Twinj OS: Jail can also be heaven with you by my side.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone.
How are you all?
I know my exams are going on and my yesterday's(saturday) exam was horrible. And the update was fine. So wanted this to happen. I know tjis will not happen but to refresh my kind wrote it.
Enjoy reading


TWINJ OS: Jail can also be heaven with you by my side


Twinkle was shivering talking to yuvi. The thought of loosing kunj scared her to death.
She life less exited her room lost in her thoughts, she bumped into her mother.
Leela was shocked to see her daughter like this. She held her shoulders "twinkle kya hua? Twinkle bol na?"
Twinkle came out of her thoughts "maa kunj ki jaan khatre mein hai. Mujhe kaise bhi kar ke kunj ke sath rehna hoga."
Leela replied "pagal ho gayi hai? Vo log tujhe vaha kaise rehne denge? Or uski jaan kyu khatre mein hai?"
Twinkle told her everything and told her "maa mujhe rokna mat par aaj main kunj ko akela nahi chod sakti. Pata nahi vo log uske sath kya karenge. Aap plz lawyer ko keh ke kal zamanat ke papers lete ana. Main ja rahi hu"
Leela said "ruk main bhi chalti hu"
Twinkle didn't had energy to argue with her mother.

(Guys i really don't know the rules and regulations of jail or police station. And this is a fiction so if there is any mistake plz forgive and dont find logics in how she landed up with him and all)

Twinkle and leela reached police station and inquired for kunj, inspector was not there havaldar was there. Havaldar "kal ana madam. Visiting time khatam"
Twinkle said "plz mera andar jana bht zruri hai. Mjhe jail mein apne pati ke sath rehna hai"
Havaldar replied sarcastically "log yaha se bhr jate hai or tujhe andar jana hai. Halva hai police station? Jao yaha se"
Leela placed a thousand rupee note in his pocket. Constable's eyes shined with money. He said "ma'am aap unse mil sakte ho lekin andar nahi ruk sakte"
Twinkle first time thanked the corruption, because of bribe she can be with him.
She removed her ear rings and placed in his hands. "Gold ke hai. Ab toh ja sakti hu?"
Constable said "slap me. I ll arrest you in that charge"
Leela was shocked seeing twinkle giving her earrings to him. "Main paise de rahi hu na twinkle. Tu kyu...?"
Twinkle cut her in between "nahi maa yeh meri ladai hai." Saying so slapped the constable not too hard on his cheek. But the lady constable who didn't know the matter came to them and slapped twinkle hard on cheek making her fall on floor.
Leela "twinkle. She than turned to lady constable how dare you? Apki himat kaise hui?"
Lady constable was about to bark at her but constable came in view and handled the situation. He said to leela "tum jao main dekh lunga. Abhi jail mein dalta hu ise"
Constable dragged her and threw her in jail where kunj was there.

Kunj was sitting head hung down, he was feeling guilty for slapping twinkle, he thought to himself "what is wrong with you kunj? Tune twinkle pe hath uthaya? How could you? Naraz hai vo mujhse tabhi ayi bhi nahi vo. Kher hope so vo thik ho vaha. Or bebe bhi thik ho. Maine uspe bharosa nahi kia lekin usne mujhpe bharosa kia. Kaise bhul gaya ki bebe ko jitna pyar main karta hu utna hi vo karti hai."
Police had beaten him on demand of anita. But kunj didn't felt the pain of hitting he felt the pain he gave to twinkle.
He wished he could see her, and as if Baba Ji listen his prayers, she arrived in front of her.

