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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Okay for some reason, I was under the impression that you'd carry on the story from where we left off on TEI but OMG IM SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT THIS IS A BASICALLY A RE-TELLING

So much nostalgia bruh, I cant. Old TEI feels hit me hard. I feel like I'm reading the book to the show and as a book lover, I'm already loving this so much! The descriptions are perfect, the visualisation is great. You need to update soon because Im one of those people that likes to finish books within the day so the waits are going to kill me but I know it'll be worth it!

I couldn't have asked for a better person to write this for me Areeba, you are bae 😎

Edited by Tranquility123 - 9 years ago

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Areeba nice first chapter. The characters r purely intact as they were in serial. I laughed a lot when sunny and twinkle met. I mean hot body and butter chicken.

Waiting for kunj's entry. Hope u continue soon. Thanks for pm. Areeba this was pure treat.

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Areeba,At first Thank u for BR & PM.

I was really waiting for ur FF.

& Yipeee my wait is over.

Uff u bring me in recalling zone dear and I have no hassle to repeating the line again and again that "WOH KYA DIN THE".Sigh!

And Now about the story,before the fangirling of any couple i always relish the bonding between mother-daughter and then Twinkle's Siyappa with lots of drama obviously.

I always admire your detailing either in charecterisation or in nearby.And yes you specially mentioned to our weakness i. e.Manohar's eyebrows.😆

Now i am eagerly waiting for next update.

"HERO KE ENTRY ABHI BAKI HAI MERE DOST"😊

Lovee u.Take Care & enjoy your trip.

Edited by sa86 - 9 years ago

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Loved the first chappy Areeba 😳
Amazingly written
Cant wait for Kunj's entry
Update soon
Thanks for the PM

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Areeba finally you updated!

I was gonna send you a pm to update this

Res

Dude, i'm like galf way throught it and this is exceeds my expectation for sure

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Shaveerkti

@Shaveerkti

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Resss

'll be back afer reading. ...

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: maisarah
No wrds to dscrbe ur wrtng skills... U did mgic dear ... Updt soon nd must pm

Aw thank you. Hope you rad the first part and that lives up to the expectations!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Sorry took so long.Got caught up with the pre boarding stuff of the job.

It obviously exceeds my expectations! The prologue is intriguing.
And this ff is a bonus for me coz I have not followed the show from the beginning.

Useless RT had a role to play😆 I loved Yuvraj's part,i feel so sorry for him.
Looking forward to the first chapter.

Dude so glad you liked it. I hope the part one lives up to the expectations too. 😳

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: tikit
Wow the prologue is awesome areeba. If i m not wrong the guy is uv. Do update fast areeba.

Thank you!

Yeah the little boy in the update was Yuvraj. 😳

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Sdea
RES😊
Areeba this was so beautifully written. Even the little things like Anitas dressing style was perfectly described. I could actually imagine her in her over the top clothes in scorching heat.😆
Twinkle got rid of the 49th Guy. The girl is totally pagal😆
I loved how you described Manohar Sarnas undying bharosa on guruji and gurujis advices are so pro twinj 😳.Looking forward to the next part. Do update soon😃

I really didn't properly proof read this chapter so i'm super glad you guys liked it. I really truly am.

Yep you know Twinkle and her crazy antics. Plus majority of the things are super close to the actual show so the facts and stuff are straight from there.

Yep Guru ji is total PRO TWINJ as in the show and Manohar is totol pro Guru ji!

I'll update next week but i do have a surprise in the middle waiting period for you guys! :)