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Posted: 9 years ago
Gone
Dead
Hell...dude...i have no words...i donno what to say
There are nowords again...sorry
But u know how much i love ur stories and ur work
So u get the fact that in speechless...AGAIN
Thanks to u
Oh nvs

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..queen..

Gone
Dead
Hell...dude...i have no words...i donno what to say
There are nowords again...sorry
But u know how much i love ur stories and ur work
So u get the fact that in speechless...AGAIN
Thanks to u
Oh nvs

Hahaha...that's okay. I completely get what you are trying to say.
And the fact that I render you speechless is a big compliment.
Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh oh oh!
An update
My spot
I'll get back to you asap 😎
RES
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Posted: 9 years ago
this was perfection once again u ddi it
my heart was racing as they urned the video call on
the surprise kunj walking 50 steps was perfect
im so proud of tiwinkle
hated usha
god this is such a perfect story y
i jut lovve u for penning this unique story
thankyou so much u r a brilliant writer

loved the update continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok so I finally got around to commenting on this and I'm so sorry that my laziness took over and I didnt search for this thread earlier. But better late than never right?

I absolutely adore this series. I remember when you wrote the first part and I instantly took a liking to it because it gave me Paper Towns/Looking for Alaska (by John Green) vibes. Its such a fresh yet deep concept and Twinj's relationship in this so adorable!

I loved this update, thank you for making it long! I could feel myself about to cry at the trio video call. Please dont play with my heart like that, reunions are my biggest weakness in stories. The tears of happiness cant help themselves. Seriously other than that, the whole thing was such a pleasure to read. I'm glad they found each other again. My heart.


Please update soon. Seriously this is one of my favourites.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

this was perfection once again u ddi it
my heart was racing as they urned the video call on
the surprise kunj walking 50 steps was perfect
im so proud of tiwinkle
hated usha
god this is such a perfect story y
i jut lovve u for penning this unique story
thankyou so much u r a brilliant writer

loved the update continue soon

Haww...you are making me blush!😳😳
Thanks Ian, Really Glad you are liking it!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

Ok so I finally got around to commenting on this and I'm so sorry that my laziness took over and I didnt search for this thread earlier. But better late than never right?


I absolutely adore this series. I remember when you wrote the first part and I instantly took a liking to it because it gave me Paper Towns/Looking for Alaska (by John Green) vibes. Its such a fresh yet deep concept and Twinj's relationship in this so adorable!

I loved this update, thank you for making it long! I could feel myself about to cry at the trio video call. Please dont play with my heart like that, reunions are my biggest weakness in stories. The tears of happiness cant help themselves. Seriously other than that, the whole thing was such a pleasure to read. I'm glad they found each other again. My heart.


Please update soon. Seriously this is one of my favourites.

Hey Tranquility!! Yup better late than never...but I am glad you dropped by to comment😆
And pssst...its a secret but I was like 5%inspired by Paper Towns.
And coming to the say, I am really really really happy that you like it but unfortunately this story will have me playin with your heart sometimes, but I think it will be worth the anguish...maybe😉
Thanks a ton, hun
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dude I'm sorry it took me so long to finally comment but I blame you for giving us such a fabulous fabulous long update that I had to read it twice because it was just so good. You made me cry, laugh and squeal with this update! I think maybe because I could literally imagine the walk in Central Park, or see the exhibit myself because I had one in high school haha, and just all the New York vibes hit me right in the feels! Twinkle enveloping Kunj in a hug, one of those neck wala hugs was such a GREAT way to start off such a fantastic update! And I love love love how you should the initial awkwardness between the two because after being separated so long, there was that hesitancy but desire to spill out everything. Seriously, the whole awkward thingy was captured greatly! And then ahhh their shared sandwiches is what made it all snap back to normal <3 I loved how you chose that moment because it was so perfect to their memories.

I have to say my favorite part tho was when Kunj and Twinkle we're hauled up in her room and Kunj was fumbling to call Yuvraj and the anxiety and nervousness and YUVI's entire reaction man. You touched a whole lot of cords of my heart lol. That's when I cried because these three faced so much together and were separated because of the same blue neighborhood they were a part of. So now seeing them connect in different parts of the world, damn it was so beautiful!

I AM SO PROUD OF TWINKLE! Like you could not have made a better story for her like I'm in love!!! And bro Sherri Hill is gorgeous lmao! Prom dress shopping from there last year was like a dream! Omg her friends and the apartment thing is sooo cute and another dream haha, how awesome would that be! I loved how you described all the decorations, it was so Twinkle!

I just love everything about this story and I know we JUST got a looong update but I can't wait for the next one :P I truly can't wait to see how Twinj's relationship develops in NYC <3 beautiful, beautiful update!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Dude I'm sorry it took me so long to finally comment but I blame you for giving us such a fabulous fabulous long update that I had to read it twice because it was just so good. You made me cry, laugh and squeal with this update! I think maybe because I could literally imagine the walk in Central Park, or see the exhibit myself because I had one in high school haha, and just all the New York vibes hit me right in the feels! Twinkle enveloping Kunj in a hug, one of those neck wala hugs was such a GREAT way to start off such a fantastic update! And I love love love how you should the initial awkwardness between the two because after being separated so long, there was that hesitancy but desire to spill out everything. Seriously, the whole awkward thingy was captured greatly! And then ahhh their shared sandwiches is what made it all snap back to normal <3 I loved how you chose that moment because it was so perfect to their memories.

I have to say my favorite part tho was when Kunj and Twinkle we're hauled up in her room and Kunj was fumbling to call Yuvraj and the anxiety and nervousness and YUVI's entire reaction man. You touched a whole lot of cords of my heart lol. That's when I cried because these three faced so much together and were separated because of the same blue neighborhood they were a part of. So now seeing them connect in different parts of the world, damn it was so beautiful!

I AM SO PROUD OF TWINKLE! Like you could not have made a better story for her like I'm in love!!! And bro Sherri Hill is gorgeous lmao! Prom dress shopping from there last year was like a dream! Omg her friends and the apartment thing is sooo cute and another dream haha, how awesome would that be! I loved how you described all the decorations, it was so Twinkle!

I just love everything about this story and I know we JUST got a looong update but I can't wait for the next one :P I truly can't wait to see how Twinj's relationship develops in NYC <3 beautiful, beautiful update!

You read it twice!!😳😳Thank you!!!
Aww...I am glad I could evoke such emotions from you!!
Lol, I don't know why but Tomato Halloumi sandwich is my fav and I just had to share that with TwiNj😆
And believe me I was shaking too when I wrote the Yuvi-twinkle video call because I know how overwhelming it can be to meet friends after soo long...plus Yuvi is like my second baby (though TeI has ruined his chances at redemption)
And The whole apartment thing was just to show Twinkle and her creativity and people like Marnold and candy and wayne you meet.
PS: Defo want to hear more about your art exhibition!!

And I wanna give you a long tight hug for this amazing comment!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved it! the new twinkle sounds amazing. I liked it how she hugged Kunj but Yuvi was still there. It was a fantastic update so many emotions. Kunj trying to figure out the new twinkle was cute. Cant wait for more continue soon

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