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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Areeba!!!! This was so sad, i mean good sad, not that this wasn't nice or anything cus it was amazing, but you know it was sad. Why do i feel i should stop talking now?

Lol i tend to keep talking unless someone shuts me up 😆

You explained RT's distress and accident so well. So RT is no more? That'd be so good. As you see, I have immense love for RT in my heart 😆

And the whole deal with baby Yuvi, just shattered my heart. Was I supposed to feel so sad about it? You just wrote all of this so well, I can't even comment on it.

The part where, Yuvi was ignored by all and he slept on the ground all alone made me bawl. Poor kid 🥺

I'm really excited for the next parts and thank you for penning this down, our show will live on in this story

P.S bro, You are so good with words. I'm borderline jealous now. Who am i kiddin', I'm jelly now

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Sammy

@Sdea

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Areeba OMG THIS WAS AMAZING.

Is the prologue supposed to be this amazing because i can already feel like this story is going to be awesome.

It was so beautifully written especially the whole baby yuvi. I don't want to feel bad for him but like the way you described makes me 😭

So is RT dead and omg this is already so intriguing.

Dying for the next part already.

Honestly stories like those are the only thing that makes me move on from TEI ❤️

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: kardooks
Areeba I don't know what to say, I'm speechless this introduction was just amazing.
When you started the paragraph about the little boy watching tv and his parents arguing I was so sure it was Kunj, but as I read further my pores raised as I realized who the little boy was.
Honestly my heart broke for him.
This is very beautifully written you definitely have me intrigued can't wait to read further. I'm going to read it over again.

Thank you Karen! I wanted leave a base for Yuvraj and show something that was not shown to us on-air that had been a foundation for his character. I'll try my very best to stick to the characterson-air as much as possible.

I'm glad you liked the prologue and the next update lives up to the expectations.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...
res
SOOO EXCITED!!

unres
okay so i couldn't wait till my flight 🤣
i loved it! loved how you explained the crash with that ullu da patha RT 😆
and omg can i just say the way you described everything with anita, yuvi, and his dad was just amazing! you are really super talented! you should write a book!

i cannot wait for the first chapter!

LOL ullu da patha RT! 😆 He really is useless.

aw, well lets hope this FF reaches it's end soon so we can turn it into a novella book or something of it's own.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
OMGGG ITS HERE ITS HERE. RESS

I feel like crying. Seriously am I supposed to feel like this? 😆
This is so engaging already bro. I was reading through it and my heart broke for baby Yuvi. I can't wait to see how this unfolds! I'm so excited for the next update already. Thank you for finally putting this up, I feel like TEI lives on 😎

You're SO EXCITED!! 😃

Well I didn't for you all to cry but if baby Yuvi made you cry then i really hope that sympathy slowly dies away as he destructs himself. I hope that TEI lives on too through this too in a good way.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Duumps
Areeba this is amazing.
Loved the prologue
Looking forward to the rest of the story to unfold.

Thank you for the pm.

Thank you Duumps! Means a lot.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow areeba..
Its wonderful start..
Initially I thought tat boy was kunj..
Poor baby boy UV..am curious to know Wat ll happen next..
Will be waiting for ur next update..

The next update will take a leap but other then that you have to stick and wait to read to find out. I think the best part about Yuvi and Kunj is that they both had a very similar situation growing up but there results were exceedingly different which idled them into two different kind of people.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
This was so beautifully written Areeba 👏
Loved the prologue
Cant wait for the first chappy
Update soon 😳

Thank you Anish! I hope you like the next chapter as well!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
FF BY YOU!Surely today is a very goody good morninggg!RES!

Hehe; waiting to hear! I hope it reaches the expectations!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Unres...

This was just the introduction and GOD! it was good!!
Loved the subtlety and the clarity of the whole thing...
Wonderful...👏👏

Eagerly looking forward to more!😃

Coming from you that really means a lot! I hope you enjoy the updates too! 😊

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