Twinj + Cherry OS: Afsoz - Page 3

this OS is amazing. wonderfully written!

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

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Angst and You!The perfect combination!

LOL Natasha I'm pretty sure you mean angst + YOU is the perfect combo :P hope you read it soon! :D

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

I WANTE DTHE FIRST SPOTTT

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OK, this isliterally so amazing I cannot! Cherry's consciousness awaking and him wanting to apologize was a big step and the family'ssection and Kunj's reaction to everything was so apt.

I loved how Bebe was thankful for Surjeet to not be present. Surjeet had been bitter towards his brother but he has always stood by what he felt was right and he had given Bebe utmost importance.

Also theending of Twinkle trying to lighten up Kunj's mood. So Twinkle thing to do! She is literally so selfless that she doesn'trealize it herself.

Everything was so brilliant!! You shoulddefinitely write more!

I think we should start adding PS to our work & say sorry but you can't comment until ___ does LOOOL.

Aww Areeba okay that means a lot coming from you because your work is so good so the fact that you enjoyed it so much makes me super duper happy :))) Cherry really does need to wake up and smell the roses lol so I really wanted to write on this.

THE SURJEET PART WAS JUST FOR YOU LOL. Yeah exactly, he couldn't see Bebe in that position because of his own son!

Thank you again 😳

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

amazing amd brilliantly written Teds. you are such a nice writer. you should write more. lots of love <3

Thank you Jerry!!! I love you a bunchies <3 will be writing more as school is over, again seriously thank you for the compliments hehe!

Originally posted by: teddyyy

I wanna thank you again for letting me have #1 spot on Areeba's work LOL 🤗 AWWW dude! Thank you so much haha. Ugh seriously whenever I think of that scene and how Kunj didn't believe her and how happy cherry got, I get so mad & sad.

Famous veins for sure! He is smokin when he's angry LOL. Thanks again! :D

Originally posted by: kardooks

Wow Teds I love this.

Talk about a tone of bricks, man you brought a house down on Twinkle, after the shock with Yuvraj, now having to deal with the fact that Cherry also tried to force his way on her.

Glad that Kunj overheard though, because Twinkle would have kept it to herself.

Surprised though that with Bebe's upbringing Cherry turned out the way he is.

Love this!

Thank you Karen 🤗 Yeah I feel like twinkle has every right to know what Cherry tried to do with her, especially since they are chill now but who knows if she ever will?

Omg right?! And how Kunj was so awesome with Usha Rani...

Love you 😳

Originally posted by: tikit

Loved the os teddy. Hoping to read more stories from u.

Thank you very much Eshu! Will write more soon hopefully hehe!

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

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Nemo the fact that you're always 😆 makes me so happy 😆 thank you for your lovely comment once again!

Originally posted by: -.Perk.-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#993333">Loved it ! Beautifully written Teddy ! thnx fr the PM :D</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#993333">Do write more :)</font>

Thank you buddy and no problemo at all 😃

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Okay maybe I lied...it's like almost 3am LOLs and I have work tomorrow so I'll only reply to some maybe BUT TOMORROW I PINKY PROMISE. I feel like I'm talking to myself. It's totally cool. Just ignore me anyone reading this Kay thanks?