TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21 - Page 3

Originally posted by: countingstarz

Very different from the usual FFs around here and I'm a sucker for the bad boy falling for the good girl 😆, so looking forward to the next chapter ! x

Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is just awesome n different
Pls update as soon as possible

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

Its different.. And very interesting... Please continue soon..😳😊

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Interesting start

Loved the update 😳

waiting eagerly for the next part

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Omg dude this is so so so so amazing! I LOVED IT. Honestly the concept is so fresh, I love how simply and beautifully you've etched out the two characters. So nice seeing Kunj in this f boy type character lmao because it's so different from his onscreen character and so the fact that I still love him means you did a great job! Btw football meaning soccer or my kinda football lmao?! I totally love how Yuvi and Kunj are besties and he's not the one Twinkle is interested in, it's an adorable friendship! I find it so interesting how Twinkle isn't a vulnerable meek girl, she's badass but she'll take his opportunity of help because who better than the dudes homie to help you out?! And Kunj really needing to pass for that game and scholarship and basically all his dreams is so great but I have a bad feeling... He only gets tutored in exchange for arranging a date. What if he refuses to because he really loves Twinkle and then like his dreams omg...but twinkle will help him nonetheless right?! Damn I'm getting carried away but I LOVE THIS. Please please please continue soon pretty please! It was such a good read <3

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

THIS IS AMZING!!

I am a sucker for strong willed 'Non bhaav dene wali' kudi and over confident boy type stories and to have one written by you is so amazing!

Absolutely loved it!!!

And may I mention, your depiction of Yuvi and Kunj's friendship is adorbs and so so so on point!

👏

Originally posted by: ..queen..

freakhing good...gosh it was awesome...okay lemme calm down and i'll post a better comment...

update asap...that's all I can say for now ...*small voice*..please updte soon enough...

I cant cant wait to read more

this is exciting ..an I don't ignore excitement *grins*

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Ok I loved it this is such a fresh concept

Twinkle is adorable

And yuvi kunj friendship I can't wait to read more of it

Over confident kunj falling for tough taneja would be a delight to read

Laksh was a nice twist

Please continue soon. I loved it

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

I loved it, interesting story

Twinkle loves someone else, interesting!

I like it how they call each other by the last name

there are twists and so many possibilities in my head

continue soon!