Twinj SS : Heartless( cllge life) ch3 pg5

hi! guys this is me annaya and yeah this is my official debut at this forum. although I'm commenting on many topics but i myself have never introduced myself. so plzzz enjoy this is my first work in this forum. so plzz tell me frankly what you think about it!! love ya ;)
<font size="4">PROLOGUE</font>
Twinkle that was her name...yeah that girl who has f**ked up my mind.
Musibat bankar peeche padi hai. Pata nahi...I don't like her but I feel a connection with her.
Like something electric happens when I see her...
Twinkle: kunj...ahhh! what are you doing here?? " she asked while groaning...Kunj: I'm gonna destroy you slowly and mercilessly... " he said while caging her in his arms
"just watch out sweetheart" he said with a smirk.
what is kunj upto...what does heean by destroying her? will twinj's love withstand this turbulence or they...
<font size="4">FIND OUT!</font>
okay i know it was super lame...but i can promise this story will be interesting. do comment and drop your reviews. For PM's buddy me. I'll be updating tomorrow. Till then bye guys, love ya'all :) and yeah keep reading


<font size="3">Index</font>
Prologue page 1
Chapter 1 page 1
chapter 2 page 3
Chapter 3 page 5

wow amazing prologue dear

Interesting prologue . Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

interesting dear

i am very excited about this

Chapter 1[/SIZESIZE]
Delhi
" achcha maa an chalta hoon". His parents emotionally bid him adieu. His brother anant got emotional and said," kunj hamesha khush rehna air apna maksad mat bhoolna".with that kunj left the sarna mansion. And left for his college.
Mumbai- Taneja House
"Arrey twinkle tera letter aaya hai" leela screamed. Twinkle opened the letter and shouted" maa paa I got selected yesss!".
Soon twinkle was ready to leave. Rt said " beta take care and jao apna sapna poor a karo".
Princeton Institute of Technology and Sciences - Mumbai
[SIZE=2]Kunj's POV
I need to find her coz she has to pay...pay for all wrong... Suffer till eternity. My trail of thoughts were disturbed by the arrival of coffee. As I was drinkingy phone dropped to the floor. As I bent to pick it up I heard a sweet voice which did something strange to me." Chinky I'm so excited to be at PITS, I always wanted to be here & now who wants to live in dreams when reality is much more better".
I was immediately hooked. I tried to find the magnificent owner of this voice. During all this I forgot I was still slouching towards the floor and soon I grabbed my phone then I saw...LEGS! Legs as well as the voice. Legs led to waist and with that I was constantly hearing the same exquisite voice. Waist led to chest...woah! Kunj control urself! U ain't allowed to look there. This sudden realization struck me up and I saw her lips...synchronizing the words of the voice and I understood she was the girl I was...ogling. Then something struck me and I glanced at her again,...all my senses were lost but gained... Everything was weird. I want her but I can't want her. She us happy but has to be sad.I looked away as soon as she glanced at me. I closed my eyes and remembered what I had to do, what I was in for...I can't be distracted coz SHE'S THE GIRL!!!!!!!!!

hi guys I'm back a little early than promosed but still thats a good thing. i know it was very bad with the plot and was poorly wrttn. i added humour in this chapter coz sooon the story would become intense. want to find about what kunj wants...keep reading. and yeah drop ur views and suggest a good name for the story. for pms buddy me. till the next chapter ...bye!!! :)

Yay! I am sure no one here is gonna complain about an early update..

nice update dear 😃

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Yay! I am sure no one here is gonna complain about an early update..

That being said

I am more and more hooked to this story

How much more interesting can it get?

The way he stopped his tain of thoughts by saying he isn't supposed to look there had me busrt out laughing

So he ks here for revenge.

I really wanna know more

Update fast

Thank you
so u so much ragini!!!! That means a lot and when ur gonna update
The heart brings you back???? I love love love this story so so so muchhh!!!!!!!!
Thanks for such an appreciation... It motivates me a lot!!!!
And yeah about the not looking there thing...that was just for humour coz story's gonna get intense!!!!!
Yeah I'll update the ch2 today itself!!!
Love you!

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

nice chapter
loved it <3

Thank u so much jerry!!!!! I'll update soon and yeah I'll be waiting for u to review it.
Just wanna say ur such a sweetheart!!! Love u :) 😃