Twinj OS: The One With The Date

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Filmyarchu

@Filmyarchu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This was superb adorable :))

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Priyakna
This was superb adorable :))

thanks so much, so glad you liked it!! 😳😊

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Sristi Malhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

its awesome
the recreation of their first date is superb
twinkle losses the bet on her own...

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Amazing os ...

Twinkle was sooo sweet she lose the bet just to make kunj win...

Beautiful...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This was so cute Shakthi
Absolutely loved it 😳
Amazingly written as always!

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
Reserveddd!😳

Usually I get lost into imagining the scenes whenever I read an OS by you but since I was aware of the situation of this OS beforehand I was focussing on how you had penned it.

Indeed marvellous, you have captured their feelings beautifully into words,every little reaction,their understanding for each other and how well they knew each other to know when the other was faking it was brilliant.

As I have told you before,'Twinkle's' idea of recreating their first date was very thoughtful😉

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This was so adorable... You gave us 2 dates in one OS ;)

I loved how everything was smooth.. Something I always like about your OSes is that they are very realistic.. This one was just so sweet.. I was grinning while reading the whole thing...

Keep writing 😆

Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago