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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my goodness, this was wonderful! You write beautifully. Can't wait for the updates!
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First of all, a HUGE THANK YOU for your amazing response 🤗

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CHAPTER ONE


Twinkle awoke to the deafening ringtone of her phone in the morning. She let out an exasperated sigh, cursing herself for not putting that thing on silent before falling asleep. She pulled the sheets down and reached over to see the name flashing across the screen - CHINKI. Seriously? Twinkle thought to herself, her best friend knew better than to call her this early in the morning. She accepted the call and let shots fire.

"Seriously yaar Chinki, is this a time to call someone? You of all people should know that I am most definitely sleeping and won't be awake for another 3 hours" She could hear Chinki giggling on the other end of the line. "It's not funny Chinki," she let out before burying herself under her satin sheets again.

"Forgive me meri maa, I just rang to tell you that I'm in Amritsar, I arrived this morning to surprise you all" Chinki defended herself. Twinkle threw her covers away from herself "WHAT?" And you're telling me now?! Ok wait, I'm coming" She ended the call and leaped out of bed to get ready.

It had been so long since Twinkle has seen Chinki, they were the best of friends. Friends before Twinkle could even remember. Chinki used to live next door, but 2 years ago, she and her father moved to Delhi after graduation due to better job prospects. Since then, they've both constantly spoken on the phone but Twinkle has only seen Chinki a few times especially because she hardly ever has the time to go up to Delhi herself. Checking herself in the mirror one last time, Twinkle readjusts her dupatta and heads next door... to Sarna House.

As far as Twinkle remembers, the Sarna's have always been a very important part of her life. Chinki Sarna was the daughter of Surjeet Sarna. Her mother had passed away at a very young age but she has always received that maternal affection from Bebe. Bebe was the heart of the Sarna household in the literal sense. She had never gotten married because the responsibility of bringing up her two younger brothers fell upon her at a young age and so she has dedicated her entire life to keeping her family together and happy. Twinkle loved Bebe and Bebe also reciprocated those feelings, she absolutely adored Twinkle! Manohar Sarna, the youngest brother, was also very fond of Twinkle, he was the business partner and a very good friend of her father. After her father passed away, the Sarna's supported her mother a lot, especially since Twinkle was merely an infant. It was too bad that Usha, Manohar's wife, didn't feel the same. Till date, Twinkle has never understood the reason for the hostility between them but she never takes it to heart. After all, if it wasn't for Usha, Kunj would never have existed...

Kunj Sarna. How does one describe Kunj Sarna? He's annoying and arrogant and over-confident and downright stupid. Fine, he's been blessed with a beautiful face and physique but that doesn't mean that HE has to know that! Girls fall for him before you can even say his name and it infuriates Twinkle that he relishes in that knowing. Ugh. But she can't help but agree that he's also the most caring, thoughtful and, not to mention, her best friend in the whole world. It's weird because Twinkle always saw Chinki as her best friend until she came across Kunj. They hated each other immensely when they first met. Ugh, she still remembers all those times that he pulled his stupid pranks on her and commented on her weight, telling her she's put on so much weight that an elephant would look small in comparison. He really did used to get on her every last nerve. And then one day, they just clicked. She doesn't know how or when it happened, but it did. And now she can't imagine her life without him... well she couldn't until 6 months ago anyway.

*****

"TWINKLE!" exclaimed Chinki as Twinkle walked in through the door. Everyone was seated at the dining table helping themselves to a hearty breakfast, courtesy of Bebe. Twinkle hugged her friend and exchanged a few words before giving her greetings to the other family members. "Arrey Twinkle puttar, kaisi hai tu? Kitne dino badh ayi hai, idhar aa mere paas," Twinkle took Bebe's blessings and sat down beside her at the table. The conversations were pretty normal, or atleast the kind of conversations you'd expect at a family meal. Manohar and Surjeet asked about work and her future plans, Bebe enquired about how things were at home and how her mother was doing and Chinki wanted to know the latest gossip, as always. It was crazy how normal and comfortable Twinkle felt sitting here, having breakfast, with Kunj's family. She smiled as discussion and laughter continued throughout the rest of breakfast. But one unusual thing that caught her attention was that nobody had mentioned Kunj all the time that she was sat here. Ever since Kunj left for further studies, Twinkle had spent quite a lot of time with his family and they always kept her updated about his whereabouts, how he was doing etc. so for them to not even mention his name this time around raised her suspicions. Never mind, she would definitely get it out of Chinki later on.

Even though Chinki had moved away 2 years ago, nobody had moved a single item in her room, it was all still the same as it was all those years ago. Like she had never left in the first place.

