OS:Happily Ever after 17/2/2016

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Beware:The OS is very very long Approximately 7 Pagesmand 3602 words,this started as a small drabble but when I started writing I wasnt able to stop.
OS:Happily Ever after
Kunj was standing infront of his cupboard taking put his night suit when he felt two arms strongly hugging him from behind,he touched the hands and knew it was twinkle,realised it from her chura's.
Kunj:Twinkle what happened?
He felt wetness on his back,he sensed she was crying.
He turned around and twinkle hugged him tightly,crying more and more and ger hold getting tighter on him.
He hugged her back to calm her down and asked.
Kunj:Kya hua twinkle,aise kyu ro rahi hai,I am getting scared.
Twinkle:Kuunnjj,ger voice breaking due to crying.
Kunj broke the hug and cupped her face in his hands and asked
Kunj:Batao twinkle kya hua,Tell me or else how would I come to know?
Twinkle:Kunj woh Yuvi,woh..
Anger rised in him,ab kya kiya yuvi hai,he would not leave him this time for making twinkle cry.
Kunj:Yuvi kya twinkle puri baat bta..
She cought hold of her breath and controlled her tears for a moment,and started narrating the incident with yuvi.
-Flashback-
Twinkle went to story room to get some things from there,when she entered the store room,she just started looking for the thing that she wanted and she felt someone entering the store room and door closing behind her.
Twinkle turned around to see who it was but she saw no one there and after few moments she felt two strong arms hugging her from behind tightly,Twinkle instantly knew who it was a feeling of disgust crept over her,it was yuvraj luthra.
Twinkle pushed with all her power and was free from his hold,and turned.
Yuvi:Twinkle Baby kyu itna dur bhagti hai mujhse tu,Ajj nahi toh kaal tujhe mere pass hi ana hai meri bahon mai,he moved towards her and pulled her closer to him,her body cane crashing on his hard front,twinkle was continously trying to free herself from yuvi,But he was to strong infront of her.
Yuvu moved his face towards the crook of her neck and inhaled her scent,
You smell soo good twinkle,nothing infront of your sister mahi,You are so beautifull and hot he said running his finger on her face.
Twinkle feeling more and more disgusted with his each touch.
Yuvi:Tu samjhti kyu nahi hai baby How much I love you,how much I want you he said moving more and more closer to her and what happened next made twinkle feel disgusted to no end,he placed a kiss on her neck,twinkle with all her might pushed yuvi away from her and he stumbled few steps back.
Yuvi:Jitna dhakar marna hai mar le baby,kuch dini baat tu khud bhagti hui in bahon mai ayegi,aur tera woh loser pati bhi nahi hoga tujhe bachane ke liye,kyunki mai usse mar dunga...
He takes out a photo of kunj and puts it infrony of twinkle and sets it on fire!!
Burning and drops it on the floor.
Yuvi:Ajj toh yeh photo jaali hai twinkle bahut hi jald tera kunj bhi jalega aur fir tu meri hogi bas meri,he drops the phot to floor and it turns to ashes,twinkle slaps him hard and runs out of the store.
-Flashback Ends-
Twinkle:Woh tumhe mujhse dur kar dega kunj mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai and hugs him again as tight as possible.

Kunj's body is burning in rage,his eyes filled with anger,how dare yuvraj touch his wife His twinkle,Today he is dead thought kunj but for a second calmed down his anger and broken the hug and cupped twinkle's face in his hands.
Kunj:Listen to me very carefully twinkle,no one means no one can take me away from you,Agar ajj bhagwan bhi akar bole ki twinkle ko chod do mai tabhi bhi tumhe nahi chodonga samjhi tum,toh fir yeh yuvi kya cheez hai twinkle,Samjhi tum No one can seperate us,we are bounded for this life and the next seven lives for always.
Twinkle looks into his eyes and the way he is looking at her gives her an assurence that kunj wont let anything happen to either of them.
Kunj:And now see twinkle what I will do with yuvi,Uski himmat kaise hui tere kareeb anne ki tujhe chune ki,usse toh mai nahi chodunga jaan le lunga uski and he ran outside the twinkle,twinkle behind him calling his name.

