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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

awesome update Nemo <3 loved it <3

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

I know, its so hard to believe 😆

Awaiting!

I'm so sorry Nemo,I eagerly waited for this to be updated and when it was I was swamped with work:(

Any way here I am,I have read 3A twice already!The style and coolness that comes with them addressing each other as 'Taneja' and 'Sarna' is unshakable and it always catches my attention. I so love it!

Please tell me TWINKLE DID NOT TURN AWAY FROM KUNJ SPRAWLED ON THE BED!I mean how could she!☺️

My most favourite part(apart from Kunj in his sweatpants:p) was how Twinkle fired him away.

The Twinkle-Yuvraj conversation was so beautifully penned and specifically their individual reactions to the women who were staring at them.

I just realised that the best thing in being late is that I get to read 3A and 3B in continuation!!!!! BRB

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

You are TOO GENEROUS Nemo!Giving a longgg update that too almost filled with Sarna and Taneja! I love you for this!

What is a pretty laugh anyway🤣

I'm in awe of how things are progressing slowly with Twinkle and Kunj.How Twinkle felt the need to stay back and him wanting her to,the silent understanding when Kunj was on the phone,how he told her everything and she felt the need to give him her approval to receive the call,little moments here and there but mean so much.The built up In their relationship is beautiful.

Twinkle warming upto the guys is so cool!totally get Twinkle's position because I sail in the same boat.Playing Xbox with my brothers is so much fun.I don't know any specific tricks but I manage to win somehow,most of the times and how surprised they are every time;p

OMG! Anand does something! He can Cook!🤣

This has to be my favourite part although I love all and it is also possible that the further updates may lead to a change in my decision😆

Why do I have a feeling that this will have more than 5 parts?😉

Update soonishhh!❤️

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Inkheart

@ChrissyA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

I honestly think that it won't be long until Kunn is full-blown head-over-heels in love with Twinkle. I mean who wouldn't??? She basically understands him and gets along really well with the guys.

I don't see any of them disapproving their relationship in the near future.. They've progressed so much from being the girl tutoring Kunj, go acknowledging each other in the hall way to almost like family... Lol..why am I not surprised that Kunj's father knows about his son's every changing love affairs😆 It won't be long until she reunites the father-son duo.

Anyways if I didn't say that this was amazing, then I would be lying..

Please update quickly

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Pavani

@DAPSG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

very well written the happenings between twinkle and kunj and also with his friends.I am loss at words to describe how much i love this fic. Eagerly waiting for the next updates. looking forward to how will kunj setting up twinkle with verma as per deal between them. and how it will change equation between kunj and twinkle😉. so please update soon...😊

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Anisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Loved the update 😳
Beautifully written
Continue soon

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

OMG this is awesome ! :D

Off to read the rest of it , update all of it soon :D

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...
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idr if i read this before so gotta go back to the beginning :D

unres so i haven't read this before 😲😲 i'm shocked at how i missed it!!

Part 1:

OMGGG this is the cutest idea ever! i've always been a sucker for tutor romances ever since haley and nathan in OTH <3 and this just brought back those vibes!!

😆😆😆 i love twinkle's fiestiness in this!! and kunj saying his name as if she should know who he is 😆

awww the deal is set! poor twinj don't know that poor verma doesn't stand a chance 😆😆

btw this should be some movie plot! loll it's perfect teen rom-com material!!! i would watch something like this

Part 2:

🤣🤣🤣🤣 OMG YOU INCORPORATED CHERRY!!! 😆 that too as Kunj's roomie! loll that made me LOL so hard!

oh yuvi, you're advice is not going to be heeded at all 😆😆 kunj is def gonna fall for the tutor!

Part 3a:

EWWW she walked in on that!! so gross!!! 😆😆

but she saw kunj shirtless so...😆😆

who can resist kunj's puppy eyes

Part 3B:

aww poor kunj! fathers can be so harsh sometimes!!! and so sweet of twinks to be there for him

LOLLL yuvi shoulda just listened to her advice from before, he woulda won the game so much faster!

btw are you a video game fan nemo??

🤣🤣🤣 HOW DOES SOMEONE EXPLODE MAC AND CHEESE!! 😆😆😆

and you killed it for me nemo, he's planning on talking to verma for the date 😕 *face palm* why are boys so stupid, takes them so long to understand their feelings!

loll i loved this and you need to update soon!!!

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: kardooks
Awww Nemo, I love it, I have no favorite part I love everything about the story.
She have a pretty smile, and him telling her she should hear how some girls he know laugh, why does that sound like something you would say.
I would have stayed and snoop in his room though (nah I won't), glad that she respected his privacy, if he didn't trust her he wouldn't have left her in his room.
Happy to see he's getting comfortable with her, he's letting his guards down, opening up about family life, very nice.
I can tell you play Xbox with your bros, how nice, I'm sure you're a fun big sis to them,
Why you have to help Yuvi to win the game, why couldn't it have been Cherry.
You know how long I haven't made lasagna, look who's going to make lasagna now.
Awesome Nemo, can't wait for more, yes I'm being demanding and I make no apologies😃👍🏼

Aww thank you so much dude!

LOOOL BECAUSE I AM ONE OF THOSE GIRLS WITH THE MOST HILARIOUS LAUGHS 🤣

I was tempted myself to snoop but I couldnt break the trust that they have only just begun to build, not that cruel yo. I've had a lot of male friends right, and the one thing common in all of them is that they are so reserved about their families, so it seemed apt to me to incorporate that as the 'ice breaker' between Twinj.

I used to love playing on the PS3, Xbox, Wii, you name it. I literally have no more time to do so and they have been claimed by the brothers now Although they come to me when they want new games and we always make a mutual bargain 😆

Yuvi isnt the bad guy here Karen, its ok. You need to buddy the bestie for bae to fully accept you 😉

Yo did you make lasagna then? I havent has lasagna in ages!

Thanks a tonne Stace!

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Sammy

@Sdea

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Omg omg how did I not see this update. I was dying for it from ages.
Okkkaayyy sooo how amazing was this Nemo
Firstly I love their surname basis conversation. Like yoo sarna and taneja is the like new cool.
And omg twinkle ok I find it weird calling her twinkle now so Taneja is such a rockstar. Like she cooks, studies and plays video games.
And what's with kunjs father being a pain everywhere the show and the stories. Loved how twinkle wanted to stay over just to see he was ok. And seriously kunj is going to fix her with that guy.I loved loved the update
Dying for the next one. Do update soon.

PS- typing from phone so can't really add emojis. But my expressions are very heightened after the update.

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