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Posted: 9 years ago
Another beautiful update!
It broke my heart to see Kunj crying like that but I guess it was very much needed. No one can stay strong always. Awww...Kunj thought Twinkle doesn't love him anymore! Well he is more than wrong!!
Loved the entire Bebe-Kunj interaction..it was lovely.

AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR TEH NEXT CHAPTER!
Ahhh...shave scene!!!!

Sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

Awesome update Kiara
its a fully packed chapter
Bebe-Kunj part was so nice and Kunj crying it felt 😭 ...
and the Twinj scenes aweee...m just going to read it again
and again the Precap is making me really very curious and this time m thinking about it much more than I should 😆
plzzz update soonish


Hahah how nice,I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you,I'll update in sometime 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Another beautiful update!

It broke my heart to see Kunj crying like that but I guess it was very much needed. No one can stay strong always. Awww...Kunj thought Twinkle doesn't love him anymore! Well he is more than wrong!!
Loved the entire Bebe-Kunj interaction..it was lovely.

AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR TEH NEXT CHAPTER!
Ahhh...shave scene!!!!

Sorry for the late comment


Please don't be sorry! I'm glad you liked it,lots of twinj romance on the way 😉
Thank you though 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amid this hating and bashing chaos,let's all do some breathing exercises and do yoga for our peaceful minds.im really sorry,something's wrong with my humour today,pls don't kick me out of the forum. 😆 Here goes a happy chapter for all the sweet people here. Don't mind the super long update.

Chapter 13

Twinkle entered the bathroom and closed the door behind her.

Kunj - "Oho wifeyji mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha ki meri Izzat danger mein hai."

Twinkle - "Chup Karo Kunj mein Nahi chahati ki koi andar aaye aur humme aise dekhe"

Kunj - "Aise?"

Kunj asked while coming closer to her. She kept going back while Kunj kept going forward until twinkle hit the wall behind and was trapped now.

Kunj - "Aise matlab kaise Mrs.Sarna? Hum Aisa bhi Kya karne wale hai?" asked Kunj is his husky voice.

Slowly he moved one strand of her hair from her face that disturbed his staring session at his beautiful wife.

Twinkle closed her eyes to let this feeling sink in. She could never control herself when Kunj was around her and Kunj knew this.

Slowly he moved forward and placed his hand on her waist.twinkle had started breathing heavily by now. She could feel the butterflies in her stomach,she could feel herself go a teen again.

Kunj then came forward and placed a feather like kiss on the corner of her lip before moving back and stationing himself near the basin.

Twinkle frowned as she couldn't feel kunj's warmth anymore. She opened her eyes to see Kunj staring right at her smirking.

That's when she realized that he had done this on purpose. How silly was she,she needed to control her hormones. She had to stick to her decision.

Wiping the sweat of her face she moved towards Kunj and took the razor and foam in her hand.

Kunj then moved his head forward so that twinkle could put the foam properly.

Twinkle started putting foam on kunj's face. While she did her job,kunj again took the opportunity and grabbed her waist and pulled her hard to himself.

Twinkle was shocked.

Twinkle - "Ku.nj yeh yeh tu.m Kya kar rahe ho?"

Kunj - "Shh"

He then took her hand that started applying the foam on his face again.

He was painfully slow. Twinkle could feel her breath slow down each minute. She couldn't control herself anymore. She needed him,she couldn't resist him.

On the other hand,the same turmoil was going on inside Kunj. He wanted to make sure that twinkle couldn't resist him but here he couldn't control his emotions. He needed her too.

Slowly both of them lost their control and Kunj picked twinkle up and brought her to the shower.

Slowly,he turned the knob on,the water making them as wet as their emotions right then. Kunj then took twinkle's hair on one side and kissed her wet neck.

Twinkle closed her eyes and she felt an electric current pass through her body. Kunj then pushed his front on twinkle's back.they were far from turning back now.

Twinkle then turned towards Kunj and placed a kiss on both his eyes. she then hugged him tight.

The water and their bodies clashing just made the heat in the bathroom increase.

Kunj then slowly dipped in for twinkle's lips as twinkle closed their eyes.

They were inches apart when they heard twinkle's phone ring. This brought both of them from their fantasy world.

Embarrassed with what had just happened,they didn't look at each other's eyes.

Twinkle then picked her phone up and rushed outside leaving a blushing Kunj behind.

Twinkle came running down the stairs when she saw cherry and Bebe sitting there.

Cherry - "Arre twinkle babiji yeh Kya hogaya? Aap itni bhigiwi kyun ho?"

Bebe had seen the look on twinkle's face. She saw how her chest was heaving when she took big breaths and how she was red.

"Woh mein zaara ghar ho kar Aati Hun" whispered twinkle as she ran outside the house.

Cherry - "Arre yeh inhe Kya hogaya? Yeh Kya upar holi Khel rahi thi Kya?"

Bebe - "Oye tu chup kar good for nothing kahi ka aur chup chap mere saath ludo Khel."
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Taneja house

Twinkle couldn't stop thinking about their encounter in the afternoon. She could still feel his touch still on her skin. She had decided to leave but Kunj was making it hard for her. She needed to stay strong.

Suddenly she heard a knock at the door.

Leela - "Twinkle putar,kunj tujhse Milne aaya hai"

Twinkle - "Ji maa"

She straightened herself as she saw Kunj enter the room.

