It was always you...!!! Twinj FF - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Amazing story. Love your quick updating schedule😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome as usual😳
Waiting. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 26

Twinkle and leela cried rivers during bidaai..even Pinny had tears which she herself dint expect to come out for twinkle... after she had seen her grow up ... how could she not get attached to her... Raman calmd her down at last... Leela making a silent request to kunj to take care of her doll..he placed a re assuring hand over hers...
They were in the car... they both dint speak for a while... he then offerd her his handkerchief... as he saw that she was still in tears...
She wiped her tears and blew her nose...out
"What the... "Kunj could only manage to speak this words as he realised...
"Ye tune kya kiya Twinkle... rumal ansoo pochne diya tha... "
'"Sorrie' she spoke with a puppy face... as she handed his handkerchief back...
"Rakh tu hi ise apne pas..."he said.. dis appointed..
"Babaji kaisa pati diya hai aapne muje... biwi ro rahi hai.. aur ye hai ki muje hi dant raha hai...aaj meri bidaai hui hai... aaj muje rone ka pura hak hai..."
"Ha toa ro na... kisne mana kiya... baltiya bhar de... nadiya baha de... but plz.. kabhi bhi mere rumal se naak nahi pochna.. plzz"
She pouted at his dramatic tone... as they reached their destination... Kunj realised this wasnt Sarna house...
He asked driver..."ye kaha le aye aap humko..."
"Kunj baba...humko toa bade sahab ne yahi jagah boli aap dono ko lane k liye... Hotel Paradise..."
Kunj got out of the car confused... he saw his family waiting... at the reception..
"Ye kya bade papa hum sab yaha kyu aye hai..he saw Leela Chinki and bubbly too..." they were smiling...
"Tum dono k liye surprise hai... humne special ek suite book kiya hai is hotel me...aaj ki raat k liye .."
twinkle flushed at the mention of the word night...only to be nudged by Chinki who was now standing beside her...
"But iski kya zarurat thi...hum ghar par bhi jaa sakte hai na..."
"Puttar aaj tumhare liye bhot khas din hai... use akele sath me manao..." leela spoke.. Twinkle dint realise even her maa was into this... drama..
"Aur hum logo ne bhi aaj raat isi hotel me rukne ka faisla kiya hai... hum sab kal sath me ghar jayenge..."
"Puttar panditji ne bhi kaha hai ki twinkle ka suraj dhalne k bad grah pravesh karna shubh nahi hoga isliye kal subah hi jana...hoga.."
Kunj could say nothing but give in... as they handed keys to Kunj...chinki placed a bouqet of roses in twinkles hand.. which also held something beneath eat... as they walked towards their room...she removed the thing below bouqet... and her eyes widened...in shock.. Kunj was walking ahead of her... she quickly hid it and straightened up... Kunj looked back...
"Muje neend aa rhi hai... jis speed se tum chal rahi ho muje lagta hai hum kal pohchenge..."
'"Twinkle started walking swiftly ahead of him... and they enetred the room...
It was full of flowers and candles ...but ..no light... why the hell was no light lit in the room..he thought...
He called in the reception... and complained... "the AC is working why is the damn light not working"
"Kya sir aap bhi.. specifically wedding night suite book kiya hai aapki family ne.. toa usme light ki kya zarurat hai... "
Kunj groaned at the mans cheeziness and placed the phone back...
"Kitna mast... decoration hai na..."
Kunj heard it surprisingly... 'ek toa ghar k badle is andhere kamre me baithe hai aur isko decoration ki padi hai''
'..he got up sat on the couch he opened the mini refrigerator.. only to find drinks in it...and slamed its door..
'Kya hua Kunj'
'Fridge pura wines se bhara hai... dudh ya cofee kuch nhi hai'
She chuckled.. at him acting like a baby...
'Ab tumhe kyu hasi aa rhi hai..'he asked..irritatingly...
'Itne gusse me kyu ho tum Kunj'...yes she too was surprised by this doing of their family but... he was getting all cranky..
The fact that his bade papa had made a deal with Luthras was making him tensed and the look on Yuvis face told him that he was up to something...
"Tumhare Yuvi k vajah se gussa hu"...and he smackdd his head why did he had to add the word 'Tumhare...'
And he saw the look on her face that she was hurt ..
"Kya matlab tumahare Yuvi... haan Kunj.. mene bulaya tha kya use shadi mein..mene invite kiya tha kya use.. usko invitation tumhari family se gaya tha..if you remember"
"Twinkle me uski vajah se nahi ki vo shadi me..."
"Toa fir aur konsi vajah ho sakti hai... Kunj... mene tumko bataya hai ki mere aur Yuvi k bich kuch nahi hai.. but still.. tum muje kal bata rahe the.. about trust and all...aaj aise kyu bol rhe ho tum"
"Twinkle mera wo matlab nahi tha "
"Toa kya matlab tha haaan Kunj"
"Let me speak Twinkle damnitt..."his tone got a bit higher...
He realised and closed his eyes and calmed down..
She looked away sadly it was not even hours and here they were having a fight...
"Twinkle... m sorry muje pata hai muje aise nahi bolna chahiye tha... but muje gussa aa rha tha ki.. uski itni himmat hui ki vo shadi me kadam rakhe.. chahe kaise bhi hui ho... but akhir thi toa ye humari zindagi ka sabse imp moment.. and I hated that Yuvi aa ke use spoil kare... aur jis tarah se vo tumhe dekh raha tha... sirf me hi janta hu ki mene khud ko uska sar phodne se kaise roka..."
"Toa phod dena tha na.."she was still looking away...
"Huhh?"..he dint realise what she spoke
"Toa phod dena tha na ruke kyu the... itna hi gussa aa raha tha toa... kamse kam tum mujpar aise gussa karke muje toa hurt nahi karte... "...she had a gutty feeling inside her stomach that Kunj was jealous of Yuvi and he wanted to protect her...but still she maintained the hurt look on her face...
"Twinkle I m sorr"
"Its okay..." she stopped him from completing the sentence... as she dint like her husband all looking down and apologizing ...just the way he dint like her apologizing yesterday... she remembered as how he murmurred 'its okay ' before she could say sorry... even he must have felt the same way...

