TwiNj SS : ' Love Happens Just like That' (part 3 pg 9)updat - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --Jenelle--

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#00cc00">amazing start...šŸ‘</font>


Thanks jen..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Is Kunj the guy she's going to meet?

Looking forward, do update soon!


Haha.. M not gonna spill the beans.. For that u HV to wait for further parts..
Yeah DAT I can do.. Will update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Nyc nyc...

Please Continue Soon..
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Thank u thank u..
Yes updating very soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Thank u buddy..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Hey guys.. As I said i won't keep u waiting for long and here i m with beginning of the SS.. Janta ki demand pe here presenting the first part freshly baked right from oven.. Hope u wil njoy it..

PART 1



"Maa.. Maa.. Kaha hai aap..??" A sweet melodious voice echoed in taneja mansion with full of excitement and zeal..

Leela was in kitchen when she heard this voice and couldnt help but smile widely.. She understood there was some very big good news coming in her way just from Twinkle's voice..there was pride there was joy there was enthusiasm and most imp there was reflection of her happiness in her voice.. Yes that was her beloved daughter twinkle's soothing voice that never fail to lit up her life with its pure melody..

"Maa kaha ho aap..?" Twinkle shouted again from living room scanning each nook and corner of her giant house in search of leela while trying to catch a breathe..

"Puttar yehi to hu mai.. Chl jaldi bata kya good news hai..?? Par phle 2mint run k saas to lele.." Leela approached twinkle with a glass of water and made her sit..

Twinkle was stunned at her comment.."maa aapko kaise Sab pata chl jata h hamesha.?" She asked her lovingly..

"Puttar qki mai Teri maa hu.. Or maa ko Sab pata hota h.." Leela answered caressing her cheek "Vaise ek news to mere pass b h.." She continued while clapping enthusiastically. "Lekin phle tu bata kya baat h..??" She questioned..

"Maa apko pata h aaj mujhe ek bht bada assignment mila h..puri team ne as a best photographer mujhe choose kia h.." She blurted out proudly.. "But ek problem h..?"she added tensely..

"Ae to but acchi baat h puttar but prblm kya h..?" Leela asked being concerned..

"Maa mujhe uske lie Delhi Jana padega.. Actually hamari magazine ek nayi story cover krri h jiske lie Delhi k monuments ki pics click karne k lie mujhe select kia gya h.. Or aap to janti hi h papa mujhe permission ni denge mere past ki vjhse.." Twinkle spoke sadly..

Leela hold her hand and comfort her "puttar mai tere papa se baat karungi.. Tu chinta mat kar.." Saying this leela hugged her.. And this did magic on her as all her tensions vanished in a jiffy..

After breaking hug leela continued.."pata ni isse ittefaq(coincidence) kahenge ya wahegruji ka ishara, mai Jo tujhse kehna chahti thi vo news b Delhi se related h.."

"Aesi kya baat h maa..?" Twinkle was blanked..

"Beta mujhe galat mat smjhna or thande dimag se sochna.. Hum sab Teri bhalai hi chahte h.." Leela gave an insight of what's coming further..

Twinkle was tensed and boggeled.."maa aap yeh kya key rhe ho mujhe kch smjh no ara h.."

Finally leela break the ice but was worried abt her reactions.." Puttar vo tere lie ek rishta aya h.. Ladka Delhi ka well settled buissnessman h..or jaha to mai smjh pai hu ladka bht accha h.." Leela spoke in one breathe holding twinkle's hand..

Twinkle jerked away her hand and stood up in shock.." Shaddi..maa aap aesa soch b kaise sakte ho.. Mere purane jakham abi tk bhare b ni h oor aap.." She stoped midsentence..She was aghast..

"Q ni soch sakte..??" A harsh voice echoed from behind almost trembling twinkle.. She turned only to find her dad standing there..
"Akhir is me problem kya h..? Vo ek bht accha well settled ladka h.. Had kadam pe tumhara sath Dega..kam se kam tumhe chod k bhagega to ni.." RT remarked sarcastically..

Twinkle was appalled.. Once again her pain was refreshed.. Her own dad has pierced her heart and inflicted a new wound amidst all past painful wounds which are yet to recover..

"Ji mai baat krti hu na usse.. Vo merit baat jrur manegi.." Leela interfered to control the situation..

" Par maa mai apne kaam pe focus karna chahti hu.. M not ready for marriage now..mai Delhi Jana chahti hu assignment pura karna chahti hu.." Twinkle almost pleaded..

Leela advice's.."thk h aesa karte h tu kaam de vaste Delhi ja hi rhi h to uss munde we mil b Lena ek baar..2no kaam hojaenge.." She pretended to be happy as she knew twinkle's pain very well..


"Maa mujhe abi shadi ni karni h..or arrange marriage to bilkul b ni karni h..aap q ni smjhre maa.." Twinkle tried to explain leela

" puttar ek baar ladke se mil to le..agar tujhe pasand aaega to hi baat aage badhaenge.." Leela trying hard to convince her..

