TwiNj 3s[3Shot]:Dhokha Aur Vishwas*LastPart Pg12 5/3/2016*

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

yes he did got carried away after he is a human and every human gets weak at certain point of thier life!🥱
The updatw will be more shocking,wait n watch😆

Thats how u try and make me feel better? That's scary.

But the whole idea of getting carried away doesn't go down well with me. Sure you can havw some fun but to go to that extent is too much.

ab toh i want an update soon. Mujhse wait nahi hota

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Can't wait for the rest!!!!!

Amazing😃😃

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Can't wait for the rest!!!!!
Amazing😃😃

Thank you !

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
so intense.waiting

Update will be up soon!

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Vimal M

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

This plot reminded me of Kis Desh Me He Mera Dil.

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: VIMAL.M
This plot reminded me of Kis Desh Me He Mera Dil.

How?😃

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Vimal M

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

How?😃

There the scenario was diff.The vamp will make Prem drink too much.Prem will fal asleep.Then she will also sleep by his side.Heer will come n see this.She will think Prem N Anvesha slept together.Prem will see Heer.Then they will have MU.

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

Update will be up soon!

when u will update drabble?

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Scarlet Wizard

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

I am posting another teaser as It will take me sometime to update,I have started drafting the chapter but as my college has started It will take me time to complete the chapter,as it is going to be a long update.

So here you go with another Teaser.

Kunj:I don't know twinkle how can ask for forgiveness but Cannot justify what I did,I know it was wrong I just got carried away in the heat of the moment,me and maya were so close that we lost our control,But believe me twinkly nothing happened more than what you saw!

Twinkle:Kunj today you broke al the trust I had on you,I was devastated when I saw you with maya in the room but still some part of my brain and heart kept saying that It maybe a misunderstanding,maybe there was something else But you just finished everything kunj,everything.

Kunj:Twinkle please listen to me I know I did a mistake but please give me a chace twinkle.

Twinkle:If I would have done the same thing then you would have forgiven me kunj.

The thought of his twinkle with someone else made his blood boil and he shouted,I would have killed that bas***d and you twinkle,if you ever did this he said holding her by her shoulders very tightly.

Edited by .MysticalWaters - 9 years ago