He locked the door behind him and went to sit beside twinkle on the bed.

Kunj - "Um twinkle woh"

Kunj didn't have enough words,he surely wasn't embarrassed after what had happened because they've felt each other before,he was just embarrassed enough to not able to to continue

Kunj - "Twinkle woh mein soch raha tha ki kyun na hum aaj raat dinner pe chale?"

Twinkle was shocked,she couldn't believe how unknowningly this man was ruining her plans to leave. She wanted to say no,no matter how desperately she needed to leave, seeing the hint of hope in his eyes made her melt.

Twinkle - "Haan theekh hai"

Kunj - "Great toh tu 8 baje neeche
aajana.Mein maa aur Bebe ko bata dunga."

Twinkle nodded in agreement.

Kunj - "Mein chalta Hun" and with that Kunj left.

Twinkle smiled,this man was crazy.

"Waise toh babaji yeh sher bana ghumta hai lekin jab dil ki baat bolni ho toh kitna nervous Hojata hai" wondered twinkle.

At night,

Twinkle decided to wear a pink gown.She didn't wanna make Kunj wait so she was all ready by 7:45.she remembered all the times when she used to be late and how much that irritated Kunj.

She was giving herself a last touch when she heard her mother scream,

Leela - "Twinkle putar jaldi neeche aa,kunj aagaya hai."

Twinkle ran down stairs and in a rage she twisted her leg,fearing that she was about to fall down,she closed her eyes but she never touched the ground.

How could she forget that till her hero was alive,he wouldn't let there be a scratch on her. Kunj had intervened on the right time and held her.

Their eyes locked again. How mischieves were their eyes,no matter what their owners did,they always found a way back to each other.

Kunj - "Twinkle tu thik toh hai na?"

"Haan",said twinkle still his arms.

Kunj - "Yaar twinkle kaisi aisi hai tu
yaar,matlab dekh Kar Nahi chal sakti? Lag jaati toh? Matlab tune na than liya hai ki tujhe koi na koi siyaapa karna hai."

Twinkle was lost in those loving eyes which which only showed love and concern for her.

Their lovey dove moment was witnessed by manvi and mahi.

*cough cough*

Twinkle and Kunj looked out to see where the noise was coming from.

Manvi - "Aww aap dono saath mein Bohot adorable lagte ho,kyu di?"

Mahi - "Haan Manu tu bilkul saahi Bol rahi hai.Pata hai jiju na humesha di ko girne se bacchte hai."

Manvi - "Wow jiju aap toh handsome ke saath saath super hero bhi ho."

All this while twinkle and Kunj were looking here and there not looking at anyone. They were blushing way too hard.

Mahi - "Waise bhi mujhe toh pura yakeen hai ki jab tak jiju di ke saath hai tab tak di ko kuch Nahi hoga"

That's when tuwnkle and Kunj looked at mahi.

Mahi had genuinely meant whatever she said and somewhere even twinkle knew that till Kunj was there,nothing would happen to her.

Twinkle - "Um main woh Bahar car mein wait karti Hun."

Kunj mentally slapped himself when he saw twinkle leave,he was now trapped with his two mischievous sister in laws who tried all the ways to embarrass him.

Kunj - "Um mein bhi chalta Hun. Maa se kehna ki hum jaldi as jayenge."

Mahi and manvi giggled as they nodded.

Manvi and Mahi together - "Have fun jiju!"

Kunj waved his hand and left.

As he did,manvi and Mahi high-fived each other and bursted out laughing.
x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x--
Precap - Twinj romance and Kunj's out burst.

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely.
Loved it.
Was blushing beech mai
Continue soon is all I can say.
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kiara their bathroom romance was so😳☺️. I could not stop blushing. Manvi and mahi r too adors sis.
Kiara continue soon. Is ff mein kuch nasha hai twinj ka. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
When i started reading I saw no one has made a comment yet...& hence I thought I would be the 1st one To comment but...
This was not super long rather it was super good...
Romance...😳
Bebe's understanding the situation. ...😛
Cherry...🤣
Mischievous sisters...
...Our Sher kunj with a heart of gold...❤️

& OMG...PRECAP...
UPDATE SOON...I JUST CAN'T WAIT...KUNJ'S OUT BURST...
INTERESTING. ...
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Shaveerkti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly Thx for pm dear..
My god the bathroom romance was breath taking.. I was blushing hardly..
Sooo blushy blushy TWINJ.. Loved sisters teasing..
Wanna know Wats gonna happen next which leads to Kunj outburst..
Luved it dear kiara..(BTW I luv ur name ah)..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeah Kiara ...
Bathroom romance was .. ugghh.. i'm at loss of words!!
Well.. this can describe my expression all the while i was reading --> ☺️
Cherry and Bebe !! 🤣
Cherry's such a dumb fella!!! 🤣😆
I liked the update .. and now I'm way too excited for Kunj's outburst!!! 😃😳😛
Good goingg!!! Waiting for the next part ..
And..
Thanks for the pm!!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai,
This Chapter is full on romance.
I simply loveee those subjects which is mentioned by u darling.-Hormone Control & Electricity Pass.😉
And Bebe,i tell u she knew everything about our lovey dovey couple.😳
In Between this romance The Good For Nothing is engaged with Ludo.😆
I adore the pulling between Jiju & Shaali.😊
Eagerly waiting for lovey dovey's dinner.
Ok Byee I will go for another time reading.🤗

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