"Mr. Yuvi... aapke papers"
He smirked...and gestured Kapoor to get lost waving his hands...
"Aap aab toa mere parivar ko pareshan karna chhod denge na..?"
"Depend karta hai.. jab tak tum apna mu is mamle me bandh rakho.."
"By the way ... aap in papers ka karenge kya...??"
He just let out an evil laugh looking up at the sky...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Thanks for the back to back updates,
Amazing update loved it.
Twinj are together now. Eager to know what Yuvis plan is .
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Chapter 27

"I call the bed"
"Huhh...?"
"Mene kaha I call the bed... toa bed mera..."
Kunj just folded his hands and looked straight...at her... she felt her plan falling apart... with all those gutty feeling in her stomach and loosening of her knees she knew she should stay away from him and she dint want them to sleep on same bed... and then she remembered how he made it clear he was not going to give in to her last comdition... what if he is having thoughts about it today... he told he was not interested in her... but what if he had second thoughts.. after all she knew she was besutiful and sexy.. and the candles and decorations bed ... no lights flowers ... they would not be turning him off... how would she save herself... he is so strong... even her three four hands together would not make up to form his long large arms... and the most imp fact that... they were married... even she wasnt sure about herself... she had experienced that how she melted and lost sense.. when he was near... her...
"Twinkle tum shayad... 10 saal ki bachi hogi but me... nahi hu"
"Bachi mat bolo.muje... "she said pointing finger to him..
"Varna kya haan..."he said marching towardss her..."bachi hai tu... tabhi toa.. I call bed and all keh rhi hai..chote bache hi toa khilono k liye aise ladte hai.."
He was moving towardds her... that was it... she moved backeards..
"Piche kyu ja rahi ho..."he asked confusd..
She reached the beds dead end...and he was just inches away from her...
He bended... she closed her eyes..as she smelt his scent..which. was making her nauseus... but she needed to control...
"Kunj please..."
He was just going to grab the pillow for himself... but his spine had a shiver on her voice... then he realised what was she thinking... and her tone.. not conveying clearly wht she wanted...to go ahead or stop him...but he definitly needed to think straight or he would not be able to control...
He grabbed the pillow... and found something below it..
He tried to have a clear look at it...
And narrowed his eyes...
Twinkle realising there was no response from his side...she looked at his direction and quickly grabbed it.. and threw it away...in the dustbin...
But it was too late...he had seen what it was...
'Contraceptives' he thought confused...twinkle khud toa us din sharte rakh rahi thi... ki ye mat karna vo mat karna toa... ye yaha pe kyu layi... kya chal raha hai... uske dimag mein..
Twinkle reading the expression on his face ...
"Vo mein nahi vo... chinki..." and they both looked away...feeling awkward...Kunj realised her friend was always naughty and she must have handed it to her...
"Mein use chodungi nahi... pagal hai vo "
"Bhot zyda pagal"..he added
"Vo muje left side sone ki adat hai.".. and he marched towards.. circling the bed on the other side...
"Tum is bed pe nahi so sakte"
"Kyu?"
"Kyuki me so rhi hu is bed pe..."
"Like I care"...
"Tum apni biwi ki itni bhi baat nahi manoge"
"Twinkle apna drama apne pas rakho..
Tumko sona hai toa sovo muje koi problem nahi hai...but me bed pe hi sounga..."
"Haa haa.. tumhe toa mauka chahiye... akhir me itni sundar jo hu" she said it purposefully but with a teasing tone...
"Twinkle tu fir se... mene tuje kitni baar.."
"Offo Kunj sarna... maan bhi lo... ki muje dekh k tum apne aap pe kaabu nahi rakh pate..."even this counter pshychology of hers was not working on him... he was giving a smirk... back mocking her...'like Really'

