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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Nargis--

So very heart wrenching...simply beautiful how you addressed such a sensitive topic!! At the risk of sounding repetitive...i will again say that you are a phenomenal writer. When I read the word.s..I live the scene...I visualize, and internalize the emotion...and your writing always wrenches the emotions out of me! As for this particular story...I will say a prayer that there never is such a Twinkle in the world, but if there are, then I pray that they too find a Kunj to help and heal them!

Thank you so much Nargis!!
I am really happy that my writings evoke such reactions and emotion. Thanks once again!

Yes, We do need to pray that there be no one like 'Twinkle' of this particular story in the world. And there should be more Kunjs in the world too. Amen!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome..very well written..Loved it

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is so well written
Absolutely loved it
I think this has become one of my fav os's
God! How can u write so well I actually could feel the pain this almost made me cry

Awww...thank you so much!!
Glad you liked it and sorry for the tears😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Brilliant OS 👏
Very well written

Thank you!😳😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibha01

It was great!! I loved it❤️

Too much to ask but can you update this? I mean their life together and all...please

Thank you!!😃
Yes, I will try my best to make this a 2S but I cant promise when ill update it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Okay,So first of all thank you soo much for dedicating this story to me!
I LOVED IT🤗
It had soo much depth in it and The way you presented it was soo amazing.
I loved how twinkle and kunj talked on phone and twinkle tried to draw strength from him and the care kunj developed for her.

Domestic abuse is something that happens very commonly and with this you brought it up beautifully,I loved the ending when twinkle agreed to move in with him.

Can we have more stories like this please.❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Okay!! That was amazingly amazing👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Okay, the first line scared me...I honestly went 'OH shit, I have done something wrong. Or maybe I have unintentionally hurt/offend you' but then as I read ahead I started blushing.
THANK YOU!!!
The fact that I could elicit so many emotions from you makes me really happy. Iam over the moon actually!
Annnddd...I love you too!
PS: I know the feeling...I have a reputation of being an emotionless being too.
PPS: I will try my best to write another part to this story. But I cant promise when it will be out though. Hopefully soon, ill try my best😊


I didn't mean to scare you 😆 I got home from work and sat down to read this and that was my first reaction. Blame it on the tiredness lol I dont get offended very easily so you are good 😆

Honestly you are more than welcome. You deserve every bit of the praise!

Yes yes please do! I shall be eagerly awaiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is a brilliant piece. Like things are happening in front of my eyes.
U r so brilliant. And I m glad kisi ne to uv ko mar diya. Absolutely fantastic..
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi.
How are you?
Such painful stories, why? After reading your each piece there is only one thing in my mind "are you fine?"
I know i should not again and again ask but cant help.
You are fine, right?


Coming to the story, it was amazing. Loved it.
I guessed that it must be Yuvi's deadbody only
Anyways it was good story.

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