TEI TWINJ OS: Next Chapter; Collab w/Tranqility123 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
I doubt u need our praising comments lol
Khud hi start hogayi ho
Give me till tomorow ill unres
Abhi wards pe sab k sath masti time hai u know jumping around and stuff lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res 😃
unres
you know this made me sad and happy at the same time
happy because you both did a collab 😆😆 and because it was amazing and was everything i would have wanted in the show and sad because it's hitting me that this won't ever happen in the show!
honestly this would have been the perfect ending to the show
gosh where to even begin fangirling 😆😆
how cute abhi bhi ek kiss ki liye taras raha hai kunj and twinks twinks twinks come on yaar give him a kiss she's got wayy too much self control 😆
and awww kunj getting angry and then Bebe coming in sensing the fight 🤣 and twinkle throwing the pillow at him 😆😆
and awww look at them being so cute after their first night! 😉😆
and rinni moment - teds should be happy 😆😆
it was so amazingly cute and was everything i would have wanted and a perfect end to sidmin wala twinj ❤️
Edited by ...Shakti... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
This was so amazing 😳
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is just awesome
Loved it
Very Well Written Guys 👏



Thank you Baby bear! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

UNRES

Needless to say but this was fricking adorable!!
Looolll...All Kunj wants from his wifeyis some lip action and poor thing is soo desperate for it!
You both have wonderfully portrayed TwiNj here ...everything was soo in tune and perfect
How I wish this happened on the show!!

I WAS MORE EXCITED THAN THEM ON THEM MOVING OUT!!!😆😆

All in all a beautiful sweet little story.
Thanks you both!😃😃



Mehwish so happy you liked it! We both wanted a happy ending and perfect closer hence this piece.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sdea

UNRES

Ab saari taarif khud hi karli Toh main kya karoon😆
But like this was amazing. I GET MY HAPPY ENDING😳
Kunj was so cute-Tera hero idhar khara hai aur tera dhiyan uss ke ilawa har jagah hai?" like its only KUNJ SARNA who can say these cheesy lines and get me to drool over him
And his concern like OMG WHERE IS MY KUNJ SARNA HIDING?😔
The whole see off part, it would have been sooo amazing if they showed twinj leaving for London in the show too with all these scenes.And you guys added BUBBLY❤️. She is sooo cute with all the sulking to her favourite brother in law.😳 Ahh i wish they showed more of their bond in the show too.
Pinni Mammi be the best. SHOPPING LIST is sooo her😆 And mammu ko mat batana my RINNI FEELS☺️
You guys this was sooo good.This is so tashan e ishq and the ending i always dreamt of
Love you guys for this❤️
PS- you can always write on twinj babies. I am not demanding here😳😆




LOL I know Kunj Sarna is the only cheesy man I can tolerate the dialogues from. He's just way too charming!!

I LOVE BUBBLY! I just had to add her in. I wish we could still see a bit of her around! I hat when family members just disappear like that!

LOL RINNI is goals!

Will definitely think about it. we love doing collabs so whenever an idea strikes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

This is so adorable.
Loved it.



Thanks you Duumps! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

res 😃

unres
you know this made me sad and happy at the same time
happy because you both did a collab 😆😆 and because it was amazing and was everything i would have wanted in the show and sad because it's hitting me that this won't ever happen in the show!
honestly this would have been the perfect ending to the show
gosh where to even begin fangirling 😆😆
how cute abhi bhi ek kiss ki liye taras raha hai kunj and twinks twinks twinks come on yaar give him a kiss she's got wayy too much self control 😆
and awww kunj getting angry and then Bebe coming in sensing the fight 🤣 and twinkle throwing the pillow at him 😆😆
and awww look at them being so cute after their first night! 😉😆
and rinni moment - teds should be happy 😆😆
it was so amazingly cute and was everything i would have wanted and a perfect end to sidmin wala twinj ❤️





I know I wish we to a perfect ending but indian shows. you can't really expect anything from them.


I had to put Bebe in! She's the best whenever they both are fighting and she takes the best alternatives in making sure they both make up.

THEY ARE SO ADORBSS RIGHT!

yep, perf ending! Glad you enjoyed it Shakti!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was so amazing 😳
Loved it



Thank you Anisha! You're amazing too! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

RES!Got so much to read😆


Thank you so much both of you for writing this happy end that we all wanted so badly!And no one could have done it like you guys did,so beautifully.

Kunj being deprived of his rightful kisses is such a pleasure to read🤣
I loved how bebe sensed that something was wrong between them.
Kunj is such a baby when he pretends to be hurt and angry at her.
The vanvas dialogue cracked me up.😆
The ending was just so perfect with everyone.

Loved this!I'm going to remember this OS as the end to TEI after the SR episode.

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