Twinj FF:Dosti to Pyaar Pt 5 updt pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

RES...

Unres.
I told you that I'll be back soon and here I am coming after 2nd update 😆
sorry for that
this story is amazing...
so Twinj and Yuki are in same college
its so interesting ...Kunj caring nature was so beautifully described and aweee he respect girls a lot so he can't slap that girl that line was so sweet
and in this FF yuvi is no less he is also a very good person
m loving the pace of your story
continue soon
m eagerly waiting for it


Thank u 😊😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: piu22

Aww..so nice.. Waiting for the next part..

Plz update it soon

Thanks😊😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: amlavs

Nice update..

Am loving it ..
Signing competition..
Yuki and twinj... lovely..
Excited plz continue soon


Thank u😊😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Part 3

Hii Guys thanks for ur support and pls comment

Twinj sees them and Twinkle asks Kunj to come with her.Twinkle in a angry mood is walking and telling how could Chinki do that she is my sister she should share everything with me,and while she was walking down the stairs she kept repeating and slipped but of course on time Kunj holds her,and they come really close.Sajna Ve plays.
Usha sees them and smiles and starts coughing,Twinj compose themselves,but Twinkles chain gets stuck on his chain,Twinkle try's to remove it but fails,Kunj puts his hand over hers and removes it,she looks at him lovingly.Sajna Ve plays.
They come down and Kunj says we will come back by 10:00pm to Usha.Usha agrees and tells him to take care of Twinkle,he agrees and they leave.Twinj enter and come to Yuki.
T-Hi,Chinki u never told me about UV.Chinki is going to tell her but Twinkle says be quiet ur lie has been caught.
K-UV what is all this,at least u should have shared this with me.
Yuki-says fine,we r together but how come u two r together.

Twinj-singing competition,And we r partners.
Yuki-laughing say we two r taking part in the competition.
Twinj-embarrassed,look at each other and apologies to Yuki.
Yuki-says that u'll wl get a punishment and wl have to do it.
Twinj-fine.
Yuki-u have to tell us the song u'll will sing,and join us for dinner.Twinj agree.
Twinj tell Yuki that the song they r going to sing is Main Hoon Hero,Yuki tells them Janam Janam.
They have dinner,Twinj and Yuki are only left in the cafe,Two waiters come to their table and ask them to fill the form they give them the bill,suddenly the waiters look at at Twinkle and Chinki from top to bottom,both of them notice them staring,and Twinkle holds Kunj hand tightly and Chinki does the same,Kunj and UV see the waiters staring at them as when they were giving the bill the waiters were lookin at Chinki and Twinkle,Kunj and UV hold the waiters collar and says u are staring at them and slaps him,the waiter say sorry but Kunj and UV don't listen and keep on screaming at them,Twinkle tries to stop Kunj and in the process of stopping him,she pulls him back and he falls on her.Sajna Ve plays.

Chinki tells Uv that it ok,and while stopping UV hits her by mistake,the waiters runaway,UV holds her hand and says why u came in the way,Chinki says u would have got hurt.Manchala plays.
Yuki sees Twinj in that position and UV aks Kunj if he is ok,they get up and say yes,Kunj says come home it's better and safer at home,Twinj and Yuki hold hands and go together.
Kunj house.
U-Kunj what happened,so long what u'll did,Kunj and UV tell her everything.
U-comes to Twinkle and Chinki and asks them r they fine,They reply yes.Usha says it is 12:00pm,let me talk to your mom u'll spend the nigh here today,Chinki and Twinkle say it's fine,but Usha talks
U-Hi,actually I am Twinkles and college friend mom.
L-Hi,Twinkle told that she was goin,but till now she didn't call me I was very worried thank u for informing.
U-actually it's very dark,and late Twinkle can stay with us for a night.
L-no its ok I wl come to pick her.
U-keeps on on saying and Leela says ok.
Usha tells Twinkle that she will have to sleep with Kunj and Uv has to sleep with Chinki.
Usha informs Anita too.Anita,Usha and Leela says I have heard they're voices somewhere.
Twinj room
T-says thank u to Kunj.

K-comes to her angrily and pins her to the wall and says I told no thank u and sry in friendship.
T-Say ok.
K-leaves her,and says u sleep on the bed and I wl on the Couch(sofa).
T-says I listened to everything u said I want to sleep on the couch.
K-today I wl sleep,since u came first time to my house.
T-says fine,I wl sleep on the floor,Kunj gets shocked.
K-pulls her from the floor and it was a little hard pull,which made them close to each other,he says fine u can sleep on the couch.They go to sleep.
Next morning Kunj wakes up,and looks at Twinkle,who is going to fall Kunj goes running and she falls and wakes up in Kunj arms,he puts her and the couch and tells u would have fallen and broken all ur bones they laugh.Sajna Ve plays.