"Vaise chinki aur bubbly aur maa kehti hai.. ki muje raat me laat marne ki bhot adat hai...ab acha thodi lagega... ki pati... apni hi biwi se suhagraat k din laat khaye..."she said innocently...
"Vo me sambhal lunga aur agar zarurat pade toa tumhare hi is dupatte se tumhare pair bandh dunga... now good night..."
Kunj thought he would handle it but Twinkle was all over him placing her hand... on his face.. her legs.. over his body.. and turning and twisting.. Kunj couldnt take it...and he got up..
"Twinkle ye tum kya kar rahi ho?"
"Kya hua Kunjj sone do na?"...she asked rubbing her eyes...
"Natak mat karo me achi tarah janta hu ki tumko koi neend nahi aa rhi... jaan buch k kar rahi ho tum ye sab..."
"Mene toa tumko warn kiya tha... ki muje ye adat hai.. tum hi man nahi rahe the"
He groaned and got up... he needed some air his nose was filled with the scent of the burning candles...
He left the room as twinkle giggled... and spread herself on the bed...
No matter how angry he would get but stilll he cared. He placed the 'do nit disturb' sign on the door.. as no one would enter the room till he returned..
He had some coffee and calmed his nerves...
Though she was doing it purposely her touch was not helping the emotions building up inside him... so he had to leave to get his cool...
As he returned... he forgot the room number... the keys were inside the room and the room number was on the keys...
How stupid of him... he smacked his head...
He questioned himself was it 405 or 407...
Then he remembered he placed the 'do not disturb' sign on the door... he found it on 405 he turned the knob and entered ...he saw the room was dark even the candles werent burning maybe she blew them off to sleep... and as he drifted to bed...he heard...
"Aa gaye tum ... kabse tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi..."as she moved her hands on his shoulders... he could not recognize the voice... it was all husky...
And before he could free himself... she kissed him on his cheek and then neck...he freed himself from her... as he was about to get off the bed...
The door again clicked and... the lights went ON..
The girl beside her...looked in shock towards the man who enetrred and towards.. him... and she started screaming...
Ohh Godd... could this night get any worse..!!!.''he thought...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
brilliant updates bhaiyya👏👏👏
kunj twinkle mesmerised by each other...oohhh😳😳😳
kunj again forgot the room number🤪
ab dekhna hai police aayega ya nahi😉😉
jaldi update do...aapki back 2 back updates ki wajah se na, mera patience system toot gayyi😆😆
thnx sooo much for these beautiful updates😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Nice updates.
What is Yuvi upto?
TwiNj suhaagraat has to be unique. Lol Kunj in a wrong room, this seems hilarious. Let's see what happens next.
Plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Awesome update joe 😊
Continue soon plz 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Amazing update. Loved it
Continue soon.plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow back to back updates
thanks for the updates
amazing updates
loved it
uv ki plan kya hai
what will happen to kunj ?

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