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Posted: 9 years ago
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I had posted this chptr, but dont noe why it dint get posted. So I had to type the whole chapter Again...Uhhh this is so annoying ! So on ur request, this chptr shows their consummation and it has mature content in it. Strictly for 18+... Enjoy ! Nd plzz do comment ! :)
Chapter 12 (Mature 18+)

Whole evening, Twinj had many cute eyelocks. They both wanted each other so badly.

They reached home at night. Kunj locked the main door behind him as they both entered. He immediately pulled Twinkle and pinned her to the door. And kissed her wildly. They broke aftr 5 mins and breathing heavily.
Ku: Twinkle thats it.. I cant control Myself anymore. U look too hot in this sari.
Twinkle dint do any eye contact and played with his shirt buttons.
Tw: Toh kis ne kaha hai control krne ko ?
Ku : Really twinkle ? Baby u... U mean to say...
Twinkle kissed him in approval.
Kunj without breaking the kiss.. Removed her saree pallu from shoulder and den spinned her around to remove her saree. Within no time the saree had been haphazardly thrown somewhere across the living room. Twinkle was equally responding and removed his coat and shirt. Kunj was now shirtless. Twinkle blushed to see his body.
Kunj then picked her up and laid her down on the sofa. He started lifting her saree skirt slowly teasing her.He started kissing her feet and tickled her. Twinkle clutched the cushions beside her. He then slowly moved upward kissing everywhere. Twinkle was getting more and more wet with every kiss. Kunj had to do this as he knew this was her first time and she needs to be lubricated enough to reduce pain. With one pull the skirt was thrown somewhere behind the sofa. Kunj then moved upward and opened the dori of her blouse and slid it down. She was lying there shyly with no cloth on her upper body. Kunj gulped at his wife's perfect curves.
He one by one kissed hard at both her boobs hardening them and sucked at it. Twinkle was ecstatic and was comtinously moaning Kunj's name.
Twinkle slightly pushed Kunj and was going to switch positions when Kunj nodded her in a no.
Ku: Baby plzz, its ur first time. I want to make it special. So this time, u r just going to relax and enjoy ! Sabh kuch tumhara yeh hot husband karega. He grinned and twinkle nodded.
He moved down and kissed her navel. And then very slightly started removing her underpants, the last piece of clothing on her body.
Twinkle kept a hand on her organ.
Ku: Baby u trust me ryt ?
twinkle nodded.
Ku: Then dont be shy. I love ur body. Moreover I like my bold twinkle more.
He removed her hands slightly parted her legs and slid his tongue in her. Twinkle held onto his hand and pushed him more into her. She was in heaven. This feeling was all new for her. Her body was radiating heat and then in a stroke she orgasmed partially !
Tw: Kunnnjjj...
Kunj licked all her wetness and knew she was now ready for it.
so he quickly shed all his clothes. Twinkle for the 1st time had seen him fully naked and she blushed hard at hia arousal.
Ku: Baby u ready ?
twinkle nodded.
Ku: Baby it may hurt u at the starting, but then it will be ok. I will try to be as gentle as I can.
Twinkle smiled.
kunj took her hands and wrapped them around his organ and put his hands above twinkle's
he then slowly entered her.
Twinkle screamed in pain and tears rolled down her eyes. She was now no more a virgin.
Tw: Kunj...Kunnnjjj aaahhh aaahhh its paining.
Ku: Baby plzz bas thoda sa hoga then u will feel good. Baby if u dont want this, i will pull back.
Tw: Nhi kunj plzz continue.
Kunj entwined their hands and pinned them above Twinkle's head. He bent down nd kissed her. She calmed down a little.
Twinkle's pain was reducing slowly and she was feeling good.
So Kunj started thrusting in her. Both reach their orgasm and released.
Kunj switched their postions and now twinkle was in kunj's lap And again their moans started.
Kunj then picked her up in his arms and took her to their room and placed her on the bed.
He kissed her forehead and twinkle smiled.
Ku: Baby r u ok ? I hope I dint hurt u much.
Tw: Nhi Kunj u were very gud. Mera first time tha na so it hurted. But thank u.. We r finally one ! I love u Kunj !
Ku: love u 2 Jaan.
Tw: Kunj can we do it again ? I want to have it fully on our bed.
Ku: sweetheart abhi nhi. U r very sore right now and u wont be able to handle it now.
Tw: Kunj plzzz.
Ku: Nahi sweetheart not now. I promise we will do it tomorrow night. Abhi u need to sleep.
Tw: But Kunj maine kahin pada tha ki doing it everyday is not good for health.
Kunj chuckled
Ku: Twinkle maine kab kaha ki ham roz krne wale hain Haa ? Nhi sweetheart. We will not do it everyday.
Tw: But this was soo good. Aur tumne kaha tha ki from next tym i will feel better with less pain. Toh mujhe roz krna hai.
Ku: Twinkle bacho ki tarah zidd mat kar and just sleep. U really need rest baby ! He cuddled with Twinkle and pulled the duvet and slept peacefully with a genuine smile on their faces.

