Twinj + Mahi TS: Chup Chup Ke Milna for Shweta (dksamma) completed Pg1 - Page 5

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Yo Shakti how do you always make Mahi one of my favorite characters in your stories?! :P Seriously this was better than anything I could have imagined, it was adorable how Kunj and Twinkle were finishing each other's sentences and saying the same things in their whining that they had to be separated although married already. The whole coffee scene had me cracking up and then I died from cuteness at the end. So like those two to always end up bickering even when they have only small moments together. Mahi leaving exasperated is every person in this forum when these two fight LOL. Beautifully written and a great read :D looking forward to the second part!

Originally posted by: vgudgila444

awesome dear..

love bond between kunj and mahi...

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow awesome update dear

i just loved it

twinj are so cute

waiting for next update

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😃

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Wow...Such a sweet os.. Beautiful one.. Loved it.

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Wow kaise din aa gaye hain,yeh padhai ke chakkar mein page 7 pe hun mein:/

This was just absolutely adorable!adorable and adorable.

So many Twinjfeels

How easily you transitioned their normal talk to bickering that was the best🤗

Agar Mahi serial mein aise hi rhi toh I don't mind her excessive screen time, I honestly loved her in this and the camaradie between her and Kunj.

Their desperation to miss each other was so cuteee and he visits her every night just coz she can't sleep

Oh and did I mention how beautiful this concept is.I loved the idea😃

This can't be a TS, has to be more than that if you can

🤗❤️