Twinj FF- The Perfect Couple Ch43 Pg57 27/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Wooo the bold twinkle...loving her
And coming to your mature content it was not at all
vulgar...don't think of removing it
it was sensual but not vulgar..
Keep going
And ya thnks for the PM Shraja
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice chapters
Twinkle is so bold here I liked her that side a lot
and Kunj so loyal
thanx for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
NOTE: Hello everyone. Hope you guyss are liking my ff !
Plzzz plzzz guys do comment and tell me about it. It really motivates
me to write more. So this note is for asking some suggestions on the chaptr that wud have their consummation. On your request it is going to be mature and 18+...
I m not very good at setting and all, so just answer the questions below on how u want to see their consummation ? I have never written it b4, so the first time wud be a lil difficult.

1-- What shud be the special occasion that wud stimulate this ?
2--- Where u want it to happen ? Their own house or somewhere outside ?
3-- Shud Twinkle be shown as shy or bold ?
And if u people want any specific scene, do tell me, I will surely try to add it !

Thank u ! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
I will personally love a bold twinkle there is no specific occasion tht i want u can show whatever u want but i want the should start on living room sofa n then on bedroomfloor then on bed rest is on u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Your story..is really good...
No disturbance in twinj's love is a bliss for twinj fans be it in FF or in tei. ...

Loving the KUNJ & Twinkle here...They r #Goals


Keep updating...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
OMG I hadn't seen this one yet
Will be back after reading the whole thing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
I would say a bold twinkle with little shyness in between. ...
And ya some kitchen romance or start it with some romantic dynamics in their closet...
Just my opinion. ...at last its your choice,
And ya I have full faith in you...I know we'll get an awesome hot update 😃 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Guyss plzz comment and keep motivating me ! M introducing a new character in ff which is not actually part of tei.
Inaya Sarna--- She is Kunj's younger sister. Almost the same age as Mahi and had been studying in Paris from last 3 Years. She came back to Amritsar when Manohar went into coma. She is a very cheerful and lively person. She was the one who had supported Twinkle along with Bebe in tough times. Twinkle and Inaya had got along really well as if they were real sisters and after Yuvi's exit, Mahi had also joined the grp. The instant Inaya had met Twinkle, she knew they wud get along pretty well and had been so happy for her brother. She was quite modern just like Twinkle. (Imagine Sanjeeda Sheikh as Inaya )

Chapter 10
Twinkle as usual had woken up early next morning. She silently went to the balcony as it was drzzling and the whether was perfect. She dint want to wake up Kunj as she had seen him so carefree and peaceful after a long time. Their life had been a complete mess in Amritsar she thought ! She called Mahi and learnt aftr Twinj had left Amritsar, Mahi and Inaya had gelled up well. They had started going out together and Inaya had completely transformed Mahi. Now one cud say that Mahi was truly a London return. She started wearing western cloths. Leela was very happy and considered Inaya also as her own daughter. Twinkle was happy as now evrything was falling into place.
Next she had called up Chinky who 2 Weeks back had shifted to Chandigarh and was in a live in relationship with her fiance, Karan. Chinky was very excited to noe abt this and the Two best frnds within no time had planned to meet with their better halves today afternoon at a restaurant.
Twinkle was going to turn and go back to their room, when Kunj engulfed her in a back hug. And started kissing her shoulder.
Tw: Kunj tum uth gaye ? Aur maine toh itna sweet sa plan bnaya tha tumhe uthane ke liye. So ah vo cancel. Btw Gud morning !
Ku: Morning Baby ! Ohh no ! So shud I go back and sleep ?
Twinkle smacked at his arm and turned around.
Tw: No need Kunj ! Btw u noe Chinky lives with her fiance in Chd, So we have made a plan to meet ! She happily clapped her hands.
Ku: Yeah, u can go baby.
Tw: Not only me, u r accompanying me. We will meet Karan for the first time. And its an order. (Tw spoke in a firm voice pointing finger at him)
How cud Kunj have refused to his Sherni !
Ku: Fine, I will go get ready. Btw when u were busy talking to Chinky, dad had called and informed that they won't be able to make it for my office's inauguration tomorrow. He said sadly.
Tw: Hey its ok. Dont worry, we will rock it !

------Aftrnoon----
Twinkle had worn a cute knee length floral dress and Kunj had worn a white shirt with jeans. They looked sexy.
Twinj had met Karan and Chinky. Kunj wud have to admit Karan was a good person with body almost same as Kunj and they had got along pretty well. He was happy to find a new friend in Chd. Karan had his own business firm and had acheived heights on his own. Over lunch, they both had already made plans of meeting after their work and spending some guys time ! Twinj invited Karan and Chinky for the inauguration. Chinky and Twinkle were happy seeing their guys get along well. After their lunch, they both had insisted on shopping, their fav. pastime, and Twinkle wanted to buy something elegant for the inauguration. What cud have been better than doing it with Chinky.

