Twinj + Mahi TS: Chup Chup Ke Milna for Shweta (dksamma) completed Pg1

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Perwinkle
Shakti di, this is amaazing.
I loved it.
Beautifully written.
Can't wait for the next update!
Brilliant start and cont. soon!

😳😳😳 thank you so much! so very glad you liked it 😊

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@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
This was so cute 😳
Enjoyed reading every bit of it
Waiting for part 2

thank you so much anisha! so very glad you liked it 😳😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: f.zarrin
Loved it! 😃

thank you so much 😳😳😊

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Well that was sweet and cute first their marriage, their date in coffee shop and the baby talk, their cute fight on phone. Everything was perfect. Thank u for the pm and do pm me. A hug to u🤗

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@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

lovely !!
shaadi wali maahol jaisa feel ho raha hai parke ..

kaash aisa kuch dkhne ko vi mil jaaye ..
maahi becoming junior taneeja 4rm d way she ws ... she s playing pretty little cupid here .. 😉

twinj ka romance ,, 4rm coffee date to romantic phone chat s 6ooo 66wwt !!!!! 😳
par phir aaya larai ,, jiske bina humara twinj ki daastaan adhura hai ..
haye !! kitna larta hai yeh dono !! 😆

ab dkhte hai kaun kisko manate hai ,, or else dono hi ek saath mil jaate hai .. bechaari mahi toh dkhte hi rahe jayegi !!
aur sab kuch twinj hi kar lega ,, larai bhi aur pyaar bhi !! ❤️

Edited by bluelake99 - 9 years ago

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sherin

@sherin..

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow shakti that was soo adorable

Loved phone convo

They are sooo cute

Loved it

Plzz update soon

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

excellent start Shakti. loved it
thank u so much for this <3

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awww..mahi how sweet sis her demand ... Fantastic di ...thanks for PM 😊 ..liked it

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

this is so adorable. Lmao guru ji probs is taking badla from Kunj for always ignoring his words. I kinda miss guru ji. He should come back in the show

Mahi is so adorable with the secrets and letting her sister meet her husband in secret like that. Good job!

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teddyyy

@teddyyy

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Yo Shakti how do you always make Mahi one of my favorite characters in your stories?! :P Seriously this was better than anything I could have imagined, it was adorable how Kunj and Twinkle were finishing each other's sentences and saying the same things in their whining that they had to be separated although married already. The whole coffee scene had me cracking up and then I died from cuteness at the end. So like those two to always end up bickering even when they have only small moments together. Mahi leaving exasperated is every person in this forum when these two fight LOL. Beautifully written and a great read :D looking forward to the second part!

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