TwiNj Drabble::Yeh Kasoor Mera Hai 6/3/2016

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TwiNj Drabble::Yeh Kasoor Mera Hai

Yeh kasoor mera hai ki yaqeen kiya hai

Dil tere hi khatir rakh chhod diya hai


She was walking aimlessly on the road,she was broken,kunj dosent trust her,he blames her for everything that happened,she didnt knew how it happened,she solved the issue why it always happen when she is happy,why something bad happens whenever kunj and she are happy,her heart aches so much seeing him in pain yet she is the reason for his pain.

Tu hi sabse qareeb hai mere
Tu hi mera naseeb hai ab ye mehsoos kiya hai, Yeh kasoor mera hai ki yaqeen kiya hai
Dil tere hi khatir rakh chhod diya hai

He is the most important person in her life,now no one matters more than him to her and still he is hurt due to her ,the though of giving him pain made her shatter,the cold wind hitting her body but it didnt mattered,she saw him crying,he was crying due to her.

Ek tu hai daulat hai meri
Haasil tu mera...
Kitni hai mohabbat tujhse
Be-hisaab wafaa
Hasraton se badhkar apni chaha tujhe hamesha
Ye kusoor mera hai ke yaqeen kiya hai
Dil tere hi khatir rakh chhod diya hai

He was hurt she knew,but did he knew that she was hurt to,her heart was breaking into million pieces,she felt ground slipping beneath her feet when he said "I dont trust you twinkle",she loves him with all her heart,she loves him with everything she has and he said he dosen trust her,walking on the road,she was just staring at nothing,the sky made some noises,lighting started illuminating the night in a bright late and then it poured down droplets of water,with her tears the rain drops picked up face,she slumped down to her knees on the road,crying..

Tu hi sabse qareeb hai mere
Tu hi mera naseeb hai ab ye mehsoos kiya hai

The hurt on his face,the anger made her heart cry,her body ached from the aimless walking,everything was getting destroyed infront of her and she was helpless she was not able to do anything,her world was falling apart because of her the feeling of guilt took over her and she cried more.

Koi dard raha na dil mein
Na koi khara
Har khwaish poori hui hai
Tujhe paa jo liya
Door mujhse ho na kabhi na
Karna ye ek ehsaan

Past week flashed into her mind,how happy they were,everything he said to her on the date,he clealrly told her how much he loves her,they are soulmates they are made for each other,she has him with her what if he is upset with her,he will not let him go away ,she has lost her love once,was it even love what she had with yuvi she thought but putting the thought aside twinkle made her mind,she wont let kunj away from her nothing can Seperate them even death.

Yeh kasoor mera hai ki yaqeen kiya hai
Dil tere hi khaatir rakh chhod diya hai
Tu hi sabse qareeb hai mere
Tu hi mera naseeb hai ab ye mehsoos kiya hai
Ho...

Composing herself ,wiping her tears although the rain drops wetting her, she stood up,she will go to him,she will force him to talk to her,she will let him do whatever he wants,but she will not let him go away,she will not let this marriage break for no fault of hers,Turning around she started walking back to him she needs him and she knew that he needs her to.
Kunj twinkle ke bina,aur twinkle kunj ke bina adhuri hai saying this she went to him...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice drabble hrideyy
emotional kar diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so emotional so beautifully written. just loved it as i could feel it. Thank u so much hridey
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AWESOME drabble ,Hrideyy 👏👏
Loved it a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The song choice nd d words fit everything well.. nd if in real kunj said dat he dont trust her den i dont want twinkle to go back to him.. let him find d truth from manohar nd den only kunj shld feel guilty for what he did i wnt it once..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh..yaar..
Itna dard dil mein..
Beautiful hridu
As always..tera koi jawaab nahi hai👏👏👏

A shayari from my side to compliment ur drabble.😊

"Ishq mein sab kuch ganwa ke khush rahe,
Dard daman mein chupakar khush rahe;
Firte rahe behaal galiyon mein teri,
Yun khud ko hi bhulakar khush hue"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ab bhai mera hai. Talented toh hoga hi
Hridey i loved it. It was amazing
I could connect to the pain
You are amazing hridey
Love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tu hi sabse qareeb hai mere
Tu hi mera naseeb hai ab ye mehsoos kiya hai, Yeh kasoor mera hai ki yaqeen kiya hai
Dil tere hi khatir rakh chhod diya hai


Itna dard... Ufff,.
Kya kahoon. Me...
This is my Favorite part in this song...
I felt the pain in her heart..Hridey...
U write magic...
Will we get a Second part soon...
Before the Episode...Plz...
I am sure i am gonna enjoy ur peice of work more thn The Show...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chota CV..Phir se emotional kar diya
Awesome yar. Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome drabble bro
plzzz do continue soon
just loved it

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