Kunj and Karan had dropped the girls at shopping complex which had Indian wear from all the top designers. They themselves went to gaming zone for a match of snooker. Many girls had come up to them and tried to flirt, and they being the loyal ones had not even paid any attention. Girls were going gaga over them. They had bursted out laughing at the attention they were getting.
After 3 Hours, Twinkle and Chinky had finally managed to buy sarees for themselves. Soon the couples bid goodbyes to each other and drove back home.
----At home in kitchen ----
Aftr changing into their nightwear...
Kunj was preparing coffee for themselves and Twinkle prepared instant noodles as they were very hungry and tired.
Ku: So twinkle, I hope u have bought something classy. There is going to be Media and other delegates, so u shud look like wife of THE KUNJ SARNA..
Tw: Offcourse Kunj, dont worry all eyes are going to be on me tomorrow. U shud never ever doubt my fashion sense and style. But Kunj I hate this media people, they always try to peep in our personal lives.
Ku: Baby I noe it. Dont worry u just have to face them tomorrow and dont worry i will always be by ur side sweetheart !

aftr dinner they started watching movie in their living room. Nd by the end the were already asleep on their big comfy sofa with twinkle on top of Kunj.

----Precap: Inauguration and Consummation----

Thank u everyone for giving me suggestions. Your ideas will be considered. Happy reading ! Keep commenting !

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Shraja don't know how I missed this FF of yours.
Very interesting and love TwiNJ here.
Beautifully done.
Please do continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
This chptr was so show consummation, but the inauguration part got so lengthy that i have decided. To show consummation in next chptr,
Warning: This chapter is the lengthiest I have written til now. Not very romantic though. Just showa their support for each other. Plzz comment and tell me what u liked the most ! :)
Chapter 11:

Next Morning (Inauguration Day) :
The event was supposed to start at 2 Pm.
It was 10am and Twinj were still sleeping on the sofa.
Kunj's phone had rung two times. And on the third bell, he woke up and carefully picked up the fone without disturbing Twinkle who was sleeping on him.
The call was from Kunj's PA.
Kunj had to talk by whispering !
Ku: Hello Jai, why did u call me anythng imp ? I am coming to office by 9:30,. (whispered in a sleepy tone)
PA: Sir, its already 10... I think u were sleeping. Sorry to disturb u sir. But there is some issue with electricity. U need to come urgently.
Kunj looked at the wall clock and paniced. He was so late. Even Twinkle had not woken up by now.
Ku: Ohhk... I will be there in 20 Mins !
He paniced and immediately woke up Twinkle by shaking her vigorously.
Ku: Twinkle wake up ! Wake up fast.
Tw: Kunj plzz baby thoda time aur.. Just 10 Mins.
Kunj was highly paniced and was by now not in senses. He dint want anythng to go wrong on his 1st day. So he spoke angrily.
Ku: TWINKLE !!! For god sake will u wake up or shud I push u off me.
Twinkle immediately jumped of him and was startled. He had never talked to her this way aftr their confession. Tears started rolling down out of her eyes. Kunj realised what he had done.
Ku: Twinkle baby, m really really very sorry. I shud not have shouted. But I was not in senses. There is some issue at the office and we had been sleeping late. In panic, I shouted. I m sorry. He himself had tears in his eyes.
Twinkle understood his situation and hugged him tightly.
Tw: Its ok Kunj, I m sorry too, I shud not have slept on u.
Kunj was hurt with her words. He realised he was just too harsh on her.
Ku: Baby, I dont have any isse with u sleeping like this. Its just the situation that is wrong.
Twinkle was still a bit hurt . So she turned around and started walking towards their room with Kunj following behind.
Tw: Kunj I will take out ur clothes. Get ready, u have to reach office. Till then, I m in kitchen. Will make u a quick breakfast.
B4 Kunj cud say her anythng, she quickly handed Kunj his clothes from the closet and rushed to the kitchen.
Kunj got ready in 10 Mins nd wnt to the kitchen.
Ku: Twinkle m going, will be back in an hour. Till then u be ready. We will leave together for event at 1 pm. I dont want to have breakfast. He was feeling very guilty.
Twinkle immediately stopped him.
Tw: Kunj plzz thoda sa kha lo. Aise bina khaaye jaana is not gud. Nd served him glass of juice without making an eye contact. Kunj had it enuf. He pulled Twinkle and made her sit on his lap.
Ku: jaan, plzz talk to me. M so sorry. Tum mujhe daanto, maro yaan kuch bhi karo but plzz ignore mat karo. Plzz talk to me. Ur silence is killing me. Tears started flowing down his cheeks.
Twinkle immediately put her hand on his mouth and put her other hand on his cheeks.
Tw: Kunj Plzzz dont ever talk again abt death. Saza toh tumhe milegi.. I will think abt it ! She wiped his tears.
Ku: So did u forgive me ?
Twinkle did not reply rather kissed him.
She stood up and gave him breakfast.
Kunj ate quickly and went to his office.
Ku: See u soon Baby.
Tw: Bye Kunj, nd plzz dont drive rash and overspeed in a hurry.

