TwiNj 2S: Hello (Completed Pg6) - Page 4

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

Okay,So first of all thank you soo much for dedicating this story to me!

I LOVED IT🤗

It had soo much depth in it and The way you presented it was soo amazing.

I loved how twinkle and kunj talked on phone and twinkle tried to draw strength from him and the care kunj developed for her.

Domestic abuse is something that happens very commonly and with this you brought it up beautifully,I loved the ending when twinkle agreed to move in with him.

Can we have more stories like this please.❤️

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I didn't mean to scare you 😆 I got home from work and sat down to read this and that was my first reaction. Blame it on the tiredness lol I dont get offended very easily so you are good 😆

Honestly you are more than welcome. You deserve every bit of the praise!

Yes yes please do! I shall be eagerly awaiting

Originally posted by: Aalina.

It is a brilliant piece. Like things are happening in front of my eyes.

U r so brilliant. And I m glad kisi ne to uv ko mar diya. Absolutely fantastic..

Loved it

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Hi.

How are you?

Such painful stories, why? After reading your each piece there is only one thing in my mind "are you fine?"

I know i should not again and again ask but cant help.

You are fine, right?

Coming to the story, it was amazing. Loved it.

I guessed that it must be Yuvi's deadbody only

Anyways it was good story.

it was awesome...i loved it...u are an amazing writer...srsly...i usually like gloomy , emotional stuff..

Buddy, I'm a sucker for intense, emotional stories but dude this like struck a cord and I'm actually crying. I love "Blue Neighborhood" so so much but I think this may be my favorite piece by you like oh my goodness this is so beautifully penned down. You're super talented and beginning to end you had me so engaged because I didn't know how to curb my feels lol. M&M world was a fantastic addition to the story, brought some nice moments between all the pain. Kunj and Twinkle in this story man oh man. Her needing a friend and Kunj being that friend so brilliantly and them looking forward to the calls and just ahhh. I'm so happy you ended it the way you did but I too would love to read a second part hehe. But literally this was perfection and I truly enjoyed it. I'm gonna go read it again, so I'll catch up with you later :P

🤗

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

it was awesome...i loved it...u are an amazing writer...srsly...i usually like gloomy , emotional stuff..

this is going to be in my favs list!!😆..wish u would continue this..😳