------Morning after scene and surprise guests----
I hope this was upto ur expectations.
And guess who their guests wud be ?



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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Hello everyone.
I guess u people are not liking my ff. As i m hardly getting any comments. There have been so many views of the ff but not much comments. It really hurts.
So I have decided to end the ff probably by next chptr and dont worry it wud be a happy ending !

PS: My real name is Shriti. U all can call me that ! :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Oh god yeh kya tha!
This was awesome need to read it again.
Oh dear no please don't end the ff.
Response milega you just keep writing.
I have some personal problems going on so I can't comment but I really am reading. I love the way you write it is really very nice.
So don't stop and please pretty please continue your ff
But the way loved the part haaye mere twinj ek ho hi gaye.
It was awesome
Continue writing and I'll definitely try to comment.
As I said in my previous comment do try to inculcate that scene I would really love to read it
Love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
No plzz dont do this dont leave its a request will try to comment as much as i can but plz dont leave
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
So finally they did it...
Wow yr it was so awesome. ...
Twinkle saying "kunj hum roj krenge".. 😆 😆 and kunj saying tu bacho ki Tarha jid
mt kr soja...that's so sweet and caring of him..he was concerned about her health...Yr he is to serious hubby goals..

Imagine if this scene would have been in tei with (only and only sidmin ) as twinj...
Ohh my sidmin shipper Heart..i soo badly miss sid
😭 😭
Shraja your story is superb yr...pls don't end it pls
Your way of writing is simply amazing...
Please reconsider your decision. ...don't end it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Shristi,
Please dont take it wrongly.
If u want to get comments properly then you should update one chapter daily.
Yes you now had time to write.
So u can write in any word page and then go for copy-paste job here daily.
You are too first to update and we became late here to comment on each update.😆
And dont even think stop writing FF here.

As for me I just finished reading the all chapters.
Very Very well written dear.
Waiting for next update.
Hope u continue.

Thanks
Aditi

Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: shraja

NOTE: Hello everyone. Hope you guyss are liking my ff !

Plzzz plzzz guys do comment and tell me about it. It really motivates
me to write more. So this note is for asking some suggestions on the chaptr that wud have their consummation. On your request it is going to be mature and 18+...
I m not very good at setting and all, so just answer the questions below on how u want to see their consummation ? I have never written it b4, so the first time wud be a lil difficult.

1-- What shud be the special occasion that wud stimulate this ?
2--- Where u want it to happen ? Their own house or somewhere outside ?
3-- Shud Twinkle be shown as shy or bold ?
And if u people want any specific scene, do tell me, I will surely try to add it !

Thank u ! :)

For your FF,My suggestion is
1.Yes,the special occasion would be their marriage anniversary.
2.I prefer own house / own bungalow for first time specially.
3.I think that Kunj can arrange a suprise dinner for her biwi in their special date.After then they get close and make some stuff playfully.And I prefer the first action of Twinkle would be shy then she can go for wild.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Shraja u r amazing irl.
Don't think of ending soon.
I loved twinj romance.
More mature stuff is coming. Yay
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
NOTE:
Hello everyone. So through your comments and pms, I have come to know that I am updating way too fast. And you guys are not able to comment. So I have decided that I will not post any new chapter for the next 2 days. So u guys can easily follow up.
Also the no. of chapters per day wud be reduced to 1 Or I might post 1 Chptr in 2-3 Days.

Keep commenting.
Thank u.

Love, Shriti ! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
This is so lovely story Shraja. The title is perfect and the story is just so cool. Loved every bit of it and all the chapters are written perfectly. The way you build up the story and twinj transition to chandigarh and then they getting close together is just so perfect. Thank you so much for putting so much time and making us happy with your story. These stories are giving breath to the forum as we still imagine Twinj as sidmin . Please keep writing these kindof stories so that we can keep imagining them . Once again thank you and please keep updating.

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