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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I need longer updates dude. This story just got a whole lot interesting!

I find the idea of Twinj having a one night stand so amazing😆


Longer than this? 😲 I'll try!
Thank you! 😳
As for the one night stand idea being interesting,I agree with you! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3


Hahah aw! You fainting? I'll take that as a compliment 😛
Thank you so much baby 🤗



Tht was a cmplmnt babyyy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
I have no idea why I give a day as to when I will update,we all know how much I can't resist updating 😆 Screw the Saturdays,I'll update whenever I can! Here goes the next part,happy reading x

Chapter 2

The next morning Twinkle woke up only to find herself wrapped in silk sheets,engulfed in Kunj's arms.His one arm behind her head supporting it like a pillow and the other arm across twinkle's waist.

When twinkle opened her eyes she felt something on her face,she touched her face only to realize they were feathers.

Removing it,she half got up to see torn pillows and its feathers lying on the bed,their clothes which were fully torn lying on the ground.

In their wildness,they didn't even spare her undergarments.

At the side table,she saw scratches.She then remembered how the intolerable pain made her scratch that table.

She moved forward to see handcuffs and a pleasure tape lying near Kunj's legs.

Twinkle carefully moved Kunj's arm off her,picked up Kunj's torn shirt which was the closest to her and got up.

She went and stood in front the mirror.Slowly she touched all the bruises,hickeys and love bites given to her by him.

It still hurt if she touched it.

She was fully covered with them.He didn't leave a single body part while showering 'lust' on it.

Twinkle blushed while remembering last night's events.Last night was indeed very wild.Never had she imagined that they would get so wild.

In her 22 years of life,no one had ever pleasured her like the way Kunj had.

Brushing away her thoughts,she quickly went to the bathroom to freshen up.

After coming out of the bathroom still in Kunj's clothes,Twinkle found that he was still asleep.

She went to his cupboard and removed out his tracks and a t-shirt careful enough to not wake him up.

After wearing his clothes,she sat down and wrote a small note to Kunj stating how much she loved the night,her borrowing his clothes and thanking him.

Placing the note on the table near Kunj,she walked out of the room.
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As soon as Twinkle came to the hallroom,she saw people lying down here and there covered with cups and chips.

"Hangover much?" Thought Twinkle as she rolled her eyes.

She tried to look for Chinki and Natasha but not seeing them anywhere,she quickly checked her phone only to see "1 message" sent to her

From Chinki :
Hey babe,Natasha and I have left since we got a call from home.Reach home safely and Skype me at night,I need all the details of last night. ;)

Sighing,Twinkle put her phone in her bag and walked out of the house.Grabbing a taxi she straight went home.
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Taneja Mansion

As soon as Twinkle reached,she peeped inside the house from the door to check if someone was around.No one should see her in that state,or else she would be screwed.

She sighed in relief when she saw no one was around,she quickly tip toed her way to the room.

After having a bath and settling herself for food,she found out that her whole family which consisted of her parents,her mama's family, her sister Mahi,Mahi's husband Karan and Their daughter Myra had gone out for a function and would not return before midnight.

Finishing her food,Twinkle walked back to her room to get some sleep.
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At Night

Twinkle settled herself in the middle of the bed and switched on her laptop.

She then opened Skype,where Chinki and Natasha were waiting for her.
As soon as she was connected,they started chatting.

Natasha : what's up girlll?
Chinki : oh my god,twinkiii you're glowing
Twinkle : shut up you two,it's hardly been two minutes since we've started talking and you'll are teasing me already.
Natasha : oh come on cut the crap! How was last night?
Chinki : yes spill it.
Twinkle : last night was amazinggg! Like It was one of the best nights ever.
Chinki : how long?
Twinkle : Six hours!
Natasha : woah! Boss somebody's got potential haan!
Chinki : was he rough?
Twinkle : yeah,too much.I'm still sore.
Chinki : how many positions?
Twinkle : about 4 different kinds.
Natasha : my my! Why didn't I get him.
Chinki : Hahahahah
Twinkle : hahaha I'm lucky you see.
Twinkle : btw what did you guys do last night? Drank?
Natasha : Even Chinki got laid.
Twinkle : wait what? Omg congrats girl,who's the lucky guy?
Chinki : Yuvi,Kunj's best friend.
Twinkle : Ooo nice,how was it?
Chinki : hot!
Twinkle : Waise Nats,while we were busy what did you do?
Natasha : well I made out with a guy in front of his girlfriend.
Chinki : Hahahahah oh my god,that would have been hillarious,I missed it!
Twinkle : wait hold on,I just got a message from an unknown Id.
Natasha : well just close the tab so it doesn't surface on your screen.
Twinkle : I'm trying but it's not happening
Chinki : what do you mean it's not happening?
Twinkle : I tried so many times but it just won't go away. It's repeatedly flashing on my screen,I'm not able to chat with you guys,it's annoying.
Natasha : wait hold on,video call us while you reply to him
Chinki : good idea,do that!
Twinkle okay wait!

