New Twinj SS (Ch 2 on Pg 4)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first SS. I love TEI and Twinj and I was upset seeing the promo but I was thinking about what could happen. So here is my take on today's part and then continuation

*Kunj has slapped Twinkle*
K: twinkle, tumhara Dimagh kahn he? (Where is your mind?) what were you thinking? Everyday there is a new siyappa because of you
T: Nahi, kunj, me Bebe ko kuch Nahi Kiya( I did nothing to Bebe)
K: bus! Twinkle bus! Me Pehle bi tumhe akari warning detchukan ab or nahi (enough twinkle enough! I already gave you a last warning nothing more)
T: Kunj meri baato sunho (Kunj atleast listen to him)
Bebe(B): puttar Twinkle kuch nahi Kiya (twinkle did nothing)
K: Bus Bebe kitni bar Twinkle ki support karogi (enough Bebe how many times will you support Twinkle)
B: nahi Kunj puttar
T: Kunj *crying*
K: Ab iss baat ko hum Katam karo and party or focus karo (for now let's end this topic and focus on the party) and we will talk about this when we go home
T&B: Teeka hai
With no other option Bebe left with Kunj
T (to herself): I can't believe Kunj mujhe thappad Mara (slapped me). I have to show him that I did not push Bebe while running after UV. And UV ka sach? (And UV's truth?). I need to reveal that, but I need proof first

Twinkle meets w/ Sid and Roshni of JR and Leela. They discuss about how to reveal Yuvi's truth. Twinkle tells them how Te recording she sent to Kunj's phone didn't go through be has Yuvi broke her phone. Leela tells her that she has found Yuvi's phone and he has the video. Sid: hum issko use karna hi hoga, Yuvi ka sach kolne ke liya ( we have to use this video to reveal Yuvi's truth)
Roshni: idea! We can has the plasma screen tv in the party hall to reveal it
T,L,S,&R together: ok plan is made we have to carry it through today or Yuvi and Anita's plan will work

After cutting cake everyone is sitting down to watch performances. Twinkle, Kunj, and Yuvi sit next to each other but Kunj refused to look at Twinkle which made her feel sad. Yuvi seeing all of this decided to use it as his advantage.
Yuvi(Y): *in twinkles ear* Dekho tumhara pati ko (look at your husband) he doesn't he want to look at you because he doesn't believe you. What marriage is there without belief. But, I love you twinkle and I would never do this to you. Chodo Kunj ko( leave Kunj)
T: Chup Yuvi
Kunj looks at twinkle but before he can say anything Sid and Roshni take the stage and wish Twinkle Happy Birthday

To Be Continued

Note: the order is kinda different. Leela has already reconciled with Twinkle. Then Bebe falls. Then they cut the cake. And the the parts after are fully my imagination

I know there was no Twinj portions in this specific one but the SS is about the reveal and what happens after. And how Twinj and Yuvi feel and their actions.

I don't speak Hindi so it's probably bad so I wrote the translations as well. I am still writing so I do t how many portions there are. Please give your comments because I value them and tell me if I should continue or not. Thanks
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lovelysweet thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start
U should write more
Continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I actually liked this. And let me tell you, for someone whose not well off in hindi, u nailed it! It was actually spot on.
And lovely start.. Looking forward to it..
Do keep writing. I'm already eager to find out what happens next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice 😊continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
continue soon ...
Eagerly waiting for the next update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start...Really urs is nice...much better than what cv's did...pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is wonderful please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
i liked it
pls continue soon
ShivaliShaji thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow LOVED IT'
Am i a bad person for wanting to kick both Yuvi And KUnj in the face?
Please continue
and that too soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

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