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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yuvraj had perfected his plan finally. No one could steal Twinkle away from him, if not his, then she can't belong to anyone else. There's only one solution to this problem. Twinkle's death. The first step was simple, get Kunj away from the premise. He bribed the secretary at college to call Kunj informing him about a last minute crucial exam which he had to sit. Yuvi stood on his balcony watching his plan work. He saw Kunj and Twinkle at the doorstep, Twinkle making Kunj eat yoghurt and giving him an "all the best" kiss. His blood starting boiling. "Yes Kunj, enjoy your last moments with your life" is what Yuvi thought at that point in time. He had already placed a jammer in Kunj's car which would stop the network on his phone from working hence cutting possible communcation between him and Twinkle. He was an evil mastermind and had planned this down to the T. Yuvi then called up Twinkle. "Kunj chala gaya, exam dene? Nahi... woh ab mere paas hai." Twinkle was in shock, "Please Yuvi, Kunj ke saath kuch mat karna, warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga." Yuvi gave her his final warning "Bacha sakti hai toh bacha le." That was the last straw pulled. Twinkle called Chinky's cousin who worked with mobile phones and asked him to track a location and she quickly informed the driver to take her to that destination. She got there, an abandoned looking warehouse. Twinkle slowly went in and Yuvraj put his hand around Twinkle's mouth, pushed her in the room and put a lock on the door. "Yuvi, tum? Kunj kahan hai" Twinkle asked banging on the window. "Kuunjjj, woh toh college chala gaya" Yuvraj said as he started pouring the bottle of kerosene on the floor. "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho, paagal ho gaye ho kya" Twinkle screamed and she headed towards the door and realised that it was locked. Twinkle started crying whilst Yuvraj dropped a lit match on the floor causing the fire to spread all over the room. Twinkle sat in there coughing and trying to find a way to get out whilst screaming and shouting for Kunj. As Yuvi was returning, he was hit by a stick and he fell onto the ground. It was Kunj. "Meri biwi ko maarne ki koshish karega, isse kya laga woh meri Twinkle ke paas aayega aur main kuch nahi karunga" Kunj quickly ran towards the door and tried breaking it but no luck. He then got a big rock from the ground and hit the lock and opened the door only to see his wife lying unconscious on the ground. Kunj picked up her up and tried to find the quickest escape route. He finally managed to leave the building and quickly got into the car and told the driver to go to City Hospital. He started shedding a few tears seeing the state of his wife, his beautiful and lovely wife. Seeing her unconscious was the most painful thing for him. He felt that he'd failed as a husband for not being there to protect her.

(A few hours later)
The doctor came out of the ward and said "Mr Kunj, accha hua aap sahi samay par le kar aaye inko warna unko bachana bohot mushkil ho jaata, inki blood test karna baaki hai but she's out of danger and you can go and see her" Kunj ran into the ward to see Twinkle smiling at him. "Kunj mujhe pata tha tum mujhe bachaane zaroor aaoge." Kunj pulled Twinkle and gave her a tight hug with tears in his eyes. This was one of the few times Twinkle had seen him like this. "Arre tum ro kyun rahe ho, main theek hoon na" she said in her evercheerful voice as she wiped his tears away from his eyes. He gave her a kiss on the forehead and cupped her face "please mujhe dobara aise mat dara na" Twinkle smiled seeing the amount of care her husband had for her and kissed him on the cheek as she promised never to scare him.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was so beautifully written !!
I mean, yes yuvi can do that and yes twinkle can say that and yes kunj can do that
I loved the plot, and the last scene was myfav
it was greattt
way to go
and pleaseee write more
it was honestly beautiful, you have to write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You are amazing
This was so lovely. Honestly, i imagined it all in my head.
Do write more.
Had a gala time reading this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i loved it. This was really good.
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was awesome. Do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice and cute OS. Could imagine the care kunj showering on twinkle and make me think about the scene when twinkle is unconscious praying for the family just after their marriage.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really loved that
It was so sweet👏

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