hai. Kunj had a slight smile on his face.

2 days later.

Bebe sent kunj nd tia on a shopping spree. Initially kunj denied but after lot of forcing from bebe agreed to go for shopping.

Half nd hour later.

Kunj saw a baby shop nd wanted to take a dress for tia when someone pushed kunj from behind nd ran. Tia was about to fall when someone caught hold of her. Tia with sudden change in whatever was happening started crying. Tia cried for five minutes but stopped suddenly when she saw someones face. Tia happily smiled at the womans touch s the woman had a veil on her face. Kunj was about to thank the woman when he realised some people were after her. Kunj wanted to go behind the woman to tank her but realised he hsd tia in her hands. Kunj bought two baby dresses for tia nd came home.

Kunj tried to think who the woman was nd how come tia stopped crying when the woman held her s tia sould sometimes cry in even whrn bebe held her.

Kunj suddenly felt suffocated at home so he went on a five minutes walk in the garden along with tia.

Someone was looking at kunj nd tia with love in eyes nd tia smiled back.

Next day.

It was engagement ceremony. Bebe asked kunj to come down in the celebration. Kunj was not happy with the celebration s he felt something missing from his life. It was twinkle.

There were times for kunj when he would imagine twinkle near him nd suddenly she vanished. He sometimes used to cry alone in his room thinking of twinkle. Sometimes he would just talk to her photo or tia s if she was twinkle. Even though it was engagement ceremony he imagined the roka the two times twinkle nd he had. The first before their marriage where both were unhappy nd second when he got the ring from chandelier nd he made twinkle wear the ring.

Bebe called kunj said to surjeet to get the ring.

Half nd r later the engagement was completed.

Tbc.

Ik its short but next will be long.

Ik there r loopholes nd its because u will get to know in next update.

Happy reading.