Twinj OS: Do you love me?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do you love me" Kunj asked
"Yeh kesa sawal hain" Twinkle said trying to avoid the question
"It's a simple question" Kunj explained
"Pata nahi"
"Kia matlab Pata nahi humari shaadi ko almost saal honay wala hain and you are still not sure" Kunj said
"Kunj I need some time especially after what happened with Yuvi"
"Okay you have a week I am going to London on a business trip" Kunj told her
"Aur tum mujhay abhi bata rahay ho idiot"
"I will wait for your confession" Kunj said and walked out of the room. He hadn't meant to ask her directly. He just wanted to know if she had the same feeling as him. Girls were so compelx sometimes he failed to understand them. Love was something she ceased to believe in after Yuvi. She had foolishly given him her heart and he had played with his feelings. Kunj came back from the gym exhausted and immediately lied down on the bed. Twinkle knew he was hurt as he hadn't hugged or kissed her as he normally would. Sometimes he would forcefully drag her to bed but today he did nothing. Making sure he was a sleep Twinkle lied down beside him. She stroked his hair with her hands.
"Kunj tumhay kesay bataon kay may tum say kitni mohbaat karti hun. Aur ab main, main apne aap se darne lagi hoon. Kisi se mohabbat insaan ko bohot kamzor kar deti hai, bohot bebas, majboor. Aur mujhe inn saari cheezon se nafrat hai. Lekin uske bawajood, tum meri zindagi ka markaz bante jaa rahe ho. Tum mujhse poochte ho ki mujhe tumhari kya baat achchhi lagti hai. Main tumse yeh kaise kahoon, ki mujhe tumhari kaunsi baat achchhi nahin lagti? Apne irdh-girdh tumhara ghumna. Mere wajood se naa hatne wali, tumhari gehri nazrein. Tumhari har waqt ki tawajjo. Tumhara jaan chhidakne wala har andaaz.. har baar. Kaash tum say yay sab kehna ashan hota par meray liay yay buhat muskil hain"
Twinkle said and shortly after fell asleep
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awww, nice one. Twinkle's dialogue at the end👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
omg this was so adorable. such a beautiful confession. i loved it
i want to know more how will Kumj react listening all these. please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its just wow 😃it's all written so amazingly in such a beautiful language
Hey plz do continue 😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Well written.
Loved twinkle's confession...😊
If possible can you please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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''MERE WAJOOD SE NA HATNE WAALI ,TUMHARI GEHRE NAZREIN"" ----THIS LINE REALLY BLEW ME ❤️
LOVED HER CUTE CONFESSION😳
LOVED UR FAB WRITING SKILLS
DO CONT IF U CAN ...I WANT TO SEE KUNJS REACTION TO ALL THIS
ALL THE BEST👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing dialogues and mind blowing confession.
This is totally awesome.
Please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Loved the language. Please continue this :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, this is not fair.. Leave us on cliffhanger..plz plz continue
Want to read it more..now want Kunj reaction after this

And this part is superb.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it... Such a cute one
Do continue writing many more
Twinkle's dialogue at the end was the highlight

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