Twinj FF - Distorted Destiny Completed on Pg 39 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story kiara. Read all the chapters in one go and craving for more. Please do update wanna know how kunj gets his siyapa queen back and they both are together. Hope Cv's read your story and Sid back. This will be great gift to fans as we are missing sidmin like hell.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kiara loving ur story. Best breakfast ever till date. Twinj r so cute. Aww want twinj to be together. Cant see kunj upset and twinkle please come back to kunj. Thanks for pm kiara. Hope u continue soon. Missing sidmin as twinj.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: roshni101

First of all I am so sorry for commenting so late. I've been busy with studies so I wasn't able to comment before. Extremely sorry about that.
Now coming to the updates, you just blow me away with your writing.
I barely have words to describe how beautifully you portray everything.
Loved all the updates to the core.
The chapters were brilliant and mind blowing.
The bond you've showed between the family is really nice. All the twinj scenes were so sweet and amazing.
Aww poor Twinkle. Feel bad for her.
I hope Kunj is able to convince her that she belongs with him only.
Continue soon. Eagerly waiting 😳


Thank you so much Roshni,your kind words always make me smile 😃 and please don't be sorry!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: justchillalways

Awesome story kiara. Read all the chapters in one go and craving for more. Please do update wanna know how kunj gets his siyapa queen back and they both are together. Hope Cv's read your story and Sid back. This will be great gift to fans as we are missing sidmin like hell.


Thank you so much 😳
Yeah I really wish they could have shown something like this,even I miss Sidmin a lot 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Kiara loving ur story. Best breakfast ever till date. Twinj r so cute. Aww want twinj to be together. Cant see kunj upset and twinkle please come back to kunj. Thanks for pm kiara. Hope u continue soon. Missing sidmin as twinj.


Thank you so much,means a lot 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
i loved it so much
kunj's soncern for Twinkle was so beautifully written really as everyone is saying its one of the best breakfast date
and Twinkle being jealous was so cute and her sayings to babaji was superb...titiliya word for the girls behind Kunj made me laugh 😆
sorry for the late comment actually I commented yesterday but due to some connection problem it was not posted and I noticed it now
thanks a lot for sending me the PM of this wonderful story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it ! Please update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

awesome update
i loved it so much
kunj's soncern for Twinkle was so beautifully written really as everyone is saying its one of the best breakfast date
and Twinkle being jealous was so cute and her sayings to babaji was superb...titiliya word for the girls behind Kunj made me laugh 😆
sorry for the late comment actually I commented yesterday but due to some connection problem it was not posted and I noticed it now
thanks a lot for sending me the PM of this wonderful story


No problem,thank you so much for commenting,means a lot! I'm glad you liked it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TWINJ_SIDMIN

Loved it ! Please update soon :)


Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
With this chapter I become a senior member here,yayyy! Anyway here goes the next chapter,happy reading x
Chapter 12

Just as Bebe finished her praying,she heard a knock at the door.

Kunj - "Bebe,Kya mein andar aa sakta hun?

Bebe - Haan putar aana"

Kunj - "Bebe I hope Meine aapko disturb Nahi kiya"

Bebe - "Na na putar,kaisi baat kar raha hai,bata kaise aana hua?"

Kunj went and sat beside her on the bed.

He had a lot to talk about but he didn't know from where to start. Slowly he lied down on Bebe's lap. Bebe smiled and started stroking his hair. It had been so long since they had sat together. They missed the old them.Kunj couldn't help but cry at the fact that he and Bebe had drifted apart. He had hurt his Bebe so much.

He let the guilty feeling set in and closed his eyes as he let his tears fall on her lap. Bebe knew he was crying but she didn't stop him,she wanted him to let it all out. He had suffered a lot.

After about 5 minutes,kunj began

Kunj - "Yeh Sab Kya hogaya Bebe? Yeh Sab kyu hua? Kyu jab bhi meri life mein kuch Accha Hota hai tab Sab Kharab ho jata hai. Kya mein happiness deserve Nahi karta?"

Bebe - "Na putar Aisa mat Bol. Tu iss Duniye ki Saari Khushi deserve karta hai. Tu toh mera strong putar Haina?"

Kunj - "Nahi Bebe,mein aur strong Nahi reh sakta. Mujhese aur Nahi Hota."

Bebe - "Kya baat hai putar,aisi konsi baat hai Jo tujhe khai jaa rahi hai?"

As soon as Bebe said this,kunj bursted out crying like a small baby. He couldn't stop himself anymore. He wanted to cry himself out,the pain had become unbearable now.

He cried in his Bebe's lap which felt like Forever.

In between his sobs,

Kunj - "Bebe ab woh mujhese pyar Nahi karti"

Bebe - "Yeh tu Kya kehra hai putar,kon tujhse pyar Nahi karti?"

Kunj - "Twinkle Bebe.Woh aab mujhese pyar Nahi karti.woh mujhe bhul chuki hai."

Bebe - "Nahi putar Aisa Nahi ho sakta. Twinkle toh tujhse Bohot pyar karti hai."

Kunj - "Agar woh mujhese pyar karti hai toh woh mujhese dur kyu jaa rahi hai" kunj asked like a baby.

Bebe smiled at his innocence.

