TwiNj 3s[3Shot]:Dhokha Aur Vishwas*LastPart Pg12 5/3/2016*

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

loved it

felt sad for twinkle and also for kunj

poor twinkle is heart broken

continue soon

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zaara610

@zaara610

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved it..well written..

Eagerly waiting for your next update

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

So well written very emotional.OH my ,poor Twinkle so heart broken.

Please update soon can't wait to read what is Kunj's justification.

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Haww mujhe laga itni tareef ki hai toh next part jaldi mil jayega. Saare plan pe paani daal diya. Lol
But i am sure joh bhi likhoge achha hi hoga. And i love such scenes. Mujhe bada maza ata hai jab aisa kuch hota hai.

Teaser coming up😆

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Duumps
So well written very emotional.OH my ,poor Twinkle so heart broken.
Please update soon can't wait to read what is Kunj's justification.

Thank you!

actually there wont be a justification,it will be a confession!

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: priyanvs
loved it
felt sad for twinkle and also for kunj
poor twinkle is heart broken
continue soon

Thank you very much!

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Perwinkle
Mind-blowing start.
So heartbreaking yet so amazingly well written.
I cannot wait till you write the second part.
I wonder what sort of justification Kunj has.
Once again, such a beautiful plot line👏

It will be shocking😆

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

-Teaser-

Twinkle:Why you did this to me kunj,I knew our relation was not perfect but I never thought you will do this,I always thought that kunj can never hurt me knowingly,he will never try to be close to any girl other than me,can you justify what you did kunj?

Kunj:I don't know twinkle how can ask for forgiveness but Cannot justify what I did,I know it was wrong I just got carried away in the heat of the moment,me and maya were so close that we lost our control,But believe me twinkly nothing happened more than what you saw!

After that in the deserted road echoed the sound of a tight slap,recieved by kunj and given by twinkle.

Twinkle:I hate you kunj I hate you damn it!

kunj dropped to his knees just kept saying I am so sorry twinkle!

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Intresting teaser .
Kunj actually did try to cheat her. I thought she misunderstood him in the begining.
Do continue soon.

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: hailly
Intresting teaser .
Kunj actually did try to cheat her. I thought she misunderstood him in the begining.
Do continue soon.

thank you!

In the full update the entire picture will be clear!