Twinkle went back to their room and took bath.. She went to the closet and wore the saree blouse and skirt. That's when she realises she does not noe how to tie a sari. In Amritsar, bebe or leela helped her. But wat wud she do now !
Tw: Kunj sahi kehta hai, hoon main siyappa queen. Ek aur siyappa ! Babaji help me !
She thought of doing her makeup nd side by side think of some solution. After doing her makeup and hairs, only solution she had got was to try herself. She tried it 2-3 Times but it was all messed up.
Kunj had entered home with the extra keys he had.. He had been standing at the door of closet for quite a while and staring Twinkle. She was so engrossed in tying her sari and muttering that she dint notice Kunj.
Tw:(to herself): Jaldi kr Twinkle kuch. Kunj aane wala hoga. Kis siyappe mein phas gyi hoon.
Ku : Haan Twinkle, sach mein tu Siyappa queen hai. Kisne kaha tha tujhe saari lene ko wen u dont noe how to tie it ?
Tw: Kunj yeh na mere fav. designer ka only piecw tha and it was the best. Uss time mujhe yaad nhi raha abt this ! Abh main kya karoon. I think i shud wear sumthng else. She said sadly.
Kunj walked upto her and took the sari in his hand and pulled twinkle by waist. He kissed her forehead.
Ku: Baby dont get upset, I will do it. Y fear when Kunj is here. U remember I tied ur saree perfectly in Mrs. Amritsar Competition.
Twinkle grinned and nodded.
Tw: aww ! U truly are a superhero. Lekin sirf mere !
Kunj tied the sari in one go sometimes tickling her bare waist. Or touching her shoulders sensually.
Ku: Look in the mirror... So now u look like my queen.
Twinkle was looking gorgeous. Her saree was a heavy embroidered maroon and black combo with golden work. Perfect makeup and hair tied in a loose bun elegantly. Waist visible from one side and backless blouse.
Ku: I wish main tumhe yahi band karloon. Kisi ka haq nahi banta meri itni hot biwi ko nazar uyha ke dekhne ka.
Twinkle giggled. Tw: Kunj, jldi se ready ho jao.. U shud look equally hot and sexy. After all mere pati ho tum.
She removed his shirt and Kunj removed his jeans. Twinkle handed him his party suit which was all black and the upper 3 Buttons of shirt were missing. (Imagine the one kunj wore in Mahi's sangeet).
Twinkle buttoned up his shirt and they had a cute eyelock. Kunj picked up Twinkle and made her sit on the slab in their closet and made her wear heels.
Now both looked perfect and were colour co-ordinated.They looked like Greek god and goddess.
Tw: my god kunj ! U look so sexy.
Ku: Baby we getting late. Lets go !
Twinkle pulled kunj with her in front of the mirror and posed for selfies.
She took her clutch and they both walked out of their apartment.

----Office----
B4 exiting from car..
Ku: Twinkle u noe how media people are. They just need chances to peep in our private life. But plzz dont be afraid, I will be there with u only. We will handle them together.
Tw: Thank u Kunj !
They entered the office hand in hand with bodygaurds at their side and media people following around and clicking the pictures of the perfect couple.

Kunj made Twinkle sit at the front row with Karan and Chinky nd went to stage to give the introductory speech and some key points of his new business. Then at last he introduced Everyone to Twinkle.
There was a press conference scheduled after this. Kunj and Twinkle both were sitting there smiling for the cameras and had their hand entwined.
There were some questions regarding Kunj's new business and he answered them.
Suddenly one reporter asked : Twinkle mam we heard u had a relationship with Yuvraj Luthra before marriage. Is it true ? Plzz confirm mam. Nd where is Yuvraj now ?
Kunj knew this wud be asked sooner or later. But when he saw Twinkle's teary eyes, his anger knew no bounds.
Kunj yelled at the reporters.
Ku: Hey u Mr. Whateva... Out within seconds. I guess this meeting was for the new office. U people have no rights to interfere in my personal life and no right to question my wife.
He stood up and pulled Twinkle with him to his cabin and locked the door.
Tw: Kunj I m sorry, bcoz of me, people always insult our relationship.
Ku: Jaan nahi. We promised each other ki we will forget the past. I told u Na these reporters just need news.. Plzz dont cry jaan. Dekho varna tumhara saara makeup kharaab ho jayega. Aur fir tum mere saath khadi hui achi nhi lagogi,. Kunj chuckled.
Twinkle smiled and wiped her tears.
They went back to the party and enjoyed the evening with everyone.

-------Precap: consummation-----
I promise in next update u will definitely get their consummation ! Plzz bear with the extra long length of chptr !

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