Twinj + Cherry OS: Afsoz - Page 2

Teddy 🤗

This is just awesome very well written Teddy
I could actually imagine this happening
Good Screenplay
I just feel a little bad that they turned Cherry into a Kameena again
I loved the good Cherry

Wow...Nice teddy...

I legit momentarily forgot I posted an OS 😆 Thank you all for your lovely replies, imma start responding in a few 🤗

Okay maybe I lied...it's like almost 3am LOLs and I have work tomorrow so I'll only reply to some maybe BUT TOMORROW I PINKY PROMISE. I feel like I'm talking to myself. It's totally cool. Just ignore me anyone reading this Kay thanks?

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

First of all sorry for taking your first spot Areeba, the excitement took over😆

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DUDE SAME #WAVELENGTH! I cant accept Cherry until he's fully redeemed himself for that incident either. Yes, his comedic timing is great and I find him hilarious but at the end of the day, he's still a leech.

I really enjoyed this! You should really write more often so that I can return the praise you shower on me all the time lol

I'm so glad Kunj was there when the news broke. Just imagining how awkward and uncomfortable it wouldve been for Twinkle had they been alone in that room gives me *shivers*

Is that why you needed to know yatra?😆Cherry might have to make a few of those especially the way his recent track is unfolding.

Kunj apologising to Twinkle was so adorable. Bae wants to speak so shut up and listen woman😆She found safety and home in his arms. Omg the feels bruh. I love them so fricking much.

Amazing shot Teds!

Lmao I think most people now know that first spots on mine & Areeba & your work is reserved 😆 I will fight anyone on yours and Areeba's threads LOLS.

YAY SAME WAVELENGTH! Exactly, it's like I enjoy his scenes but then I rmr he's a jerk and I'm like nahhh b. Aww haha thank you! I shall try, now that I'm off from school, I will write more!

Oh gosh I know omg, I couldn't leave twinkle there alone and she would've never said anything so he had to overhear!

Again thank you! The last part esp wasn't read over so I'm glad you enjoyed it buddy <3

Originally posted by: Sdea

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i don't get how when you guys write sooo well, why would you not write more😲😲

teddy this was awesome. Like i totally feel you, every time cherry did something good also, that farmhouse stuff flashed infront of me. He needs a proper redemption cum punishment track.

i loved the angry kunj, i could actually imagine kunj all red with anger and his famous veins that is so visible when he gets angry😆And bebe is sooo bae😳

i loved it do write more

I wanna thank you again for letting me have #1 spot on Areeba's work LOL 🤗 AWWW dude! Thank you so much haha. Ugh seriously whenever I think of that scene and how Kunj didn't believe her and how happy cherry got, I get so mad & sad.

Famous veins for sure! He is smokin when he's angry LOL. Thanks again! :D

It was really nice pieace of writting
Loved it