Kunj knew no one was at home today bot even mahi ajj toh yuvi gaya.
Yuvi was talking to phone on someone thats when he felt a hand on his shoulder and he turned back and
was greeted by a hard punch on his face,which sent him stumbling back few steps and the punch came from kunj noo noo from a angry kunj,his body language told yuvi that twinkle has narrated the entire scene to kunj and that is the reason for his anger,ajj toh iska khel khatam hi kar deta hun,aur fir twinkle meri.
Kunj pounced on him and started beating him ,saying
kunj:Meri biwi ko touch karega,how dare you go near her,I warned you earlier also yuvi that stay away from twinkle but ajj tune hadd paar kardi.
Saying this kunj was again going to hit yuvi but yuvi blood his attack and pushed him away,punching kunj direct on his face.
Twinkle:Kunj..
Yuvi:Kunj bahut jaldi hai na tujhe marne ki so teri yeh wish bhi ajj mai puri kar deta hun.
And then it was a serious fight between kunj and yuvi,punching,kicking slaping,pushing and what not.
Kunj:Meri biwi par gandi nazar dalega tu,yeh le...
Yuvi:Teri biwi nahi hai woh,she is my twinkle sirf meri,mai toh yeh drama aur bhi strech karne wala tha but now I think I have to end it here only,Ajj tu mara aur twinkle meri,waise bhi I am bored by doing the fake love drama with that irritating mahi,and uppar se roz uska ugly face dekhna padhta hai,uski woh irritating awaz,yuvraaj yuvraaj yuvraaj aur kitni chep hai woh,pata nahi kisne usse meri twinkle ki wife bana diya..
Kunj helds him by his collar and said,
Kunj:Bakwas band kar yuvi,woh meri patni hai ,aur woh teri kuch nahi lagti,she my wife and sirf meri hi rahegi,apni bakwas band kar.

There was a voice then made kunj twinkle and yuvi turn there faces and they saw say
Mahi,leela,RT,bebe,surjeet,manohar,
usha and anita.
Mahi was shocked at the revealation,ground slipping beneath her feets,she heard everything,saw the entire fight between kunj and yuvi,and heard the self confession of yuvraaj,it means twinkle di and jiju were right,yuvi was never in love with me,he was just using me as a pawn in the game to take revenge from twinkle di,how fool I was to beleive him over my own family,over the poeple who knew yuvi from such a long time.
Kunj left yuvi's collar and stepped back,yuvi was shocked his game was over now,his biggest weapon knew the truth and now there is no way that mahi is gonna believe him after his self confession,mahi went to yuvi and slapped him hard.
Mahi:Why you did this yuvraj,I loved you so much I trusted you over anyone I trusted yoy more than myself,and you used me as a pawn to destroy my sister's life and you nearly did you,Such a fool I was to blame my sister for everything that happened with me,But the truth was that it was done by you,only you.
The slap enraged yuvi and he pushed mahi hard and she went stumbling back few steps before falling on the ground,on her back,kunj ran to support her along with RT and leela,Twinkle was standing near the staircase taking in all the things that were happening,everyone had thier attention at mahi and thats what yuvi used for his advantage and locked his right arm on twinkle neck and took out the revolver from his pocket and pointed at twinkle's head.
Yuvi:Koi bhi nahi hilegi,
This made everyone turn thier heads and the sight infront of them stopped thier world for a moment,Yuvi had twinkle at the gun point,he could probably kill her,
Yuvi:Koi bhi agge nahi bhadega warna mai Twinkle ko mar dunga.
Kunj:Yuvraaj usse chod de,tu jo kahega hum wahi karenge.
Yuvi:Chup chap sab piche ho jaye,kunj moved few steps backwards,and yuvi started climbing the stairs along with twinkle.
Bebe to anita:Anita kuch bol usse rok usse warna woh twinkle ko kuch kar de.
Anita:Yuvi bache stop,leave her come with me Dont do anything stupid.

