Twinj FF - its the matter of heart/ chapter 2 on page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

<font color="#ff0000">Ah dear ! It was very amazing concept😃very interesting😳</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Plz continue soon😳😛</font>
<font color="#ff0000">And plz do p.m. me whenever done😳</font>


sure dear, I will pm u whenever I'll update the next chapter... am really happy reading ur comments... u all r amazing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
hi guys, I am back with an update...well I have tried to write some Hindi dialogues to give more effect to it...hope u all will like it...here you go...

Chapter 2

Once seated in the car, Kunj tied a rope on Twinkle's hands and legs so that she couldn't run away from him.

Twinkle :- leave me Mr. Kunj Sarna. tum mujhe aise kidnap nahi kar sakte.
Kunj:- (after putting his forefinger on her lips to shut her up) Shh... Sweetheart, don't strain yourself by shouting like this. Maine tumhe already kidnap kar liya hai aur ab hum apne ghar ja rahe hai...
Twinkle :- main tum sirf nafrat karti hun Kunj Sarna. you are so cruel and selfish...
Kunj :- aur mai tumse sirf pyaar karta hun, Twinkle
you are so beautiful and adorable...

After saying that Kunj turned his face towards the outside road. Twinkle too stopped protesting while the tears came out from her eyes. she was suppressing a sob remembering the whole situation again. it was all real, she was kidnapped and she could do nothing to escape from it. she was badly disturbed. she didn't know what to do, she just wanted to run away to her own house. it started raining out as their car crossed the city borders. now she didn't care where she was going, she was just thinking about how to escape from there.
Kunj noticed long back that she stopped fidgeting and was sitting quietly looking out on the road. she was staring at the rain drops falling on the ground. he quietly pushed the button and the window on her side got opened. but she didn't seem to notice that. she was probably thinking something. it was when the rain drops fell on her tear stained face that she came out of her thoughts. so many raindrops were falling on her face wetting it with cold water. her tears got washed away. Kunj was thanking the rain for that. at least now she stopped crying.
soon their car drove in through the gate of Sarna mansion and stopped at the entrance. Kunj opened the door and stepped out in the rain. he quickly went to her side and, after opening the door, he lifted her up and brought her out of the car.

Twinkle:- back off Kunj. I am not coming with you.
Kunj :- (now a little angry) don't shout, Twinkle. you are coming inside with me, nahi toh itni baarish mein bheeg kar bimar pad hogi...Rehman, bring her bag inside.

Kunj carried twinkle in his arms inside his lavish bungalow and went straight to his room. the rain was so heavy that they both got drenched in it in those one to two minutes which they spent outside.
Kunj placed her on the bed and removed her footwear. he took off his own shoes and the wet jacket. Twinkle rolled her eyes away when Kunj took off his wet white T-shirt. he walked into the washroom to take a shower but not before calling his maid to help twinkle change her clothes.
by the time he came out, she was finished changing. he saw her lying on the bed still tied, it seemed as if she was sleeping. he knew that she had gone through much and it was enough for today. he left her in the room and went out. he picked up his phone and dialled a number.

Kunj :- hello Karan...Can you do me a favour?
Karan :- yeah Kunj tell me..
Kunj :- please yaar, bring my belongings to my farmhouse...aur haan yahan ke jitne telephone connections hai, please disconnect them all..
Karan :- sure kunj. but can you tell me why this sudden change of location? Achanak tu wahan kaise pohoch gaya?
Kunj :- mai tujhe sab batata hun. but pehle tu yeh sab karle jaldi yahan aa...
Karan :- okay, Kunj...
as the call disconnected Kunj heard the security alarm buzzing. "oh no, yeh ladki", Kunj said to himself and rushed to check on Twinkle in his room. but it was of no use , she was not there.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Amazing update!!!👏😳
Loved it to the core!!❤️
Update the next part soon!!😃
Can't wait!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Update was fab 😛
Aww where did she ran away😲😆
Plz update soon😳n do pm me whenever done the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome update dear
just loved it
plzzz do continue soon
and do pm me😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
amazing update dear. loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.


thank u hailly,
I guess its ur name...
well I will update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.

<font color="#0000ff">Amazing update!!!👏😳</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Loved it to the core!!❤️</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Update the next part soon!!😃</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Can't wait!!😳</font>


thank u dear...
I will definitely update it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
wow amazing
i read it in one go
it's brilliant truly amazing 😃 👏
next update please

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