Twinkle's lip was bleeding because of hard slap on her cheek. She got up and saw kunj.
Tears slipped down her eyes seeing kunj in such situation. She didn't saw the wounds as his head was down. He didnt even looked up.
She went to him and sat infront of him.
She said with tears in her eyes 'kunj"
Kunj shot his head up listening to her voice. He had wounds on cheeks, lips, forehead.
As soon as twinkle saw this she was shocked, she cupped his face "kunj. Yeh.. Yeh .. Kisne mara? Kyu mara inhone" she stammered, already the thought of losing him made her vulnerable and on top of that his this condition shook her soul.
Kunj replied holding her hand which held his face, he saw fear in her eyes, that fear which he saw in Goa when yuvi left him in water
"Twinkle tu yaha kaise? Or tu itni ghabrai hui kyu hai?" He asked cupping her face. He than saw blood bear her lip. "Or yeh khoon kaise?"
Twinkle cried "kunj tum thik ho na? Kunj.."
Kunj just hugged her to calm her down. Twinkle clenched his white shirt tightly as if she will loosen her grip and he will vanish.
Kunj again asked worried "kya hua twinkle? Tu itna dari hui kyu hai? Or tu yaha kaise or kyu ayi?"
Twinkle just sobbed in his arms, kunj was now getting worried.
Kunj Again asked "tu thik hai na twinkle?"
Twinkle just spoke "kunj tumhe kuch ho gaya toh main mar jaungi. Main us yuvi se shadi nahi karna chahti. Kunj plz mujhe chodke mat jaio"
Kunj was shocked to hell, she was literally shivering while speaking that lines. He was worried, why will yuvi marry her. He supported yuvi but the thought of him marrying her rose his anger.
Kunj broke the hug and asked "twinkle kya hua? Bol mujhe. Mujhe kuch nahi hua."
Twinkle shivered and fumbled while speaking "yuvi ka phone aya. Usne mujhe kaha yeh tumhari akhri rat hai or phir vo.. Vo.. Muj..hse shadi karega... Kunj kunj. Mujhe nahi karni usse shadi...kunj"
Kunj was shocked, yuvi is alright? Did he threatened her? He asked her "tu yaha kaise ayi? Tu hamare ghar ki bahu hai, tujhe yaha ana shaubha nahi deta"
Twinkle told her everything and said 'tujhe kuch ho jata toh bahu banke kya karti."
He was amazed just to make sure he was fine she did so much and got slapped by that lady.
He just hugged her "jab tak tu sath hai mere mujhe kuch ho jaye. Pagal hai. Kisi ki itni himat jo tujhse panga le" he joked tried to make her laugh but twinkle was very scared of all the happenings, she just kept her head on his just like a baby and sat in his lap, listening to his heartbeats making sure that he was fine. Tears still coming down her cheeks.
Kunj felt a stab in his heart seeing her bold syapa queen so scared, he promised to himself. People who are responsible for this state of her will pay hard.
After 5 minutes, kunj finally broke the hug and said "us lady ki himat kaise hui tujhe marne ki?"
Twinkle spoke "kyu vo haq sirf tera or anita aunty ka hai?"
Kunj felt the sarcasm, his grip on her shoulder loosened "i am sorry twinkle. Pata nahi maine kaise tujhpe hath uthaya. Plz mujhse maaf karde. Vaise dekh tere Babaji ne mujhe saza dedi." He said showing his wounds.
Twinkle saw hurt in his eyes, she sushed him "aise mat bolo kunj. Unhone itna kyu mara tujhe?"
Kunj said "kyuki main yeh admit nahi kar raha tha ki maine vo sab kia. So unhone mujhe mara. Maine vo sab nahi kia twinkle"
Twinkle replied "janti hu. Bht dard ho raha hai?"
Kunj replied getting angry "is ka toh nahi par us thapad ka dard zarur hai jo maine tujhe mara. Tjhe marne se pehle main mar kyu nahi gaya"
Twinkle kept her hand on his lips "plz marne ki bat mat kar."
She placed feather light kisses on each wound and said "jab mujhe bachpan mein chot lagtj thi toh maa aise hi kiss karke thik karti thi. Tera pain kuch kam hua?"
Kunj said "tujhe dekhkar vaise bhi dard nahi ho raha." He wiped the droplet of blood from her lips. And placed 3 kissed on that cheek and just touched his lips with hers to sooth her pain.
Twinkle blushed and spoke "teri maa bhi aise karti thi?"
Kunj replied cutely "nahi meri biwi aise karti hai. Toh maine socha use bhi kardu"

Kunj than sat with his back taking support of wall and opened his legs for twinkle to take her seat.
Twinkle half sat half laid between his legs resting her head on his chest.
She was thinking of what would have happened if kunj was not with her. The mere thought sent a shiver down her spine which was felt by kunj.
Kunj knowing her state hugged her tightly and spoke "kuch nahi hua mujhe twinkle. Or jab tak main tere sath hu koi tujhe nahi kuch keh sakta"
Twinkle just laid in his arms feeling him.
Kunj and twinkle slept in eachothers arms, feeling the heaven in a place like jail.

So how was it?
Hope you guys liked it. No yuvraj's truth because it was a twinj update.
Love Vish❤️

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priyanvs thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os
just loved very much
i just wish it would happen in the show
but i know it would never happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just loved it. Too awesome...
Kash cvs mein thoda dimag hota..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, this was amazing! Now you have me hoping and wishing for so much more in the show that I know we won't get. But you did such a great job that I was able to envision it all! The way you had Twinkle bring up the slap and their little reconciliation was just adorable 😊 thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is lovely.
Such a cute TwiNJ scene could visualize it happening in the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amzing and well written OS. I loved it. I hope some elements are shown from here on the show, namely Kunj reretting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved loved loved this...
You have completely raised my standards of expectations on what should happen on the show now.
This was great, loved how you managed to balance the humor and the seriousness of the situation.👏
And the little hugs and kisses part was so cute.😳
Not to mention the "slap ka haq" wala line..😆
Great job 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg yar awesome 👏
Loved itt compelety al the scenes are sweet beautiful and caring...
Serious one's are also good... mindblowing 😳
I just wish something like this would happen in serial too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo sweet yaar...
hayyeee the kisses was the best part of all... 😳
beautiful update...even though there were mistakes u made them amazing by expressing ur feelings for TwiNj...
do write more...
luv ya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one
want to read more and more ❤️but its an os🥺

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