Precap-Twinj and Yuvi come to know about their moms being best friends and they all were childhood friends

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice update
loved the waiter's part
and the last part aweee kunj is always there to save her
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Loved kunj's and uv's caring nature
Waiting for the next part...
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

Nice update
loved the waiter's part
and the last part aweee kunj is always there to save her
update soon


Thanks and yeah i will😊😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: piu22

Loved kunj's and uv's caring nature

Waiting for the next part...
Plz update soon


Thanks and i'm updating soon😛😊😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Part 4


Twinj and Yuki come down for breakfast,Twinkle and Chinki take blessing from Usha and Usha looks at them in surprise,she says your mom gave u'll very good upbringing.Usha thinks about Leela's voice.
Twinj and Yuki start eating and suddenly Twinkle sees a cockroach and starts screaming and stands on the chair.Kunj asks her what happened and Twinkle says cock..cockroach,Yuki and Kunj start laughing suddenly Twinkle sees the cockroach approaching her and pulls Kunj closer to her and says Kunj pls save me,Twinkle gets more scared and starts jumping on the chair while she was jumping the chair starting shaking and she fell
on Kunj.Sajna Ve plays.

She continues screaming while everyone is laughing she sees herself and tells Kunj to put her down,Kunj says u r very heavy the chair starting shaking and my hands r broken holding u.Yuki try to control their laughter but Chinki starts laughing,UV try's to calm her by holding her hand,Twinkle starts chasing Chinki and while chasing each other they both fall down,UV rushes to Chinki and helps her to get up and Usha tells Kunj to help Twinkle p,he says UV is there he will help her,my hands r broken(funny way)but UV attention is only on Chinki,then Kunj comes to Twinkle and asks her if she is fine,she says why u came I can manage myself,she hides her hand behind her back since it is bleeding,UV carries Chinki to his room,Chinki sees his concern for her and looks at him lovingly.Manchala plays.
Kunj helps Twinkle to get up and Twinkle pushes him,he is shocked to see his strange behaviour and tells her to give her hand,Twinkle looks at Kunj and asks him how he knows,Kunj says u don't behave rudely and puts his hand around her shoulder and holds her left hand and takes her to his room.

Yuki:

Y-why don't u take care of urself.
C-it's not my fault,Twinkle was chasing me,BTW why r u worried.
Y-bcoz I am ur friend.
C-Aren't u over concerned.
Y-shouts at her and tells her go I won't care for u from today and I am nt ur friend.
C-Tells him what's he saying she keeps on apologies and finally hold his hand and convinces him,he agrees and she tells him never to say that again.

Twinj:

Kunj puts the iodine and Twinkle screams in pain,he says sry,sry and blows her cut,he put the cream and puts the bandage while putting the bandage,the bandage wraps his and Twinkles hand together.She looks at him and tells him Kunj was in his own world thinking about Twinkle.
Twinj and Chinki go in the same car,Kunj is driving and Twinkle is in front while Yuki is behind.
T-can I put the music on.
K-of course no need to ask.
T-she puts it on and Sanam Re plays Twinkle,awkwardly looks at Kunj.
Y-goes to sleep on Chinki's lap and Chinki keeps her hand on his head.Twinj see this and smile at each other,suddenly the car breaks,and Kunj keeps his hand across Twinkle to protect her and Twinkle looks at him.Sajna Ve plays.She thinks without thinking about himself he thought about me how sweet.
They reach Taneja Mansion and Chinki and Twinkle insist them to visit their mom.Kunj and UV enter and take blessing from Leela.
They talk for a while and Kunj recalls his mom telling about here best friend that was Leela and Anita.Kunj says me and UV wl leave.
Kunj house.
K-Maa what's the names of ur best friends.
U-Leela Taneja and Anita Luthra.
K-Surpised and says to himself I wl surprise all of them and share the news with Twinkle.
Twinkle gets his call.
K-Hii how r u,did u have medicine?
T-I'm fine,yes I had.
K-tells everything about their parents friendship and says that we were childhood friends they get excited and share the news with Yuki.

Precap-Twinj and Yuki come closer as they realise they were childhood friends and singing competition.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Really cute..
Waiting for more dhamakedar episodes..
Plz update the next part soon

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