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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Duumps
Another awesome update .
Beautifully described emotions and Twinj feelings.
Thanks for a quick update.
Loved it.

Thanks sooo much dear

means a lot

i thought u all deserved a quick update u have stuck with me.. and bared my laziness love u

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Diy0
wow thanx for such a quick update 😃
well it's needless to say that ur episode is awesome as it has become obvious thing
well please tell the secret that how do u manage to write so well
i have become a jabra fan of urs 🤗 👏
continue asap

awww that means sooo much to me yaar u r soo soo sweet 🤗🤗

i love yr comments and wiat for them!

they make my day just like this one did

thanks a lot

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1903

@1903

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#263

This is so amazing you are awsum writer.

I am new to the forum havent comented much. Out of all the fan fics here this is one of my favt. I just love it 😊

Edited by 1903 - 9 years ago

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

You know what.. I wait for your comments. I love how you interpret the story exactly the way I want my readers to.. thanks for making my day by such an awesome comment... and u have almost guessed one of the parts that are about to come😆😆.. the insecurity of Twinkle and the regret of Kunj is what I am trying to highlight.. she has faced the worst .. she has been broken into pieces.. and she collected herself piece by piece.. and again the guy who caused it to.. is back.. and as much as she hates him for destroying her.. she knows... her survival in his absence is living without feeling.. cuz along with shutting him off.. she shut herself also off...
Kunj has finally faced the impact of his doing... he always wanted to held on to her.. to their friendship.. but he has always been insensitive to how small things affected Twinkle .. and how deep her wounds are.. and just by walking back... wont help..

Gosh I ranted too much..

Thankss sooo much

hahahah😆😆😆Sarika.. ki death hogi pakka hogi😆lol i sound evil hhehe😆

love ya

That's so sweet of you..
@bold - So you mean something like that will happen.. Yipee.. Kunj is gonna go through a big realisation phase... I am so excite 😆

It's perfect.. You haven't ranted.. Just given me something nice to read.. I always like it when people are discussing someone's nature..
If you feel getting Sarika killed might damage your storyline, please tell me.. I am ready to right a little fan fiction on your story 😆

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fangirl1012

@fangirl1012

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Aww so cute. I would love a guy who sends me free pizza coming back to the story I love how you are making Kunj grovel for her forgiveness. I want this charade to continue. Kunj should strive to make every moment special for her and expect nothing in return😃

Edited by fangirl1012 - 9 years ago

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

That's so sweet of you..
@bold - So you mean something like that will happen.. Yipee.. Kunj is gonna go through a big realisation phase... I am so excite 😆

It's perfect.. You haven't ranted.. Just given me something nice to read.. I always like it when people are discussing someone's nature..
If you feel getting Sarika killed might damage your storyline, please tell me.. I am ready to right a little fan fiction on your story 😆

Yeah .. u r in the right direction (shush...) hehehheheh .. I am happy u guessed it actually ... that would be a really hard hitting for him.. bt that is not yet to come.. maybe after 2 - 3 parts...

hehe thankss soo much

pleaseee write a ff I would love to read it 😆😆 on sarika😆😆 make her suffer torture her😆😆 like the torture diaries- sarika.. and i can put link here and tell ppl who are angry read the torture diaries😆😆😆

heheh

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: fangirl1012
Aww so cute. I would love a guy who sends me free pizza coming back to the story I love how you are making Kunj grovel for her forgiveness. I want this charade to continue. Kunj should strive to make every moment special for her and expect nothing in return😃

aww yaar.. yr comment made me smile soo much..

i love that u liked the grovelling part.. its necessary to show this i think

cuz I think boys are like that .. they dont ponder immediately but later regret their actions...

awww 'nothing in return" is what exactly i m hoping to show

u gt it right

thanks sooo much