"So..." Chinki started... Twinkle looked at her with narrow eyes. She knew her friend long enough to understand when she was trying to avoid or hide something from her. "Alright Chinki, spill. What is it?" Twinkle said. Chinki's face went blank and she began to look around the room, like she was searching for something. That was enough for Twinkle to realise that this was something big. She marched up to her and looked directly into her eyes, a warning that she shouldn't even attempt to lie to her. "Chinki, what are you hiding from me? You know I WILL get it out of you some way or another so..." It seemed to do the trick because Chinki let out a sigh. "Ok, fine. But you have to promise not to overreact and definitely not get angry, promise?" Twinkle agreed for the sake of agreeing, Chinki suggesting that she make a promise meant that this news was going to really piss her off, so she waited patiently. The silence before the storm.

"Ok so, basically... what I want to say... what I want to say is that... I don't know how to say this... but... but... I'm sure you would've found out soon anyway... but I..." Chinki stuttered. Twinkle had had enough. "CHINKI YAAR, JUST SAY IT ALREADY" Twinkle exclaimed losing the last of her patience. Snapping her eyes shut, "Kunj-Bhaiya-is-coming-back-tomorrow-night" Chinki let out in one breath. What? Twinkle wasn't sure that she heard correctly. "What did you say?" she asked again. Squinting through her eyes, she repeated, "bhai is coming home tomorrow night, it was supposed to be a surprise but you know na that I can't keep secrets, mere pet mein gudgudi hoti hai" Chinki looked down at the floor because she could feel the explosion coming anytime now. Twinkle couldn't believe her ears, Kunj was coming back? Tomorrow? She had so many questions that needed answering but she also knew that this wasn't fair on Chinki, there was no point shooting the messenger, her battle will commence with the person who sent the message, the message she wasn't supposed to receive... with Mr. Kunj Sarna.

"I'll see you tomorrow Chinki" Twinkle replied before she headed out the door. Chinki smacked herself. Why couldn't she just keep her mouth shut? Twinkle didn't react at all which only meant one thing... that tomorrow was going to be one eventful day.

*****

Somewhere on the other side of the world, there he was throwing the last of his belongings into his suitcase. Picking up the picture on his bedside table, he crooked his head to the side, "only 24 hours to go" he smirked. "Oi Kunj, have you finished packing bro?" Kunj turned towards the door to see his flat mate, his first ever friend in this city, looking at him with a raised brow. "Yup, all done" he said before he put the photo into his suitcase and closed the zip. He had only been away from home for 6 months but it felt like an eternity, he missed everyone so much, especially her. When the job proposal from a prestigious company came, Kunj couldn't believe his ears; a permanent job back in India, where they would also pay for the completion of his MBA alongside his employment. He didn't think twice before he accepted the offer and he couldn't have been happier. He was finally going home.


- Enjoy!
Edited by Tranquility123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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^ awesome update. next chapter looks interesting already. cant wait. pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi
I am new to tashan e ishq forums
I have read many manan stories but now twinj is all over my mind hahaha
My first story on this forums is yours
Great start dear
I hope to make great friends here
God bless you
Bye :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update to setup the plot!! You've piqued my interested, dying to know how tie together the dream...nightmare and her relationship with Kunj!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting! looking forward to the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

^ awesome update. next chapter looks interesting already. cant wait. pls update soon


Thank you so much! Working on it as I speak 😳

Originally posted by: hailly

Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.


Thank you! Really appreciate it 😊


Originally posted by: Palakgarg

Hi
I am new to tashan e ishq forums
I have read many manan stories but now twinj is all over my mind hahaha
My first story on this forums is yours
Great start dear
I hope to make great friends here
God bless you
Bye :)


First of all, welcome to the forum! I literally joined a few days ago myself. I'm sure you'll love it here, its a very active forum 😆 Thank you so much, I hope I can live up to your expectations of a TwiNj FF seeing as I'm your first 😳


Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Great update to setup the plot!! You've piqued my interested, dying to know how tie together the dream...nightmare and her relationship with Kunj!! 😊


It was probably the hardest update to write because setting the plot can be quite long and boring so I'm really glad you liked it! Haha all will be revealed in good time 😆 Really appreciate your feedback 😊



Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

interesting! looking forward to the next chapter.


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Im so confused about the dream Twinkle had in the preview. Was that something that actually happened? I guess you've obviously got plans for that so I'll let you write it at your own pace lol. Update soon!!
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Originally posted by: dmgomg

Im so confused about the dream Twinkle had in the preview. Was that something that actually happened? I guess you've obviously got plans for that so I'll let you write it at your own pace lol. Update soon!!



I'm so glad that you have questions that need answering, it was kind of the idea behind these first few updates 😆 I promise everything will tie together and make sense soon! Thanks for reading 😳

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