Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter One
While you sleep, I decided to leave you a gift in the form of my fangirling over your writing lmao so that when you awake you will be beary happy :P Now idk why I'm torturing myself and commenting on each chapter instead of reading them in one go but I decided that I should let you see my reactions for each part separately LOL so the suspense kills me as I write this. The prologue was so amazing omg, so the first chapter definitely lived up to my expectations! I love how you kept Twinkle being unable to wake up early constant with the show cause I love that about her #relateable LOL. Idk why but when she was yelling at Chinky all I could think about was Preity Zinta dancing to "hum toh Bhai jaise hai, Waise hi rahengeee" LOL. It was epic!
Yo, your intro of Kunj Sarna was beautiful. I am a sucker for childhood love stories, besties falling in love stories and the whole we hated each other but now can't imagine life without each other stories and it seems like this is a mix of the last two things I said so I'm excited! I'm just so curious as to what happened to Twinkle and what Kunj knows and how that's going to shape the story.
One of the best things was the family vibes I got like AWW everyone loving Twinkle and being so comfy with her. Lmao me and Chinky, pait main ghudgudi hoti hai! But I can keep secrets hehe :P
Alright now I really need to continue reading so I can find out what happened between these two! I LOVE your writing style girl, so happy I have six chapters lmao.
OMG TEDDY! I cant believe you put yourself through that but I can tell you that you got your wanted reaction, I AM BEARY HAPPY INDEED 🤗 Seeing as you replied to every single one, so shall I. I'm going to thank you more for your effort more than your response 😆 I'm glad I lived up to your expectations but please dont have any in future 🤣
Dude, I feel you, I love the "best friends are in love but dont know that they're in love" story lines. I cant help it, my heart loves the fairy tale type stories.
Ok you read them lol but dont make a habit of piling them up yo 😳😆
Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter Two
HA YES IM SO HAPPY it is a bickering bestie type perfect relationship. They really can't stop fighting LOL I can't even who comes up with such a pact?!?! My questions have been answered: these are two bewakoof souls who love competing and bickering and so thy haven't spoken in 6 months. Haye Allah these two will be the death of me in the show and in your story! I love how you depicted their relationship in the smallest ways, I had the biggest smile on my face. The way she so easily looked for HER earring in HIS room after they watched a movie awwiee. But the best part was how she supported him :D Seeing the person you love (not necessarily romantic) go is so difficult. My guy bestie moved away for college even tho he had many opportunities to stay in the city and so I was like omg no you can't leave me but he's really happy there and it was tough but it works out (: I'm so happy Twinkle made the right decision for his happiness and she wouldn't let herself cry in front of him. As fate has it, they cannot be separated and so he got such a great job back home.
I'm seriously in love with you and your writing.
Yaaay! Thank you! I love banter filled friendships. Sincere supporter of 'pyaar dosti hai' here 😳😆 A lot of my mates moved away for Uni too, we were such a great group during school but we still meet up when they're down on break. I love relationships where nothing changes no matter the distance and time you havent seen or spoken with that person. Nothing more pure and genuine in my opinion. I'm so deep down in the ocean right now 😆
In love with you and your replies. Keep them coming!
Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter Three
One reason I love TEI is because of all the family love we see like dude that Antakshari competition was just pure bliss. So to see everyone bickering and trying to organize stuff for Kunj made me smile so much. Bebe is seriously a babe; there's no question about it! She knows her putar so well.
LMFAO I CAN IMAGINE KUNJ WALKING IN WITH AN APPLE ALL CHILL. That was epic hahahah. Their livelihood was back, the joy of the house Awwwie so many feels man! Leela and Kunj's relationship is one I seriously adore in the show so him calling her girlfriend and their playful banter filled with so much love and respect warmed my heart. HAYE. I shouldn't have read this after the episode today, my feels cannot be contained LOL.
Can I have Kunj's six packs if Chinky is claiming stuff LMFAO. Omg Precap I am excittted!
