Twinj OS: The One With The Date - Page 3

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

its awesome
the recreation of their first date is superb
twinkle losses the bet on her own...

Originally posted by: amlavs

Amazing os ...

Twinkle was sooo sweet she lose the bet just to make kunj win...

Beautiful...

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..Loved it..😊

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was so cute Shakthi
Absolutely loved it 😳
Amazingly written as always!

Originally posted by: naneta

Very nice dear

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Usually I get lost into imagining the scenes whenever I read an OS by you but since I was aware of the situation of this OS beforehand I was focussing on how you had penned it.

Indeed marvellous, you have captured their feelings beautifully into words,every little reaction,their understanding for each other and how well they knew each other to know when the other was faking it was brilliant.

As I have told you before,'Twinkle's' idea of recreating their first date was very thoughtful😉

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

This was so adorable... You gave us 2 dates in one OS ;)

I loved how everything was smooth.. Something I always like about your OSes is that they are very realistic.. This one was just so sweet.. I was grinning while reading the whole thing...

Keep writing 😆

Originally posted by: hailly

Cute os. Loved it.

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I loved this! They are so cute

Amazing as always Shakti!