Yuvi:Shut up mom,I'll not listen to anyone,Agar twinkle meri nahi ho skti toh fir woh kissi ki bhi nahi ho sakti,aur iss kunj ki toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Anita:Bebe uske sar ka fitoor har had paar kar chuka hai,ab woh meri bhi nahi sunega.
Bebe secretly calls police and asks them to come immediately.
Yuvi reaches the top of the staircase with twinkle,and stops there and says,
Yuvi:Ab tayar hoja twinkle marne ke liye,jeeteji toh tu meri ho nahi skti toh marne ke baad hi meri hogi.
Twinkle:Mai teri kabhi bhi naho hongi yuvi,Mere dil par,meri har sans par sirf ek hi naam hai "KUNJ".
Yuvi:Kunj kunj kunj kunj,har waqt ek hi naam,kunj,Aise kya hai uss kunj mai jo mujhmai nahi hai,Usse zyada smart ,good looking,intelligent hun mai,har ek sense mai I am better than him.
Twinkle:Its your misunderstanding yuvi,kunj is better than you in every sense,he is way more smart,intelligent,and good looking than you,I can proudly say that he is my husband,I can say that I am lucky to have him as my husband,I every minute thank god and maa for making him my life partner,and He is my life I love him with all my heart,even if you will kill me today I will never be yours because I have given myself to kunj.
In this tensed situation too,Kunj could not help but smile and be proud at his twinkle,everything that she said made him feel so good ,hearing those words from her was like heaven.
But his smile soon faded away with what yuvi said next.
Yuvi:Marne ke liye tayar ho ja twinkle.
His finger pressed on the trigger and a sound of a bullet echoed in the sarna mansion.
It was the sound of bullet but the bullet was not from yuvi's gun,the police officer fired the bullet,aiming it at yuvi's arm which made yuvi stumble back leaving his hold on twinkle,with the sudden freedom of his hold,twinkle stumbled few steps forward,she stripped and fell down on the staircase and came down rolling on the entire staircase,she stopped at the end of the staircase,blood oozing out from her forehead,her fall shocked everyone,the police officers ran to catch yuvi and kunj ran to twinkle,took her head in his lap and tried to wake her up.
Leela also sat down beside kunj and was calling out twinkle's name.
Mahi came to twinkle and was going to touch her when kunj held her hand and shrugged it away.
Kunj:Dont touch her,just stay away from her ,twinkle ki yeh halat sirf sur sirf tumhari wajah se hai mahi,It was because of you yuvi came back into our happy lives,It was you who gave her soo much pain,I have seen my wife,crying entire night,spending sleepless nights,blaming herself for everything that happened with you,crying overher failure to save you from yuvi,breakung down thinking that you blamed her for everything bad that happened to you,I have seen her breaking down in past few months,the pain that she had,I shred everything with her,aur ajj bhi twinkle ki ye halat tumharu wajah se hai,stay away from her please.
No one said anything to kunj because they knew he was right,Kunj picked her up in his arms and asked anand to come along and take them to hospital,took sat with twinkle lying on his lap in the back seat and leela seeting at front and anand drivibg the car,the reached hospital in 15 minutes and doctors immediately started her treatment.
Doctor:Mr.sarna your wife is very lucky the injuries were serious but there was no internal bleeding or excess external bleeding,we have treated her wounds,she is out of danger,she will be awake in few hours and we will discharge her in two days but she needs complete rest,and moreover I am surprised how even after falling from more than 30 steps her child is fine,she could have had a miscarriage but nothing like that happened its not less than a miracle.
Kunj was confused should he be happy,confused or surprised at this revealation twinkle was pregnant,Did she knew it,Or she wasnt aware of it,if she knew why she didnt informed it,he remember they got sexually involved after a very emotional draning day after stopping one of yuvi's evil plans and they were just talking and were so close and lost thier control but none of hem regretted tha night.
Doctor:I guess you are confused on the news of pregnacy,my guess is she also dosent know about it,its the begining and she might have not realised it,itscommon.

