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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
SUch a beautiful update!! I loved how Kunj let his guard down and didn't realize until later.

Twinkle's involvement with the rest of the boys in kitchen and while playing video games was so amazing. It really showed how well everyone is starting to get along now.

Thanks dude! It's so difficult to condense a whole story into 5 parts 😆

First step taken on their parts, now the real journey begins I guess.

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: amlavs
Lovely update...
Its really awesome to see twinkle mingling with other boys I'm the room...
Ah wait a min kunj is sharing something personal with twinkle... It's nice to see the changing equations b/w them.
Update next soon

Thank you Lavs!

Yup he did. There's definitely a comfort level between them now.

Will try to, no promises 😆

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
awesome update Nemo <3 loved it <3

Thank you so much Jer!

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

I'm so sorry Nemo,I eagerly waited for this to be updated and when it was I was swamped with work:(

Any way here I am,I have read 3A twice already!The style and coolness that comes with them addressing each other as 'Taneja' and 'Sarna' is unshakable and it always catches my attention. I so love it!

Please tell me TWINKLE DID NOT TURN AWAY FROM KUNJ SPRAWLED ON THE BED!I mean how could she!☺️

My most favourite part(apart from Kunj in his sweatpants:p) was how Twinkle fired him away.

The Twinkle-Yuvraj conversation was so beautifully penned and specifically their individual reactions to the women who were staring at them.

I just realised that the best thing in being late is that I get to read 3A and 3B in continuation!!!!! BRB

Its alright Nat, work comes first and better late than never right? 😆

It makes me so happy that you read it twice 😳 I'm so glad that you think so dude!

SHE DID. He might be Kunj Sarna, but Twinkle Taneja isn't any less, she's a very no non-sense kind of girl hence her firing away at him in the car 😎

Twinkle and Yuvi had to break the ice somehow so this seemed like a good place to start with them 😆

Lucky you! Arent I nice? 😆

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
You are TOO GENEROUS Nemo!Giving a longgg update that too almost filled with Sarna and Taneja! I love you for this!
What is a pretty laugh anyway🤣

I'm in awe of how things are progressing slowly with Twinkle and Kunj.How Twinkle felt the need to stay back and him wanting her to,the silent understanding when Kunj was on the phone,how he told her everything and she felt the need to give him her approval to receive the call,little moments here and there but mean so much.The built up In their relationship is beautiful.

Twinkle warming upto the guys is so cool!totally get Twinkle's position because I sail in the same boat.Playing Xbox with my brothers is so much fun.I don't know any specific tricks but I manage to win somehow,most of the times and how surprised they are every time;p

OMG! Anand does something! He can Cook!🤣

This has to be my favourite part although I love all and it is also possible that the further updates may lead to a change in my decision😆

Why do I have a feeling that this will have more than 5 parts?😉

Update soonishhh!❤️

See I can be a nice person when I want to be 😆

Well I definitely do not have a pretty laugh, its horrifying 🤣

Omg thank you so much Nat! I've always been a believer in the little moments and simple gestures so I'm glad you picked up on it!

I used to love the PS3 and then it broke But yes! The rivalry is amazing and its such a great way to bond with guys tbh. Thats my idea of 'quality time' with the siblings too 😆

OMG NAT! 🤣 I didnt mean to make Anand cook but Yuvi and Cherry just didnt cut it for that scene requirement 😆

Ok that means so much because I'm sure you know as a writer, you always want your work to keep getting better so thank you! 😳

Nope definitely not, I'm going to make sure this ends at 5. Too much commitment already 😆

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Will reply to everyone else tomorrow, I am so tired right now.

Thank you so much for the love guys!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Inkheart
I honestly think that it won't be long until Kunn is full-blown head-over-heels in love with Twinkle. I mean who wouldn't??? She basically understands him and gets along really well with the guys.
I don't see any of them disapproving their relationship in the near future.. They've progressed so much from being the girl tutoring Kunj, go acknowledging each other in the hall way to almost like family... Lol..why am I not surprised that Kunj's father knows about his son's every changing love affairs😆 It won't be long until she reunites the father-son duo.
Anyways if I didn't say that this was amazing, then I would be lying..
Please update quickly

Dude the way you just commented made it sound like this is some sort of intellectually scripted series and I love that you feel all of the things you just stated! 😆 Thank you so much!

It is sooo difficult to portray a gradual build up in their relationship in just 5 shots so that honestly means so much to me that you think they've come so far already!

Like father like son? Loool I'm just kidding but I'm not sure if I want Kunj to make up with his father at all. He's kind of a douche.

Thank you so much again, your comments are awesome!

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Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: DAPSG
very well written the happenings between twinkle and kunj and also with his friends.I am loss at words to describe how much i love this fic. Eagerly waiting for the next updates. looking forward to how will kunj setting up twinkle with verma as per deal between them. and how it will change equation between kunj and twinkle😉. so please update soon...😊

Ok first of all, I've seen you liking a lot of my writing so I'm really chuffed that you're commenting! Thank you for all your likes and support so far, I'm glad you're enjoying this one too.

Kunj is an idiot tbh and that will be pretty evident in the next update 😆

Thanks again!