TwinJ FF:Blue Neighbourhood(NOTE on Pg22)

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Anjum

@Abhia2Twinj4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Hey meh darling !! I read it a long time back😃n even liked it 😳I even forgot that I haven't replied on this update yet😲maybe prolly bcoz i was travelling or on work🤔 sorry for that 😳

Well I'm so happy 😃that the 3 muskteers are back😎

Hoping that twinks bond grows more nicely with Kunj n yuvi😛...

Felt sad at kuvi emotional outburst😔...but noways !! Twinkle is coming back with them. . Hopefully things get sorted out !!

Waiting eagerly like bhukkad 😆for the next part 😳

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Shriti

@shraja

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Okay.. So I didn't read your story till now. I am gonna read and come back soon.

But meh.. Everything you said in ur note is so so true.

Being a writer, it is overwhelming to get comments be it positive or negative. And it really is annoying to get res which never get unresd back.

And I appreciate you raised a voice against it. 👏

Yeah its better to never comments rather than reserving it.

I am gradually becoming your fan. 👏😆

Shriti. ❤️

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Jambread3

@Jambread3

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

As much as I hate "res",I ended up doing the same thing so I'm sorry... I'll edit my comment and comment again once I'll read the whole story!
But well said homie! 👏
"Res" can be a pain.
#sorrynotsorry

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct
Resss😆
U knew the reason of lots of S.😃

I take the whole week to unres it.

Sorry M.

But I am sooo glad that atlast i finished reading all chapters.😊

At first the whole concept of the plot of the story is very much unique;I love it.

And I start the reading from Twinkle's Amritsar to NY journey and finish with NY to Amritsar (approximately,it's Delhi)journey.It's a whole circle of Twinkle's journey in life.

Twinkle is a free bird but her nature suppressed in Amritsar and it's surroundings and over of the top her family life and relationship with Yuvi in disguise manner;it's really painful to her.The roof space of college & specially Kunj was free air In her life in those days.

But after her escaping though I don't know I stamp it as escaping or not cause in my eyes it's not,whatever I want to say she freed herself from one kind of suicide and it is really blissful in her life.

Now she is completely a happy go lucky and confident persona.May be there is a baggage of past but I want that she face it and also overcome it.

Now i really want to see what is the next dish in plate.

So please update soon dear.😃

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Shaveerkti

@Shaveerkti

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti
Ress
My magician writer updated...😳
This chap/update was really a good one...

The break down...

Twinkle showing kunj her fav places & her life..👏

Then the times square...I think somewhere we all want to live life where no one judges is every now & then...the society would have been so nice & happy if the goossip-lovers didn't exist...

The vacation plan & twinkle giving tickets...-superbly penned down..

The flight...uno...Frankfrut...kunj...😳

Then yuvi-kunj talk...💔

Kunj's feeling when twinkle holds marnold's hand...-so my kunj...

The last part was icing on the cake...twinkle waiting at the door & holding kunj & yuvi's hand...The three musketeers...😛

They hadn't moved on and neither had she. It was a start--LOVED THIS LINE...

JUST LIKE THE LEGO WAS A MASTERPIECE SO IS UR WORD-WORK...MY MAGICIAN WRITER...😳

Extremely Sorry for being so late to unress...& upsetting u...

Love u..

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SweetSau

@SweetSau

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: SweetSau
Ress
Read it but can't comment right now not in the state to do soo.
But it was really very awesome!
Loved it a lot!
Will try to give you a detailed comment soonish!
Love
Sayli

Unress

First of all a very very big sorry.

I know I am horrible and a don't know what else but am the worst person ever, even after days of you putting that note up am unress right now! Meri Jaisi gandi ladki mai hi!

I know whatever I will say now will only seem like reasons and stupidity but can't help it.

This chapter was simply awesome but it just opened up some of the feelings that I am trying hard to bury deep down in the soil.

Do you know why I love both this and storm in our souls because both of I am having the same emotions Twinkle is having in the stories. Sirf is story mai the thing is dhokha aur vishwas ghaath jinhone kiya hai woh family nahi thankfully but the friends that I trusted and loved unhone kiya hai woh bhi do baar.

Oh shit I shifted from the main topic!

Back to it!

Twinkle ne kunj se expect kiya tha that at least he would understand her case but he said those unforgettable words. It's soo true words are an arrow once released cannot be taken back. Unka ghaav bhar jaata hai but the marks remain for a life time.

I really loved how Twinkle explained Kunj why she loved the States and living there for almost 12 years I can completely agree with her. Nobody judges you there unlike the people in India(especially the gossiping ladies who just need one reason to start critising you on any topic or any action that you do!)

Twinkle ne kunj ko maaf kar diya and they all are coming to India visit ke liye hi sahi!

But why do I feel that this visit is going to change everything?! Maybe may be wrong but India mai or on the trip to India somethings are going to happen that will change the life of twinj.

Anyway I really loved the chapter.

Once again a sorry but I was not in the state to really to comment still am not but guilt khayi jaa rahi thi soo once again am very sorry.

Hope you continue soon

Lots of love

Sayli