Kunj:Can I see her?
Doctor:Yes you can but she is unconcious,so take care.
Leela:Kunj puttar tu twinkle ke pass jaa,mai ghar jakar sabko dono good newses deti hun,Babaji ka shukar hai ki meri theek hai aur tum dono ka bacha bhi.
Kunj smiled at leela and went inside the ward and sat on a stool beside twinkle's bed and took her hand in his and kissed it.
Kunj:Thank god twinkle tu theek hai,if something would have happened to you,I would have died.
-Sarna Mansion-
Leela reaches there and bebe is the first one to ask her how is twinkle.
Leela:Twinkle is fine bebe,the doctor said she can come home in 2 days but

Mahi:But what maa ,kahin di ko kuch hua toh nahi naa.
Leela:Nahi puttar woh bilkul theek hai but doctor has advised her complete bed rest because she is very weak to take care of her own so how will she take care of two lives.
Everything was confused as to what leela was saying?
Leela:Twinkle is pregnant she is going to be a mother,the doctor said its not less than a miracle that even after falling from so many steps her baby is fine.
Bebe:Yeh toh bahut hi changi khabar hai leela,ab bas babaji twinkle kunj aur unke hone wale bache ki raksha kare.
-At hospital-
Kunj was sitting beside twinkle from past 3 hours and she stirred lightly on the bed,gaining conciouness slowly and steadly she tried to open her eyes,her vision was blur but she was able to see that kunj was sitting beside her staring at her and he was holding her hand,she felt it,it took her sometime to adjust to the light but when she was able to see clearly she saw kunj smiling at her and at the same time his eyes were misty,she placed her other hand on his reassuring him that she is here,not able to speak due to weakness.
Twinkle tried to get but was unable to to,kunj helped her to get up and she was half lying and half sitting on the bed,her back resting on the slant of the hospital bed.
Kunj hugged her carefully not to hurt her and said,I was so afraid twinkle agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mera kya hota,saying this few tears came out of his eyes,falling on twinkle's shoulder.
She ran her hand in his hairs and said,
Twinkle:But I am fine here with you kunj,Nothing happened to me,calm down I am not going anywhere.
Kunj:Agar ajj kuch galat ho jata toh mai tum dono ko kho deta.
Twinkle:Dono ko matlab kunj.
Kunj:Tumhe aur hamare bache ko.
He looked in her eyes and saw a confusing look on her face,she was just going to ask is it true when he noded in a yes even before she could ask,Twinkle hugged him and he hugged her back.
Kunj:I am so happy that both of you are fine twinkle,I truely Am,he broke the hug and placed a kiss on her forhead.
-2 Days Later-
Twinkle and kunj reached the hospital and kunj helped twinkle to come out of the car,as she was still weak and doctor asked her not to walk much,he took her in his arms and went to the door,bebe did thier arti and placed tikka on thier foreheads,and welcomed them inside the house.
Everyone was so happy to have twinkle back,everyone wished congratulations her including RT and Mahi But twinkle didnt replied them,she was hurt that they didnt trusted her and she wanted time,no one forced her to talk to RT and Mahi.
Twinkle was sitting in the living room from a very long time,everyone was telling her what to do and what not to do in pregnancy,kunj was sitting beside her.
Twinkle was feeling tired and weak,and placed her head on his shoulder,kunj sensed she was tired and said,
Kunj:Bebe I guess twinkle is tired I should take her to our room so she can rest.
Bebe:Yes beta ,waise bhi she needs rest.
Kunj again takes her in his arms and takes her to thier room and makes her lay on the bed.
Kunj:You take rest twinkle,I will bring something to eat for you.
He made her eay food and than gave her medicines and made her sleep.
Kunj kissed her forehead and said,ajj ke baad sab acha hi hoga twinkle yeh mere vada hai tumse.
-1 Years Later-
Twinkle:Rhea stop it baby,have you milk and wait,papa will be coming in sometime,he has work in office naa.

Rhea kunj and twinkle's 3 months old daughter was grumpy because her papa left for office when she was asleep and she didnt got to see his face in the morning which was a daily ritual for her.
Although twinkle was able to handle rhea perfectly but sometimes she gets so grumpy that only kunj can handle,twinkle called kunj and asked him when he'll be returning,he told her that he is on his way and will be home withing next half an hour.
Rhea was still crying,twinkle tried every thing that she could but she was still crying.
Mahi:Di kya hua why our princess is crying so much?
Twinkle:Ajj maharani ne apne papa ki shakal nahi dekhi na subah isiliye,raat ko roz late soti hai aur fir subah papa nahi dekhi toh haal karti hai.