I totally get you dude. Family is one of the most, if not the first, important factor in life. I have a crazy extended family so I totally get the family banter thing going on 😆
Hahaha I could literally imagine it too. When I wrote it, I laughed at my own FF. Shoot me pls. 😳
Disappointed Teddy, I thought you'd claim Kunj's body itself ☺️
Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter Four
Lmfao half of me was really hoping that he walked into her throwing darts at his picture and grunting because she's hilariously stubborn. But omg the butterflies seeing him. And him knowing her time stopped when he left. They are such babies!
Omg I'm such a football fan, played myself in high school LOL so Kunj just became hotter lmao. I'm so weird I'm sorry. But oye Twinkle watch for the face he's too pretty :P It really does take two to tango LOL and I love love that they got into a pillow fight- it really helps with venting haha.
I'm gonna cry Yaar. They are both finally home. In each other's arms. Together. Oh my. The sorry and laughter at the end was perfect, I'm in awe. You're amazing.
Will keep your wish in mind if they ever fight again (which they probably will) 😉😆
LOOOL it was the only sport which seemed apt. Baring in mind, British football and American football are two completely different sports 😆
They're our babies I know. They always will be.
Thanks dude, on to the next...
Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter Five
All I can say is you cracked me the heck up with this chapter like them fighting, the family betting, Bebe resolving the fights haye so happy with everything!
OMG I CANT UNDERSTAND how girls carry a purse the size of a peanut -.- I hate Mona just so you know lol. I'm typing as I read and I needed a break cause W*F Mona you're so horrible. I hate when girls are other girls enemies like no that's not how we are supposed to work! Did I just read the word clients OMG I'm scared what happened to our Twinkle :((((( but Kunj is there for her it's okay Teddy relax lol, he always chose her and will forever! COUPLE ENTRANCE BRING IT ON.
I'm gonna cry...again because omg. Him sneaking in and them cuddling and his warmth and care and him not wanting her to rmr and our broken Twinkle and I'm so sad I can't believe such happened. But he'll always be there and I can't say more because I love this story.
Awwie only one chapter left, I'm loving this too much.
I'm glad you laughed! It was supposed to be light-hearted and fun! 😆
Dude, tell me about it. I've actually seen girls carry clutches with one item in it, like dafuq? What is the point? Fun fact: I named her Mona because I was watching PLL 🤣
Twinkle's past will unravel, and I'm sorry to keep you in suspense, but it will be slow, just bear with me okay 😆 But you've got one thing completely right, Kunj will be there for her in the end always. Because that's what best friends do, even if you dont love them romantically.
I loved cuddles, there's just something so pure and intimate about them. Not that I have anyone to cuddle me (sad times) but cuddling is defo a plus point. Fun Fact again: the FF is slightly inspired by a book that I read but I cant name it, in case you read it and figure out where my story is going 🤣
Okay last one, here we go...
Originally posted by: teddyyy
Chapter Six
I'm silent lol for once, you're such a wonderful writer and all I can say is that Twinkle saying she wasn't perfect anymore, she wasn't enough for Kunj broke my heart. She's such a bubbly child whenever Kunj and Chinky are around and I hope that never changes. But you're right our past eventually does catch up with our present so now I'm so curious to see what exactly happened and how Kunj will be her savior. Her description of Mr. Right is beary similar to mine LOOL DUDE CAN I HAVE A KUNJ?!
I'm so sad the chapters are over but now as a present you have to update soon okay :P (idk what the present is for but do it okey?!) lmao I love you!
Yes I made it to the last one! Wow, Teddy and silent? Someone give me a medal 😎😆 Seriously dude, I think you are being too nice to me now but thank you so much, you make me soo happy 🤗
Hahaha that would be you and I both! All you Kunj's out there, holla at us! Are any Kunj's out there? Hello? Can you hear me? 🤔 Teddy, we're so screwed 😆
Considering you made all the effort to individually comment on every chapter, I will try my very hardest to update in the next few days.
Also, seeing as I'm feeling very very nice today, you can suggest something you'd like to see and I may incorporate it into the next update. One time offer yo. If you dont see this then its not my fault 😆
Love you too dude, thank you again for your very fun and engaging feedback!🤗
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