Twinkle quickly took them on video call and opened the message.

Chat between the unknown Id and Twinkle.

Unknown : hey sexy! :)
Twinkle : Do I know you?
Unknow : maybe,maybe not.
Twinkle : who are you?
Unknown : your ultimatum.
Twinkle : is this some kind of a joke?
Unknown : don't label my feelings as a joke,it hurts.
Twinkle : look whoever you are,I'm not interested,I'm going to go ahead and block you.
Unknown : hahah! I like your sense of humour.You see sweetheart,no matter how hard you try you won't be able to save yourself from me.

Twinkle quickly minimised the chat and tried to block him but couldn't.

Opening the chat again,

Twinkle : what do you want?
Unknown : I want you.And just remember I always get what I want.I'll be back.See you later baby. ;)

Next,twinkle read "the Id is now offline"

Twinkle panicked and told Natasha and Chinki about the conversation.

On the video call -

Chinki - "oh my god,what a bas***d!"
Twinkle - "guys I'm scared.What if he tries to harm me?"
Chinki - "don't be scared babe,Nats and I are here for you.He wouldn't dare."
Natasha - "Twinks,send me the id,let me check for this asshole"
Chinki - "yeah that's a good idea,Natasha has the app to know who's the person behind the id,give it!
Twinkle quickly passed on the details of the id to Natasha who started her work.

After about 5 minutes.

Natasha - "oh my god! I don't believe this.Is that even possible?"
Chinki - "what happened Nats? What's wrong?"
Natasha - "you guys gotta be kidding me.Twinkle are you sure it's this Id only?"
Twinkle nodded.
Twinkle - "Nats please tell me what's wrong,don't scare me more than I already am"
Natasha - "guys I've found out the man behind this"
Chinki and Twinkle - "who's it? Spill the name"

Natasha - "the name is Kunj Sarna"
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Precap - Twinkle,Chinki and Natasha follow Kunj.Kunj turns up at Twinkle' house.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
🤪 TwiNj taking WILD to a whole 'nother SIDE!!WOHOOO!!!!!!!
Great chap!!
This story is already pulling me in like a magnet! I am so intriguied!
The part where we found out Twinkle is married! was like SLAM! Big surprise!
But then I am like ok...let that sink in...
But you gace us another surprise and now Kunj (assuming its actually Kunj) is stalking/threatening her!
And I am blown away again!

Great chap👏
Looking forward to the next part.

PS: I just remembered your warning that this is dark, and now I wondering if I am too invested. Should I prepare for heart break? 😆
Edited by neverlandspirit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Omg..kiara wonderful update..
Gosh.. The way u wrote abt the nite incidents was bang on..
U r amazing writer must say..
So its kunj chatting with twinkle..
Omg here our beloved kunj is a drak character..
Loved it..
Plz.update soon..
Thx for pm..
Lots of love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Kiara darling...🤗
Its just awesome...I loved it.
Kunj and twinkle 😳 ...love u babies
Its beautiful...chinki and UV🤣
Again 3 more chapter right??..this was a small chapter compared to ur 1st chapter..If u can make a longer update😃.
Thanks for the update and PM.
Please update soon.
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome job .
Loved the update .
Loved TwiNJ.
Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
K, i am here
Btw i want more updates

But RES
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
finally...K...I read both the chapters...
this is amazing...truly...
u chose the perfect title...😉
amazing concept yaar...
so ...what's up with kunj..?
i'm waiting for this mystery to unfold...
kiara...if u have chap 3 saved somewhere...
then update it now...😆
i'm sooo sooo curious to know what happens next...
yesh...i'm sooo excited abt this ff ...😳
update soonish girl...plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Look who's finally here..!!
Firstly m so very soory for being the last joiner in the party..

Man..!! That's such an awesome and unique concept..
I loved the story for being real and straight forward..
I can relate myself to twinkle's character since m also a doctor and made my identity onnmy own without asking a penny from my parents..
My father is also an industrialist whose name is also Rajendra.. My mother is also a buissnesswomen.. But our bond is so cheerful and healthy..
Wait..!! I hope u r not stalking me..😆

The first part was bang on.. The usual real stuffs that happens.. Nats and chinki are awesome.. Made me remember my two besties from medical college..

Wohhh..!! The wild one.. That was way too wild..

Wait..!! Kunj is the stalker..!!! The negative character..
No no no that can't be happening.. I can't see him breaking her trust and torturing her..

I hope the stalker turns out to be someone else probably using Kunj's ID.. May be Yuvi..😆
Poor baby twinkle..

Anyway let's wait to see how u shape the story..
M totally hooked..

Update soonish..

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