TEI FF: Love & War *One Updated Page 5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Okay for some reason, I was under the impression that you'd carry on the story from where we left off on TEI but OMG IM SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT THIS IS A BASICALLY A RE-TELLING

So much nostalgia bruh, I cant. Old TEI feels hit me hard. I feel like I'm reading the book to the show and as a book lover, I'm already loving this so much! The descriptions are perfect, the visualisation is great. You need to update soon because Im one of those people that likes to finish books within the day so the waits are going to kill me but I know it'll be worth it!

I couldn't have asked for a better person to write this for me Areeba, you are bae 😎

Originally posted by: tikit

Areeba nice first chapter. The characters r purely intact as they were in serial. I laughed a lot when sunny and twinkle met. I mean hot body and butter chicken.

Waiting for kunj's entry. Hope u continue soon. Thanks for pm. Areeba this was pure treat.

Originally posted by: sa86

Areeba,At first Thank u for BR & PM.

I was really waiting for ur FF.

& Yipeee my wait is over.

Uff u bring me in recalling zone dear and I have no hassle to repeating the line again and again that "WOH KYA DIN THE".Sigh!

And Now about the story,before the fangirling of any couple i always relish the bonding between mother-daughter and then Twinkle's Siyappa with lots of drama obviously.

I always admire your detailing either in charecterisation or in nearby.And yes you specially mentioned to our weakness i. e.Manohar's eyebrows.😆

Now i am eagerly waiting for next update.

"HERO KE ENTRY ABHI BAKI HAI MERE DOST"😊

Lovee u.Take Care & enjoy your trip.

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Loved the first chappy Areeba 😳
Amazingly written
Cant wait for Kunj's entry
Update soon
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Areeba finally you updated!

I was gonna send you a pm to update this

Res

Dude, i'm like galf way throught it and this is exceeds my expectation for sure

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Waise if you read closely in, hero ki entry already ho chuki hai. 😉

Awe dude thank you i haven't written properly in a long while so the detailing is always abrupt imo and i wasn't really satisfied with the update but still updated because yu guys wasted so long since i put up the prologue.

LOL Manohar's eyebrows!! 😆

Thanks dude!

Originally posted by: sa86

Yes You are right but u know,

"AAKHON HI AAKHON ME ISARA HO GAYA.".😉

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...Areeba updated..

How I missed it..stupid lavs..

Amazing first chapter..

Luved sunny-twinkle meeting..

Am excited to see Wats gonna happen next..

Will be waiting for it next update..

Originally posted by: kardooks

OMG cuddly bear appeared like a Jedi and booked her first spot.

I'm taking second post.😆

Areeba this was very enjoyable, I especially loved the way you introduced Kunj and Twinkles reaction to his presence.

I loved the carefree, bubbly Twinkle playing the drums and enjoying Chinky's engagement.

Oh my gosh you resurrected Preeto 🤣 and Manohar's eyebrows got special mention🤣.

I'm missing the old TEI so bad this gave me so many feelscan't wait for the next chapter.