"Maa mujhe aese kisi buissnessman se Milne me koi interest ni h jiski lifeline numbers pe chlti ho..jiska maksad har second me apne bank balance k numbers badhana ho.." Twinkle retorted in heated voice..

"Puttar aese phlese kisi k bareme rai ni banate..ek baari mil k to dekh usse.." Leela was almost pleading..

"Maa mai srf apni pasand k ladke se shadi karungi..plz maa akhir itna haq to hai na mera apni life pe.." Twinkle spoke with trembling voice almost on verge of crying..

"Bas bohot hogya twinkle tumhari choice hum dkh chuke h..vo useless good for nothing YUVRAJ LUTHRA.. U'l go Delhi only if u agree to meet this boy.. And dats final no more arguments.." Rt interrupted and ordered twinkle clenching his fist and fully red in anger..

Twinkle drop down all her weapons as she knew she is left with no other option but to comply to her parents.."thk h jaisa aap log thk smjhe.." She complies reluctantly..

"Leela isse KS ki details dedena.. And make sure u don't stoop us low in front of them with ur antics.." RT harshly instructed the duo and left..

Twinkle was left shattered..leela hold her head in her lap comforting her.."puttar tujhe apni maa pe bharosa h na..?" Twinkle nodded.. "Bus fir ussi bharosa ke vaste maan ja.." Twinkle broke down in tears..


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Delhi Airport..

Twinkle came out from airport and was still staring the boy's(KS) buissness card she got from her mother.. The thing she has done all time while in flight. She was still in double thoughts..she was restless she was lost..but she promised leela so she can't back out..

While approaching near taxi stand she held out her phn from her sling side bag and was about to dial his number when she felt a jerk from behind.. As she turned she found her luggage missing and a thief at a distance running with her bag.. She shouted "chor chor.. Ruk sale bhagta kaha h.." And she began running behind him..

Just as she was about to catch the thief she bumped up into a guy and fell on road right on his top.. For a sec everything blured out and she stared him without blinking.. He was holding her from her waist..
"Hello madam kaha kho gayi.. Aaj ki date me uthne ka kasht karengi..??" The guy yelled obviously coz his back was hurting from her weight..
She got up quickly and threw awkward looks to him..she glanced in direction of thief who was nowhere to be spotted..

She tried analysing the guy.. He was in cheap faded jeans with multiple cuts and simple loose printed tee with headphone encircled around his neck..A long silver locket hung around his neck with babaji's symbol pendent.. Multiple leather and beads bracelet around his wrist..giving more like a impression of loafer..he seemed to be a local middle class guy but with lot of attitude..he was more like a carefree person with no sense of responsibility.. She registered in her mind..

"Vaise isme aapki koi galti b ni h.. Mai hoon hi itna handsome ki har ladki dkhte hi flat hojati h.." He spoke styling his hair with his hand and smirking..

"What..?? Tumhe kch jda hi galatfemi h khud k bareme..tumhari vjhse vo chor mera bag leke bhag gya.." Twinkle fumed and continued pointing a finger towards him..

He just smiled at her.."kamal karti h aap ek to aapko girne se bachaya or aap illzam laga rhi h.." He retorted but with a smile.. " khair koi baat ni khubsoorat ladkio ko Sab maaf.." He continued with his antics..

Twinkle have had enough.." Listen m not interested..yeh jagah hi manhus h..manhus city or yha k manhus log.." She spoke folding her arms against her chest throwing an angry glance towards him..

"Oh hello.. Ye dilwallo ki dilli h sabko pyaar we welcome karti h.." The guy replied..
"Vaise m Bunty..naam to suna hi hoga.." He spoke in SRK's style forwarding his hand..

"Ni suna or sunna chahti b ni..useless.." Saying this twinkle turned away and departed..

He stood lost and with all smiles..he stared her until she fade away in crowd not before turning and giving him an angry look.. He smiled and banged his head with his hand..he whistled "kuch to hua h.." And left kicking in air with his leg alternatively with both his hands in his pockets...like dancing..and all this while his smile never fade away..


To be continued..

So this was it for the first part..

P.S. sry for so long update.. Bear with me..


Don't forget to drop down ur comments only if u like..


Love
Riya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
This is just awesome can't wait for next part. Very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Bunty . [ROLF]
KUNJ Sarna ...aka.Bunty the Loafer..
Best hai jee Best Hai..
Doc goin good..
Update Soonish..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Oh cool its nice...luved ur fresh part from the oven...
I believe tat guy must be kunj...ha ha ...ah have to wait nah...but plz jaldi update next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Kunj is Bunty
Loved the update 😳
Cant wait for the next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is just awesome can't wait for next part. Very well written


Thank u buddy..
M working on next part.. U'l get it pretty soon..

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