TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21

neverlandspirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

THIS IS AMZING!!

I am a sucker for strong willed 'Non bhaav dene wali' kudi and over confident boy type stories and to have one written by you is so amazing!

Absolutely loved it!!!

And may I mention, your depiction of Yuvi and Kunj's friendship is adorbs and so so so on point!

👏

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sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

freakhing good...gosh it was awesome...okay lemme calm down and i'll post a better comment...

update asap...that's all I can say for now ...*small voice*..please updte soon enough...

I cant cant wait to read more

this is exciting ..an I don't ignore excitement *grins*

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Ok I loved it this is such a fresh concept

Twinkle is adorable

And yuvi kunj friendship I can't wait to read more of it

Over confident kunj falling for tough taneja would be a delight to read

Laksh was a nice twist

Please continue soon. I loved it

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3dancelover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I loved it, interesting story

Twinkle loves someone else, interesting!

I like it how they call each other by the last name

there are twists and so many possibilities in my head

continue soon!

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dmgomg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Oh my gosh I'm so excited! Love the concept of this! Update soon!

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

this is so awesome. very well done. cant wait for next parts

thanks a lot for this brilliant idea

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
I am the First One...
OMFG...
This Is one Of the Most Amazing Thing I read Today...
Superrrbbb..
I am Hooked to this story...
Typical college Campus Atmosphere..is Jus perfect...
Kunj Sarna ...always a Charmer.and Twinkle the big Brain...
Stunning Combo..
Ummm Laksh Verma.. Y not.. Enufff For Kunj to Get Into Possessive mode later..
I really want next part Asap,..
Pls..😳

I have a weak spot for college campus stories #guilty 😆

So glad you liked it, thank you so much.

Laksh is actually a decent guy in this story of mine so not sure about possessive Kunj but I have something in mind, dont you worry 😆

I will try to get in down soon enough but studies are taking over my life right now. Soon though. Just bear with me 😳

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.
This is new and this is amazing!
Update soon I will be waiting!❤️

Very different from TEI, I know 😆

Thank you!

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: .Anjum.
Too awesome 😳😃
Continue soon plz dear! !

Thank you. Will try my very best 😳

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Duumps
This is amazing.Very interesting.
Loved the college atmosphere.
Very intriguing .
Can't wait to see if Kunj will actually get her a date or will want her for himself.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

Kunj Sarna always does what he says so keep reading to find out 😉

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