Mahi tried to make rhea stop crying but it was of no use.
Twinkle forgave mahi and RT when she was in 6th month of her pregnancy and kunj to forgave them now all of them are a happy family.
Twinkle:Mahi rehne de,give her this milk bottle she will drink it be quite for sometime kunj will be back in sometime.
Mahi inserted the Baby mil bottle in rhea's mouth and held it there so rhea can drink,she drank half of the milk and refused to drink any further.
Twinkle:Mahi let it be,she must be full and you go you are getting late for your class na,I'll handle her.
Mahi leaves and twinkle takes mahi in her arms and stands at the window showing her the sky which really fasvinates the little one,she happily claps her hands in the air seeing a group of birds flying in the sky.
Kunj's car enters the main gate of sarna mansion,kunj parks his car and gets down from it,
Rhea pokes her little fingers on twinkle's face and says "Maaa" and point towards kunj and says "Paaa".
Twinkle:Haann aa gaye tere papa,khush.
The little one clapped her hands in he air smiling widely showing her happiness seeing her father after so many hours.
Kunj directly came to thier room and rhea showed that she wants to go out twinkle's arms and wants to go to kunj.
Twinkle goes to kunj and gives rhea to him,
Twinkle:Looo rakho isko apne pass,pareshaan kar diya hai din se paa paa paa paa bolke.
Kunj smiled at his little daughter and kissed her soft cheeks in the process his stubble lightly brushed on her cheeks giving a tickly feeling to rhea and she let out a loud giggle.
Rhea with a lovingly expression placed her head on her father's shoulder and seeing this twinkle said
Twinkle:Awww kitne cute lag rahe ho dono.
Kunj opens his another arm and gestures twinkle to come and hug him,twinkle hugs him from one side and asks.
Twinkle:How was your day baby?
Kunj:Tiring But seeing both of your's faces the tiredness vanished away..
Twinkle smiled at him and hugged him tighter.
They were happy as never before,no problems,no issues nothing.
Thier life was just perfect and twinkle thanked god for giving them such a happy life and such a loving cute little family.
Kunj,her and thier daughter Rhea...
-3 Years later-
Twinkle was in labour room,giving birth to her next child,kunj was sitting beside her giving her strength to continue and push.
Twinkle:Kunj shut up its not so easy as you think it is,And ek baar bas baby ho jaye uska baad I'll see you after all I am here because of you "Ahhh"
Doctor:Mrs.sarna the head of baby is visible,just a last push and you'll be done.
Twinkle with all her might,tighting her hold on kunj's hand nearly crushing it gave the last push and the next thing they heard was A baby crying thier second child.
Doctor:Congratulations Mr&Mrs.Sarna,Its a boy.

Twinkle so wanted a boy this time,its not that she had problem with a girl but she always wanted her family to consist of kunj,her and thier two kids a girl and a boy and now her dream family was complete.
The nurse informed all the family members waiting outside that it is a boy and everyone rejoiced the news,twinkle's breathing got normal and her pain was fading away,kunj kissed her forehead and said,
Kunj:Thank you for such an amazing gift twinkle,I love you.
Twinkle:I love you too kunj...
And they lived happily ever after.

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17.sonal thumbnail
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I jus have One Word to Say..

Perfect !!
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal

I jus have One Word to Say..

Perfect !!

Than you Very much Sonal😃
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Awesome OS.Lots of actions and twist. and the ending was again so adorable.

Loved the revelation and Kunj beating Yuvi. very well done. Perfect picture in ine shot <3
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Awe so cute😳 I wanna pinch that baby's face right now. Awesome writing skills👏
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Amazing OS 👏 loved it.
Awe rhea was so cute.
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You are on a roll ,and we are certainly not complaining 😳
It was a comeplete packaga - action , drama , emotion everything 👍🏼
Kunj beating Yuvi
Kunj , Twinkle , and their daddy's girl and mamma's boy - a complete family
Please write more , I know I am being greedy , but this nonsense MahiRaj drama is giving a bad headache 😡
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It was sooo sooo beautiful
loved it to the core
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Very lovely n beautiful😳perfectly written hridey 😛
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Seriously PERFECT!!!
Nothing is more lovable then this amazing os.
Kudos hridey.. 👏👏

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