Twinj SS - Fatal Attraction last chapter pg 24

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Kiara that was so scary.

Laughing at natasha's bit though making out with someone in front of his gf😆🤣.

This is one dark story.

But loving it.

Kunj seems like a psycho.

But kunj👏

Loving it

Kiara not fair only 3 more parts to go🤔.

Continue soon 😊.

Thanks for pm.

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Sammy

@Sdea

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

I read both the updates together and damn did they have a one night stand. OMG this sounds so interesting and so kunj is pretty much a stalker with all the unknown id? OMG i am sooo excited for the next update.Loved it.

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Sristi Malhotra

@20160990159

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

woahhh Kiara this was an amazing update
you know what I read most of the paragraphs 2-3 times just to check if I m reading it right or not,specially the para about her family
Twinj are being so different here but don't know why m loving them in this new way
and I liked the trio chat a lot as they share everything about their last night
Kunj what to say about him he is a stalker ...stalker is the one I hate the most but what to do I always like Kunj
ooppsss Kunj turns up at Twinkle's house what will happen if her family is there
your precaps naa I tell you makes me so curious
Now I just can't wait for the next update
please post it soon

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

K,I will be back.

Also here I saw Riya and Sristi also wrote lenghty;

have to read.😃

Backkk with full petrol.

Ok,peep peep;adjusted.😆

So at first congrats pal for writing first time wiiild.

I just imagine the whole wild part on Sidmine and got me in totally with ☺️ emotion.

You penned this potion with so decorously.

With small and tiny gesture by Twinkle after night you mentioned the whole night out.

Thumbs Up for this.👏

Also I love the girl's talk.

6 hours and all.

Congo for one day more older K.😆

And at last ; the mystry man!

Always feel unknown vibes from mystry.

Ane do Ane do;mystry ka toofan.

P.S.-So u decide that u give the dose frequently.🤗

By the way do u give royalty to Riya?😆

Edited by adi_FMT_ct - 9 years ago

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Komal1298

@Komal1298

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Om*g its so interesting!!

I liked dis obsessed side of kunj

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Lubana

@ASRkiMoonlight

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

omg omg that was awesome. loved it

please update soon and PM me😃

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Jambread3

@Jambread3

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Important note -
Hi guys!
Firstly,thank you so much for such lovely comments.I'm flattered.
I've read all your comments and I shall reply to them personally but for now I need to know one thing...
Guys do you want a happy ending or a sad one? I need to know cause I will then structure the next 3 parts accordingly...
I'm writing this for you'll so your opinion matters the most!
Let me know x
Lots of love,
Kiara.

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

K,seriously I love sad endings but you know what Riya gave me overdose of that emotion.😆

So for now i go for happy emotional ending.

U kknow na what I mean.😉

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Given the story title and tackling something like stalking, there's only one way this story should head in my opinion. Kunj goes off the rails in his fatal attraction towards Twinkle, so he either ends up dead himself or Twinkle ends up dead, either as another one down on his list of victims or she dies with him In the name of immortal love. An interesting plot twist would be Kunj being a serial stalker, maybe he's gone and done this to many girls prior to Twinkle? Basically it has to be a tragic ending. Anyone who says they want a happy ending will be deluded. Nothing good ever comes out of stalking 🤔

I went a little over the top 😆