Bebe - "Putar woh Tujhse dur isiliye jaa rahi hai kyunki woh tujhse Bohot pyar karti hai."

By now Kunj got himself up,wiped away his tears and listened carefully.

Kunj - "Bebe agar woh mujhse pyar karti toh mujhse dur kyu jaati?"

Bebe - "Putar kyunki usse lagta hai ki jab tak woh tere aas paas rahegi tab tak tu Khush Nahi reh Paiga. Usse lagta hai ki Teri yeh halat uski Wajah se hui hai. Agar woh Teri life mein na rahe toh shayad tu Khush rahega,Aisa usse lagta hai."

Kunj was now angry.

Kunj - "Woh samjhti Kya hai khudhko? Jab Dekho kuch bhi utt patang Sochti rehti hai? Ek baar mujhse baat toh kar hi sakti thi na. Bohot Shauk hai usse mother Teresa baneka. Woh yeh kaise bhul gayi ki agar woh mere saath Nahi hogi toh mein jee Nahi paunga. Mein gussa bhi toh Nahi kar sakta usse,itna pyar Jo karta Hun. Mein Kya Karu iss Ladki ka Bebe?"

Bebe - "Pyar kar usse putar.dekha usse ki tu usse kinna pyar karta hai.jeet le uska dil firse.jaa mere sher aapni woti ko iss ghar mein le aa."

Kunj - "Haan Bebe aap sahi keh rahe ho. Bohot ho Gaya twinkle ka bachpana.Ab aap dekhna,ki Yeh Kunj Sarna,Mrs.Sarna ko wapas kaise Lata hai."

Kunj smirked. This was indeed going to be fun.
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Next morning,kunj was awake early.He needed to make the perfect plan.

Kunj - "Bohot Shauk hai na Miss Amritsar ko mujhe pareshaan karne ka,ab dekhte hai,kab tak mujhe resist kar paigi."

As soon as he heard her foot steps,he jumped on the bed and pretended to look very weak.

To make his performance look more realistic,he started falling of the bed.

As twinkle entered the room,she saw Kunj half fallen of the bed.she quickly ran towards him to stop him from falling.

Twinkle - "Kunj,Tum thik toh ho na?"

Kunj - "Kon hai Bhai? Kaun pukar raha hai mujhe?"

Twinkle - "Arre mein twinkle"

Kunj - "Kaun twinkle?"

Kunj tried very hard not to laugh but seeing her worried face was like a cherry on the top of his cake.

Twinkle - "Arre mein tumhari biwi twinkle."

Kunj - "Oh meri siyaapa queen."

With that twinkle steadied Kunj on the bed.

Twinkle - "Kunj Tum bhi na,dhyan rakhna chahiye na"

Kunj - "Arre mein kyu dhyan Rakhu? Tum ho na mera dhyaan rakhne ke liye"

Twinkle's face dropped. Seeing this Kunj continued,

Kunj - "Accha chalo twinkle,hum bathroom chalte hai?"

Twinkle - "Arre kyu?"

Kunj - "Arre Bhai mujhe shave karna hai. Pata hai Bohot time ho Gaya hai shave kiye,kahi Aisa na ho ki thode Dino ke baad mera face hi na dikhe."

Twinkle - "Ek min,face kaise Nahi dikhega?"

Kunj - "Arre Bhai,mera pura face hair se covered ho jayega na."

With that Kunj started laughing loudly on his own joke while twinkle made a face.

Twinkle - "Kunj Tum bilkul bhi funny Nahi ho"

Kunj - "Jab se tumse shaadi hui hai tab se meri zindagi funny ho gayi hai."

Twinkle - "Haw Kunj Tum kitne mean ho,agar aisi baat hai toh mujhse shaadi kyu ki?"

Kunj - "Woh Kya hai na mein social service mein believe karta Hun."

Twinkle's mouth was wide open by now.

Kunj - "Oye aapna muh band kar warna crow andar Chala jayega"

Twinkle - "Lekin according to the kahawat,isn't it a Makhi that gets into a mouth?"

Kunj - "Haan twinkle Lekin Tera muh itna bada hai na isliye tere mein crow ghusega."

Twinkle - "Haw Kunj Tum na"

and with that twinkle started Kunj with the pillows. They kept running behind each other all around the room. Their laughs could be heard down too.

While running Kunj took twinkle in his arms and moved around while she laughed whole heartedly. and at that moment Kunj fell in love with her all over again.

Soon their chasing game was over and both of them sat on the bed half panting

Twinkle - "Lekin mujhe ek baat samjh Nahi aayi"

Kunj - "Woh toh roz ka hai,ab Kya Nahi samjh aaya?"

Twinkle - "Tumne mujhe aapne saath bathroom aane ko kyu bola?"

Kunj - "Oh woh,actually mein na Bohot weak ho Gaya Hun toh na tu please meri Shave karne mein help karde."

Before twinkle could speak any further

Kunj - "Accha chal fatafat bathroom mein aaja,mein Tera wait kar raha Hun."

With that Kunj smirked and walked towards the bathroom leaving a confused and shocked twinkle behind.
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Precap - Twinj bathroom romance and Kunj asks twinkle out on a date.
Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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